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Reviews for Rainy Day

By : Queen1973
  • From Tsuzu on June 20, 2007
    This was written well. Just the word Wish. there is no h at the beginning. Just thouht you should know. hehe. All in all I loved the story! ^______^
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  • From ANON - Arasoi on January 08, 2007

    Re: Nameless and the review.

    While the "Nameless" reviewer was very rude and has obviously forgotten his or her manners, I noticed the mistakes he or she mentioned, as well. It's not a matter of Word- you can't trust Word, as it will often tell you to change something in a way that will make it incorrect. It also doesn't correct you when you spell a word right, but use the wrong word (like when you used "breath" when you meant "breathe"- both were spelled correctly, you just picked the wrong word). You also jump tenses occasionally, which can be very jarring.

    Betas and proofreading can not be replaced with Word alone. And if this isn't your native language, it's even more important. Excellent job, btw, writing a whole fic in a language that isn't your original. That's something most of us couldn't do...

    So, besides the usage mistakes, it was a cute little PWP. Sanzou was a little OOC, but not by much (I've seen far, far worse), so it didn't really bother me. I do hope you'll keep writing, and that my advice will be received well and didn't upset you.
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  • From ANON - someone on January 03, 2007
    i loved the story. Sanzo was lovely ;)
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  • From ANON - Karly on December 16, 2006
    Wonderful, well written--especially since English isn't your mother language. Also, the interaction is very real.
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  • From ANON - fuzzybunnytoo on December 13, 2006
    This fic was written so very well, it just flowed and you could just go right along with the movement and feel like you had been ****** , too. Now if I just had someone too cuddle with i would be one happy camper. English may not be your first language but sex is definatlly your first language. Hot, Hot ,Hot....and so very sweet at the same time which you don't find often. I really enjoyed this fic and put it on my re-read list. You know the one where you just got to have a "good" fic to read. After thiinking about it I think you need to had out cuddle-buddies to go along with the fic. Great Idea hun?
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  • From MissingKitsune47 on November 25, 2006
    nice, hot story. keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - KakashiSanzo5790 on October 30, 2006
    YAY!!!!!
    this is DEFINITELY a fic to read and reread a thousand times over! ^.^
    i absolutely LOVED this fic!
    im extremely sad that its already over though...T.T...what can i say?....i love my gojyoxsanzo yaoi! ^.^
    anyway....loved it!...love you for writing it!...youre a kick ass writer!...cant wait to read more fics from you!
    hope you write more soon!
    ~KakashiSanzo5790~ ^.^
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  • From ANON - DrkDreamer on October 30, 2006
    This is just lovely - makes me yearn for a rainy day. And a kappa....
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  • From ANON - nameless on October 30, 2006
    *reads all the other reviews* How can you possibly take some of those seriously? OMG SQUEE!! Update or I'll die? God..I think some 12 year olds were reading your fic and got pimples. Maybe they didn't remember it's ADULT fanfiction. *shakes head*

    The story itself was ok. Not good. Just ok. It was pretty sappy here and there. I did manage to read the whole thing. I think if you do write more. You can do better. I look forward to see what your going to do with this.

    Nice spelling mistakes. *snorts in disgust* Doesn't ANYONE spell check anymore?

    Seriously though. Do please spell check next time. It makes it a better read.
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  • From ANON - KakashiSanzo5790 on October 25, 2006
    YAY!
    OMFG!
    thats was soooooooooo fucking awesome!
    i love this story sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much!
    i dont want it to end...not yet anyway.....*sighs*..T.T
    youre such a tease though...god...it was just getting good! ^.- (lol)
    well....i cant wait for the last chapter.....im absolutely DYING to read it!
    (sorry im such a pain in the ass! ^.^)
    please try to update soon!
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  • From ANON - KakashiSanzo5790 on October 11, 2006
    T.T
    alright...i know im a MAJOR pain in the ass...but i cant help it!
    gojyoxsanzo is my favorite pairing!....and i love your story so far!
    please do tell me that you havent given up on it!...?
    i might cry if you did!
    ive been looking practically every day for the past month to see if you updated...(i have no life....)
    .....like i said i know im a pain...but PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE dont give up on this one.....and please update soon.....i might die if i dont get to read how this one goes! T.T
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  • From ANON - Ai on October 03, 2006
    That was dfinitely sexy. I always have thought that Sanzo needs a decent fuck. It would improve his mood. You should definitely continue.
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  • From ANON - zaltisma on October 02, 2006
    MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE!!!! MOREMOREMOREMOREMORE!!! You're stopping JUST when it gets interesting!!!!! T___T But AMN! that was hot... more than hot, in fact, WOW!!! I really enjoyed it!!!
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  • From ANON - Paine on September 24, 2006
    More please, now! OMG that was so hot!!! Please update soooon ill keep an eye out. xxxx
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  • From ANON - jarm on September 21, 2006
    Oh that was HOT
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