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Reviews for Silent Acceptance

By : Heynchan
  • From Chopstick_Chick on March 08, 2012
    Hello! I have finally migrated to this website from some others I had previously been more active on and created an account and so I am taking the time now to leave you a review on this amazing story. I have been a fan of HwD for a long time, the manga is so fantastic and this story really filled in those unmentioned years between Sawa-san's leaving the force and moving out on his own with Yukihito to where the main storyline is set several years later. It was so well crafted and detailed and it contains such believable and loveable original characters. The emotions and feelings portrayed in this story are deep and realistic. Sawa's gentle steps forward into his new identity are appropriate and seem well thought out, just as Yukihito's struggles with being a teenager as well desiring to be the lover of an older man is fascinating. I think that you had him emerge from his shell at just the right pace and I have to say his dialogue is pleasantly and believably written. I of course have to comment on the smut scenes and the sexual tension in the story as well, because I would be leaving out a large portion of my kudos to you if I did not. The sex scenes are fantastic, very well written and just detailed enough to bring out the true emotions going on in them without becoming long winded. The words themselves do not infringe upon the flow of the scenes or hinder them in any way in my imagination. The sexual tension between Yukihito and Sawa is so deliciously tense and while I, on first reading this a few years back, wanted to hurt you desperately for making them wait a year until Yuki's birthday, I appreciated it later and every time thereafter that I read the story. It is so necessary and the way you portray the characters going through the tension of their budding relationship, fraught with social taboos as it is, is beautiful and so eloquent it makes me cry. I feel the tension as strongly as if it were myself in their shoes and I don't think you can do much more than that as an author to bring a reader into the story.

    I have read this story through three or four times now in its entirety and I am sure I will read it again, it is that good. You are truly a master story teller and if you aren't pursuing a career in writing, I would strongly suggest it. You have the talent for it, you really do.



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  • From Fannshin on November 02, 2007
    I really love your story and the inside on how Sawa and Yukito's relationship developed. Very sweet and tender. Thanks for sharing. :)
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  • From SylviaL on October 02, 2007
    Hello,
    Even if it's a little late, I just want to let you know how much I enjoyed and appreciated this story. It's extremely well written, enticing, emotional and you really filled that void I've always felt in Youka Nitta's work, you gave voice and life to this wonderful couple and I cannot thank you enough. But THANK YOU anyway ^____^.
    And I really wish to read more of anything you plan on writing or have already written. I went to check your LJ but didn't find anything new, so I was wondering if you wouldn't have anything hidden there... if you do, perhaps you could share it with this poor reader here hehe. ( I work 15 hours a day so you can imagine how complicate it's for me to find time and patience to search for good fics, they are so hard to find!)
    But anyways, sorry to bother you, even if you don't have more stories written I'll gladly read Silent acceptance again.
    *chus*
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 05, 2007
    This is a wounderful story. You are a really good writer. Have you ever concidered submitting your work to a publisher. if you already have let me know what you have had published it am adicted to you.
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  • From Hestia on June 03, 2007
    Awesome!! What a wonderful ending to such a good story! A fabulous job!! Maybe you could add some assorted little lemons from their later life??
    How awful of me to want more when you've finally finished--sorry! Anyway, wonderful job!
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  • From aimless38 on April 20, 2007
    Wow thank you so much for writing Sawa and Yukihito's story. I loved the characters too and felt they deserved more air time than they got. Bravo on the first chapter. You captured their personalities wonderfully well. Keep up the great work!
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  • From Hestia on March 06, 2007
    Wow!! I hope we get a lemon soon! Oh, that sounds kind of crude, but they are in love, and I hope they make it. This is pretty clever how you set things up for the big novel. Also you cover the transition to Sawa's new identity really well. The OC character death was very sad. Thanks for posting this--I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
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  • From bluesnake40 on February 27, 2007
    Am so glad to see you continuing with this fic as there are just too few good HwD fics. It's great to read about how Sawa/Yukihito got together and must say the last hapt was so sad. It's a testimony to your writing that I shed tears over the death of Ayame - your original character and am eagerly awaiting the rest of the chatps ...it an only get better the way the fic is currently going. Thanks for sharing.
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  • From ANON - ahtnamas on December 26, 2006
    OMG!!!!!i'm in love. you are now one of my fave authors. ahhhh.... kawaii sawa and yu. please keep updating. i can't waite for the up coming year and i bet neither can they. ppffff, like they can realy last a year lol.
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  • From ANON - bluesnake40 on December 11, 2006
    So glad to see updates to this fic. I like how you've protrayed the tenderness in their relationship and the uncertainty of coming together. Can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - dextrousleftie on December 09, 2006
    WHAT?! Almost a year to wait! Ahhh!!!;) Those two are just darling together. I'm glad that they never let the 'we are related' thing get in their way. After all, incest is only bad when it causes negative emotions between the couple, or there's the potential for children. Neither thing is true in their case. Please write more, or I'll seriously have to think of writing something for them myself.:)
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 06, 2006
    Yay, an update! Aww...they finally admitted their feelings for eachother.
    A year is quite a long time of waiting but it would proably be good for both of them.
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  • From ANON - Princess Koriand'r on November 23, 2006
    I can't believe this story as only gotten 6 reviews. That's proof positive that a lot of readers are smoking crack at AFF. What can I say, I've been a long time fan of Haru wo Daite Ita and I can honestly say its one of my favorite managa's of all time. Nitta's Storytelling is impeccable and I'm pleased to find that you're is equally so. Sawa is one of those characters that while interesting and necessary to the storyline, wasn't given a great deal of back history. Its nice to read a story predating what we know about his and Yukihiko's relationship. This story is one of the most well writting stories I've had the pleasure to read and I can honestly say I can't wait to see more from you in the future.

    ~Kenya
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  • From ANON - dextrousleftie on October 16, 2006
    Thanks for writing another chapter. So when do we get to the actual lemon? *nudge, nudge, wink, wink* Those two are so cute together.
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  • From ANON - Kia on September 22, 2006
    Oh, I love this story! It's very well done, full of loving details and realism. Really sweet. Write more!
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