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Reviews for A pretty face can hide an evil mind

By : KirikouChan
  • From ANON - yano on November 01, 2009
    :D

    I love it!!!!
    This has a twist that i have not encountered within other stories,
    and i have to say that it interests me to no end.

    I will happily wait for the next installment.

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  • From ANON - Nova on July 23, 2008
    Wow! you have me totally hooked up! Wondering who Kira is...well, the church brings me to the Mello/Matt pairing, but I suppose they're not. I see Mikami is already working with Kira. I'm thinking Taro could be L, well, I thought so even in canon until proved otherwise. And the psycho hand-loving killer probably had one, too. Could he have survived somehow? What I'm really wondering is who Kira is menacing. It would be twisted (I am probably) to have Raito-kun thinking Kira is holding Taro and having Raito killing him instead (if he's truly L). Wondering if Taro/L would tell Raito who he was? Thinking Raito is/is helping Kira, probably not. Ok, I'll stop ranting now. You are great!
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  • From ANON - oztan on April 01, 2008
    This good. Just read the whole thing.
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  • From spoon10488 on March 02, 2008
    awesome story, I hope to read more.
    =)
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  • From ANON - Bo on November 28, 2007
    Gasp! I can't wait for next chapter!! Super duper curious to see what happens next. I'm curious about the eyes the most myself. If you are going to have Ryuuku*SP* tell Raito about them. Or if you are even gonna have them. Oh well. Please do update though. Really good story!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Serendipity on October 29, 2007
    Nice nice nice~ I like the riddle you put in there and the thoughts running through Raito's mind when looking at Ray's shoes.. X3 Made me kind of giggle despite the situation; you would think he was going to steal them what with the mentioning of a retail price. On the note of what the reviewer above me (Or somewhere up there) I understand where's she's coming from, since most authors would skip over the mange bits and get straight to their own twists, or only brief it. But, I rather like how you take the time to go over the original Death Note chapters; it really gives you an insight on the differences, however slight, in Raito's personality. Like how his emotional and physical reaction to Ray's death was way different from how he reacted in the manga, showing that his innocence is still retained and that he isn't going into god-complex mode as fast as he did by himself. Though, I must admit, I am rather eager to find out more on Kira, I don't mind the wait and, as I think I said before, I rather like being able to compare the original manga chapters to this one. ^-^ Thanks for updating and I hope you work out whatever is going on at home! Keep up the work! :3
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  • From ANON - Krystal on August 29, 2007
    I'm not to pleased with your version of Death Note. I enjoy the back story and the evil little Tarou, but the whole thing is following the main story. There are small variations, but no real subtantial change.
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  • From ANON - Serrandipity on August 09, 2007
    Oh.. I loove this one. X3 -Just finished reading the story- Personally, I liked it better from Taro's POV compared to Raito's, probably cause I've already dubbed him as my favorite so far though I haven't read this Death Note one-shot. Anyway, I have yet to figure out that riddle, I don't even know where to start.. >.>; But, I will continue to try! :3 Keep up the good work and update soon!
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  • From ANON - Tragedy Lover on July 25, 2007
    This is a most amazing story. I am unsure of whether or not I have reviewed before, but a response is past due. First of all, I love how you've transformed this story. Not to mention, I hope you do well on your career path. I love reading your Author's Notes. I have been reading this story since it was first posted and can truly say it is one of the most interesting Alternate Storyline story for Death Note as of yet. More riddles and mysteries for us, your devote readers, is much looked forward to, is all I can say. Keep it up.
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  • From Kyuubi0Kitsune on July 16, 2007
    YES! We finally got an update! I LOVE IT!
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  • From ANON - Tsuki on February 26, 2007
    SHE LIVES!...SHE UPDATES!!! OMG! hurry w/ another update plz?
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  • From ANON - kimmiko16 on February 15, 2007
    This was absolutly amazing! An ingenius way to write a story I am waiting to see what you have in store for us next!
    -Kimmi
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  • From ANON - Yeyana on December 25, 2006
    This is really interesting....
    ...
    ...
    That means you need to continue, you know.
    ...
    Addicting...
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  • From ANON - can.t say on December 17, 2006
    (Just for the record, because I forgot about it in my reveiw, yes I did read that part where you say, Taro is the "main Character of the Death Note one shot and is therefor NOT an OC". However, that really doesn't mean anything to me because I am uninformed, and don't know what that is. So, in my world, Taro only exists as your original character. Regardless of the details. XD sorry. I still like your story though. )
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  • From ANON - can.t say on December 17, 2006
    Wow, that's a very interesting story! I really truly wasn't expecting to like it when you introduced angsty original character Taro, but you stick to a very solid description of his emotions (like, they're not horribly contradictory to the character you've projected for him). So yes, I really like this story! Please continue writing it.
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