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Reviews for Greed Island, Need Island

By : abangel16
  • From animekid on August 24, 2011
    This pairing instead of pedo clown! Yay.

    This was sweet and dawww all over. I wish there was more of this pairing.
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  • From kuramasgirl on July 16, 2009
    Is this really the end? You should add more 2 it cause I'm wondering where Biscuit is.... you should have her show ^ & see the boys making out or something. She'd love that cause shes a major pervert.
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  • From NeruKudasai on June 28, 2008
    You need to "show not tell" when you write.
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  • From ANON - P1 on November 07, 2006
    You cheater. With a title like that I was expecting 'juicy' in the first chapter! geez, you shouldn't mislead people like that, I thought I was finally going to read a fanfic about Gon/Killua something other than 'oh i love you' and kiss. Which is fine and all and very cute; and I really liked your rendition with the whisper and the one bed (prelude to later activities i gather - right? Don't you dare prove me wrong). This particular reviewer would very much like you to make a second chapter with a lemon, or a strong lime; but something other that light touches. You'd probably be pretty good at it, since you're kissing part was really good! (shame it only got two tiny paragraphs)
    Well, anxiously awaiting for a beautiful update
    -me.
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  • From ANON - Dacara on October 26, 2006
    Wow, pleas continue this story. I want moooooooooooooooooooooore!!!;)
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