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Reviews for The Jaws of Loneliness

By : Grudge
  • From ANON - Dracania on November 09, 2014
    You should continue this
    Please do
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  • From Aresy on January 10, 2008
    hmm..yes i also can agree that writing for these two is not easy at all. Maybe u can make Link the hero of the day this time hehe. Also, you can introduce / add more characters into the story and have some kind of conflict which will make the two have to work together and have to deal with others who notice the attraction that they have towards one another.
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  • From Aresy on January 10, 2008
    thank you for the second chapter!! Sorry, i didn't even notice u wrote it after i reviewed the first time. Wow. Aww it was perfect!! I loved the scene at the lake!!! hot! D is perfect. Link of course is lovely. I like how u went with this. That D saved Links life again, kind of showing that he actually might care. Again, i would love if you continued..it just seems that the story could have more, espeically from the last few lines at the end of chapter 2. I would love to read more and will look forward to the next chapter.
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  • From Aresy on January 09, 2008
    wow lovely!!! ^_^ I seen the movie and though they would be awesome as a couple. ^_^ I haven't read the book, but i might do so. Very well written. Awww...please continue??! I would love to see a little more between them. D is so calm and quiet..hmm..it would be nice to see him a little different besides that hehe. *evil grin*
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  • From Neverland on October 19, 2007
    It was decent, albeit brief in descriptions.
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  • From howlingwind on September 20, 2007
    Have you considered a bunch of bounty hunters after links's head? The hunters dont exactly have to be human....
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  • From Felixia on January 31, 2007
    ah! AT LAST! I've found a story D/Meier with D being seme ~
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 07, 2007
    MOOOOOOOORE! Please more! we need re stuff like this on this part of the site aas for an idea....Well Meyer would have another safe house some where wouldn't he? HE could take D there and well...things happen. *hinthintwinkwink*
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  • From ANON - feidragonlover on December 31, 2006
    D to the rescue ^^. Good job of keeping D in character, and his irritating pain in the ass hand too^^. and WOOT for killing of charlotte.
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  • From ANON - Moyima on December 29, 2006
    I really like this. Very sweet story. Please continue!
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  • From ANON - Vamplover on November 20, 2006
    And did you find any inspiration yet. Because I can't wait to read how
    this one is going to end.
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  • From ANON - God of Insanity(2lazy2login) on October 30, 2006
    Sorry, I forgot to mention a couple more things. Such as, I liked how you stuck to how Hideyuki Kikichi writes. I know that's hard; it's always hard to put aside your writing style to write like someone else. I also liked some of the phrases you used, like "jaws of lonliness".
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  • From ANON - God of Insanity(2lazy2login) on October 30, 2006
    Very clever plot you have here, I like it. Your story, although it could end there, sounds like more can transgress if you write more chapters. It would probably be an interesting challenge if you continued it, though.

    What's funny about the movie and book are the names:
    Movie(Bloodlust): Meiyer Link/ Dunpeal
    Book(Demon Deathchase): Mayerling/ Dhampir

    I prefer Meiyer Link and Dhampir, though. I always wondered why they did that, but movies tend to deviate from the book...although sometimes that can be a good thing. I liked the movie and book, so no complaints here. So, if you do plan on continuing this, I will standby and review.
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  • From Solaras on October 29, 2006
    I think you're off to a good start, and hope to see you continue. Vampire Hunter D was the first fandom that really got me into reading fanfiction, so I am happy to see a good writer in the fandom. I can see Hideyui Kikuchi’s influence in your writing, and I think you are keeping that tone well. Hope to see more.
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  • From ANON - Wolf on October 27, 2006
    Don't know about anyone else but I would love to read more.

    I like it so far.
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