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Reviews for Kiss

By : moontatoo
  • From Iarejedi on September 05, 2007
    That was great. I think you did a great job. Definitely hunt down some more works done by you. :D
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  • From Ladymynx on April 06, 2007
    Hi it's me again! Loved this one! I'm going to take a break and then read the sequel. I personally liked the way you had them save lovemaking for later and taking their time. The progression of the relationship seemed natural to me and worked well.
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  • From AkitaandSubuchan on February 07, 2007
    Kiss is a great story, and Drake and JJ are so in character. JJ being so broken up about--not only about his father's death--but by the cold, emotionless inheritance he was given, when all he wanted was love and the normal praise any child desires, was so very well done and you could really feel it. Yes, the sex scene was a little rushed, but perfectly fine. It was truly an in-the-heat-of-the-moment thing and well done. Drake being able to sit down--gingerly--was too cute. Thank you for the great story. (WHEE!! I still wuuv you, Moon!!!!) Shut up, Akita!
    *Wahh!*
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  • From ANON - purplepenguin on November 18, 2006
    You don't share drinks unless intimate? What country do you live in?
    I always steal my friend's drinks or share one sometimes.
    Anyway nice ficcie I like cute JJ ficcies.
    Could do with another chapter though in my opinion
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  • From ANON - Prieel on November 13, 2006
    Hmm, nice story :) Wasn't rushed for me.
    Heh, that's weird, not drinking from others beverage. In my country we do it a lot, even just with people from your class.


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  • From ANON - Ayeshagirl (not logged in) on November 12, 2006
    Not sharing drinks?! That's just crazy! Everyone here shares drinks with anyone they like, if you know them well enough to be hanging out with them, you know them well enough to share a drink. But then again, I'm in good old England, which unusual country are you in?

    As for the story, very nice! A convincing story written excellently with a good emotional backdrop, and a nice ending, even if the not sharing drinks thing means nothing to me. If it did then I'd be intimate with about 30 people!

    Ayeshagirl

    (feel free to email me, this 'no sharing' thing intruiges me...)
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  • From ANON - guresgirl on November 09, 2006
    hey loved the story. please let us know how drakes parents react.
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  • From ANON - tamachan444 on November 08, 2006
    i love you! this is my new favorite fake story
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 07, 2006
    I love this story! And I love how quickly you updated the chapters! Drake and JJ is my favourite FAKE pairing by now, and I really like the characterization you gave them both (seemed very in character imho) and the plot. :) I felt chapter 8's sex scene was a little rushed, or at least that Drake seemed so unperturbed by it felt a little too "easy" and/or "sudden. After your built up I had expected him to be a lot more hesistant or nervous about suddenly finding himself having sex with another man. But anyway, I love this story nonetheless, and I hope there'll be more! :)
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  • From pandorazellas on November 07, 2006
    Awww i'm really enjoying this fic ^__^ Poor JJ. I look forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Roselind on November 07, 2006
    Yay! A drunk JJ is a very cute one! Drake is such a nice guy and they are really good together! Please more romance soon!
    I loved your story and I am waiting very anxiously for more!
    Kisses ^^
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  • From ANON - Brit Columbia on November 05, 2006
    This is a fun story! I can't wait for the actual kiss. We all know it's coming. The following is my favourite line in your story so far:

    " Ouch, " Dee winced. " I've seen him in the showers ; trust me, Ted, you do not want Janet going with him."

    It just cracks me up every time I read it!

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  • From ANON - lea on November 05, 2006
    oo, update soon! this is super cute, i love this pairing
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  • From ANON - Blue-eyes-green on November 03, 2006
    Wow, I really like this, and I'm often checking for updates. JJ/Drake is one of my favorite couples, and you do them so sweetly, it's really nice. There's something a bit screwy with the punctuation, but other than that, I can't think of any constructive critism even. I'm hope to see more of this soon!
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  • From ANON - Kira on November 01, 2006
    Lovely story, I liked your portrayal of JJ, he is not only Dee´s annoying and brainless stalker most people usually write about.
    I´m crazy about this pairing and I´m very anxious to read more.
    Thanks for writing,
    Hugs
    Kira

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