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Reviews for Cold Play

By : Elnie
  • From ANON - Devils-Advocate3 on November 07, 2006
    OOOOOOOOOOOOOO another wonderful chapter. ^^ Hay so how does Shu feel about Eiri....Huh? Lol anyway I can't wait to see what happens next. ^^ Now that eiri is getting near to Shu........Will eiri want more?........And try to touch shu as well.......huh the possibilities. (smile evilly) Any way update soon ok. So I can find out. ^_^
    Kisses ^_~
    Ps
    sorry that was me I wrote the wrong name....Lol sorry
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 07, 2006
    OOOOOOOOOOOOOO another wonderful chapter. ^^ Hay so how does Shu feel about Eiri....Huh? Lol anyway I can't wait to see what happends next. ^^ Now that eiri is getting cloues to Shu........Will eiri want more?........And try to touch shu as well.......huh the possiblitys. (smile evily) Any way update soon ok. So I can find out. ^_^
    Kisses ^_~
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  • From ANON - Grey on November 07, 2006
    Still an incredible story, although it seems to be missing a second chapter... are you just telling the story of the walkout and such in flashbacks? I wouldn't mind 'seeing' it, but that works too. *grins* (Love Yuki in this chapter, being punished and trying not to laugh. Just like him to get exactly what he wants for all the wrong reasons, right? :)

    Also, Shindou's cuteness continues to rock my world. *grins*
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  • From ANON - Aimee on November 06, 2006
    This is defintely my favorite AU so far! The way that you're doing the characters is perfect, and I positively loved the last lines! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Sekre on November 06, 2006
    Love it!!! Shu is cute, which isn't unusual, and I like how you portrayed Yuki - both are really in character.
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  • From ANON - Grey on November 05, 2006
    Eee! This is a *great* start. I love all the details you threw in about the school, it really made it interesting to see how differently they were treating the new 'brat' teacher. (Of course, the fact that I love stories that include Yuki's POV doesn't hurt one bit - I get the feeling that Shindou is going to have an interesting school year. *grins*)

    Love it!
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  • From ANON - Devils-Advocate3 on November 05, 2006
    Wow. I've Loved what you have written. Lol ^^ Shuichi a teacher. Lol Funny yet so perfect. ^_^. Not to mention Different. O and I love the fact that you write how Eiri is starting to have feelings for Shu, And not the other way around. ^^ O and hay you could put a past in shu's life, ya know like some dark hidden/painful past that Yuki tries to find out. Or yuki slowly finds out about shu's personal life and about the person who drives shu to work. Like they have a relationship together.......But he hurts shuichi, or something like that, So not only does yuki become jealous, but pissed off that shu is being miss treated. So eiri not only finds out that he has fallen for his teach but will do anything in his power to make shu his. Lol ^^ just a thought. ^^ just wanted to help. But I do hope you like my ideas. ^_^ Do what you like with them. But whatever you do......you must update. update soon. Ok. Lol Have fun. and see you soon. Latter
    Kisses ^_~
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