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Reviews for The Game of Love

By : Despina
  • From orvida on December 23, 2008
    All i can say is hot bam that was an itense piece of writing and i throughly enjoyed reading every chapter and i hope to read more of these stories from you in the coming new year^^ :p
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  • From sharpeslass on November 16, 2008
    Hiya! Great story (I think I've reviewed it previously - if not, I am remiss and I apologize). I have a question. I'm taken with the idea of Gojyo being sexually aroused by Hakkai's healing and wanted to ask if I could use it (not in exactly the same way or to the same psychic-bonding level that you have) in a fic of my own. I would absolutely credit you with the (awesome) idea and post a link to your story if/when I post mine. I did not want to borrow such a fabulous idea without asking first though. Please let me know if it's okay or not! Feel free to use my e-mail (which is wrong on this site. It is actually: melindacatren@yahoo.com) or PM me on LJ to let me know.
    Again, awesome story from which I cannot keep my sticky plot-bunny seeking fingers...
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  • From Robyn on January 20, 2008
    Just found this story this evening. I am wonderfully impressed with the pace and the charaterization. Nicely done and I hope to see more soon!
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  • From JadeHeart on March 26, 2007
    Ah, the sexual tension building, the stolen kiss, the sexy demonish Hakkai - what more could we want! Oh, not to mention the hot, monkey sex as well!

    Looking forward to seeing how this will continue, Des!
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  • From Kaiensmullet on March 07, 2007
    'Tis very well written. Usually, I read PWP's, but I'm actually quite enjoying the slow pace of this one. Can't wait for more.
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  • From Ginny on February 27, 2007
    *shivers* My gods I think you took leasons from Hakkai... That's just so MEAN leaving everything at that! Mean mean mean mean! *pouts*
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  • From fuzzybunnytoo on February 27, 2007
    I absoultly love this chapter(5 i think) very unusual way to take it and I enjoyed the conversations to the max. I laughed and clapped my hands and at one point even stomped my feet all at the same time. Fun ,Fun Chapter. Now how about another fun chapter, I could get really hooked on them. Your writing is fantastic and the characters are spot on. The last line almost made me pee my pants I laughed so hard. Excelent.
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  • From psyca on January 24, 2007
    Very nice chapter. I can't wait to see how this gets resolved. I always like stories where Goku is more perceptive than he is generally made out to be, and Sanzo has emotions like a real human. Your portrayals of all four guys are great.
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  • From imayb1 on January 23, 2007
    I'm enjoying this story. Hakkai and Gojyou are my favorites, so I was thrilled they were the focus of your story! I was really moved by chapter four, particularly the way Sanzo cut through Hakkai's thoughts and laid out the situation as he sees it. I think you're getting a better feel for the characters as the fic goes on and I'm enjoying your version of the journey. ;)
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  • From fuzzybunnytoo on January 22, 2007
    Chapter 4 is great and I can't wait until chapter 5 so hurry and write it so I can read it, Waiting with baited breath(and it is getting a little fishy flavored so could you hurry?)
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  • From sohmamomiji on January 20, 2007
    This is awesome! So deliciously angsty!

    This line killed me with laughter!

    “I can just see trying to explain that path of death and destruction to the three heads. Sorry heads, our healer got a little carried away and killed all of the women in China.”

    Awesome!
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  • From ANON - anime_angel01 on January 14, 2007
    =D! I love it! Please do update whenever possible! I want to know what happens next to put it bluntly! Now that it's at a crucial moment where Hakkai and Gojyo are both overwhelmed by emotion, maybe this is just wishful thinking on my part, but perhaps to settle the insecure feelings they'll get the chance to show each other how they feel? Please please update! ^^ I'll be eagerly checking back for it whenever I can.
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  • From ANON - Cupnjava on January 12, 2007
    Chapter 1 was glorious. You’re hand at building sexual tension is exquisite and I LOVE your characterizations!

    Ch2 – “it was an aspect of his bizarre and twisted sense of humor.” SO VERY TRUE! So very Hakkai!

    “Besides, when Hakkai healed him, other things happened, intimate things, that left him incredibly vulnerable to the dark-haired man.” That is GENIUS! That’s the kind of line that can birth 1,000 plotbunnies! I wish I thought of that. *pout*

    “Closing his crimson eyes, Gojyo whispered aloud to the inky night, “Oh, shit.”

    Hakkai’s laughter answered him from the darkness.”

    What a great closing zinger! LOL!

    Ch3- I am going to kick the living shit out of AFF. I click to read chapter three and they have “maintenance.” It’s not maintenance. It’s TORTURE!

    ““Is that so?” Hakkai’s voice remained steady, revealing nothing. “I’m afraid I don’t really know what you mean.”” I SO want to take that to certain levels!

    “Hakkai had witnessed his roommate’s skilled prowess with women on numerous occasions, but he no longer found it amusing or entertaining.” Ladies, this is the warning signal of a Hakkai Snit coming on! LOL!

    This is BEAUTIFUL! I can’t wait until you update!

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  • From ANON - sohmamomiji on January 09, 2007
    Awesome story so far! Poor Hakkai! Poor Gojyo! Please continue!!! I really liked your OCs, BTW - especially Lee. I normally find most OCs annoying, but yours were interesting!
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  • From ANON - fuzzybunnytoo on January 01, 2007
    Chapter three was so very good. It was angsty and delisious. I love the interjection of the girl and the guy that could read the two friends. The way it was written was very enjoyable to read. Love your work emencely.
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