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Reviews for No Turning Back

By : Sephanie
  • From Izayoi on February 17, 2007
    Hey! Awesome chapter! It was Guy wasn't it? lol Please update soon!
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  • From VampireRandy on February 12, 2007
    Ahhh again 2 great chapters, Thank-you for taking the time to write and post these I enjoy reading every one thanks again your doing a good job keep it up can't wait for the next installment
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  • From cocoke5 on February 08, 2007
    wow the story is real good and lol when omki come and yell out and make it sound that he was clap pin g the riki and eyum on stage. i can not wait for thenext chapter of the storyl
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  • From VampireRandy on February 01, 2007
    YAY!!!!finally got it read, thank-you for taking the time to write and post this story I love it, please i can't wait to read the next chapter please keep going
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  • From cocoke5 on January 23, 2007
    oh right that guy did get what he did to ankl and i can not wait for the next chapter of the story. this story is real good. good luck. be wait up date soon.
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  • From ANON - cocoke5 on December 29, 2006
    very good chapter and i love it and can not wait for the next chapter and see what happen to that teacher. good luck and a hppy new year.
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  • From ANON - jenny on December 26, 2006
    THANK YOU , YOU UPGRADE I LOVE THIS STORY PLEASE UUUUUUUUUUPPPGRADE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON CAN'T WAIT UNTIL U UPGRADE!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - cocoke5 on December 26, 2006
    i feel sorry for the teacher when omika get to him. i hope that akia tell them what he is doing to him. but the story is real great and i love it . i hope that you have a nice christmas and you have a nice new year. love your storys
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  • From Sakya on December 19, 2006
    I've just started and so far I can only say your fic is captivating (I haven't read enough to say more, sorry), but I can understand your problem with spelling and grammar.

    Did you try to get a beta reader at the link AFF provides for us? I believe it's at the bottom of this page, if not, here it is:
    http://groups.yahoo.com/group/AdultFanFictionBetaReaders

    Best of luck
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  • From ANON - kotay3 on December 04, 2006
    This story is really good. I like the way you've made the characters develop as well as the twists and turns in the story. Great visuals, emotions and is feels so real that you can easily hear the voices of the characters.
    Your writing is detailed without being too much, letting the readers imagination set free while reading the story^^
    As other reviewers' pointed out you’ve got a few problems with the spelling and grammar but what the heck, don't we all (except maybe English teachers^^)

    Looking forward to your next update!

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  • From ANON - Nona again on November 29, 2006
    Regarding to what you wrote in the beginning of the first chapter, why don't you take a beta? You can't see your mistakes, but a proofreader will (a good spellcheck will as well, btw, you can use it in spite of your dysgraphy/dysortography). I can see no problem here. There are proofreaders on aff.net, the only thing you have to do is go and ask one for help.

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  • From ANON - my opinion on November 26, 2006
    I apologise heartily for reviewing so harshly. Let this be a lesson to me.
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  • From ANON - cocoke5 on November 23, 2006
    wow the story is come along real good now. and i love the hole story and this chpter was great and i love the way that the eny and suy got the cook and the other boy. and iason and okai come in and omki start to laught tht was good. and the write is real good to . see you on the next up date.
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  • From ANON - cocoke5 on November 22, 2006
    the story is comeing along real good and i love it and hope the see more of the story. good luck. be waitting.
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  • From ANON - cocoke5 on November 20, 2006
    wow that chapter was good and can not wait for the next chapter and see some sex from suy and oiai andenuy that is going be good see you next time and i love you story up date soon
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