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Reviews for Salt In His Wound

By : darlingdali
  • From AkitoSouma on May 09, 2007
    I LOVE this! It is written beautifully, and the sex between Yuki and Akito is just hot. It's made all the more fascinating because of Yuki's emotional issues with it. So they're in love in this fic, right? I noticed in the first chapter that Yuki seemed close to acknowledging his love for Akito while he was thinking about Tohru, and I assume that Akito shares those feelings since he is obviously obsessed with and attracted to him, and seems reluctant to provide an answer about why he chose Yuki. Please, please continue this. There is not enough good Akito/Yuki fanfiction out there, everyone seems to ignore the fact that they're practically canon. So please, pretty please? I'll love you forever. ^_^

    p.s. everyone was wonderfully in character, I love how you captured Akito's strange beauty and seductivenss, his disregard for his rumpled appearance, and his unique, forceful dailogue--as well as Yuki's overwhelming fear of him. A lot of people write that he hates Akito, when really I think that he's just scared shitless by him--not only because of the abuse that Akito inflicted upon him, but also because of Yuki's feelings for that very abuser that he is so afraid to admit to himself. Anway, it was beautifully written. Good job.
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  • From ANON - Xiana on December 29, 2006
    This is pretty good so far, I can't wait for the next chapter to come out!!! Are you going to have everybody find out what Akito is doing to Yuki? Or are you going to have Akito hurt Yuki pretty bad and has to have Hatori come and fix him up, then Hatori tells everyone? I can't wait!!! I can't wait!!! :P
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