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Reviews for Eternal Hearts: Book Four-Daughter of Sin

By : alucardsangel1973
  • From alucardsangel1973 on December 17, 2006
    Thanks for the review. I put this up on Chapter 1. I forget there are new readers to this site all the time and may have not read the other three stories that came before this one. If you haven't had a chance yet, please read the first three stories Partners, Homecoming and Twisted Shadows. This basically tells how Alucard and Seras met and began their relationship and how it evolves. It's an Alternate Universe Hellsing Series so Alucard and Seras met differently than they did in the anime and manga. Hope that gives you more of an idea of how they got involved with each other. I'll go through the first two chapters of this story to find the typos. I get so busy sometimes I forget to do a spell check. Thanks for the comments. I hope to have more done soon.
    Silverrose
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  • From ANON - TheEndOfAllThingsGoodAndBad on December 17, 2006
    I don't understand why I'm only the FIRST reviewer of this piece. It's a great A/S with emphasis on plot rather than sex. Although there are a few, there are VERY few, dismissable typos, and your writing flows like a freshwater river.. Meaning its very good.
    On the subject of keeping A and S in character, (I won't mention Integra or Walter because there's nothing to mention, you write them flawlessly) But as for the two vampires, I have nothing major to beef about, but they seem a bit.. Like secondary characters in this plot. It felt as if the main focus was Integra and her impending wedding.
    You chose to write A and S as already being in a relationship of intimacy, nothing wrong with that, but it removes room for development, doesn't it? Although its your fic and you probably knew it was necessary to the plot for it to be like that, so it's cool. I liked how you wrote Serras as already having learned a few dark gifts, very cool. And for once, a 'Alucard teaches Serras' scene that I couldn't turn my nose up at.
    As for the NC-17 content, five stars, I could totally see them doing that. Hope there's more where that came from. Good stuff kids go for, lol

    Keep em coming!! You keep writing and I'll keep reviewing, k?

    Chiao,
    TEOATG&B
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