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Reviews for Life Will Never Be The Same

By : LordSaturn
  • From ANON - Anon on December 12, 2006
    I'll admit I'm a little disapointed...just a little. It's not bad, not at all. It's just that going from your other stories, especially 'A Glass of Wine', it seems a little blah at times.
    Now that I said that let me say that I did like it. You did a fine job and it was done in a good way. I am looking forward to any future chapters.
    I think I just went into this a little to...I don't know...I guess excited is too strong a word but it fits. My expectations were too high I guess. But let me tell you that I ain't lowering them because of this...oh no I'm not. I still expect a lot from you. You are a very good amateur and definitely better than me.
    Read ya Later.
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  • From ANON - dennisud on December 06, 2006
    Well for your first lemon the story overall was good, not spectacular but good. The main problems were the misused words (angle for Angel, Astringed for estranged, Satin for satan, and so on.).

    The pacing could be a bit better, it seemed to lag a bit in places, so maybe in your next one write it w/o the lemon sections the work them in.

    Hope this helped! Oh and I have my one and 'only' lemon here co-written by Datexan for my Tenchi Muyo saga "Uninhibited Consequences: called "Inhibitions Lost" here on this site. Let me and Tex know what you think of it!

    later, dennisud
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 05, 2006
    "I Musn't Come Too Fast!"

    A+!
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