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Reviews for Unreadable

By : SatoDai
  • From Revu on December 18, 2006
    Oooooo... someone is about to be slapped I think...

    From the starting point I didn't see that twist coming at the end, pretty cool. I see guys do that... not wanting to admit something like that and trying to live a normal life but only fool themselves and hurt the girl who loved them. Better to be honest about stuff indeed. I bet he married her out of the feeling of alienation... Maybe I'm delving too far into it, but anyway it was a cool idea!

    Great writing ability! Nothing at all hindered the story's rhythm, hope you keep on writing cool stuff!

    -Revu
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  • From ANON - trinity of the phoenixes(to lazy to log in) on December 12, 2006
    Hey, I'm the person from the challenge,if you think the main idea is a good one, you can try the threesome idea without the further stuff.

    I've read this little pieve, not bad, very sad though.


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