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Reviews for In The Spaces Between Words

By : Mishizu
  • From KatGrrrrl99 on April 09, 2007
    I like it!!! continue please!!
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  • From ANON - gypsymaria on April 07, 2007
    Very cute series of one-shots. I've just sat up way past my bedtime reading these through to the end, thoroughly enjoying myself. I'm interested to see if you post more.
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  • From iJewel on March 31, 2007
    very well written. very smooth. i do enjoy very much just the daily interaction between these two. i think that if the story were nothing but what it is i would still read it and hope for more. that you've indicated there will be lemon is only icing on the cake so to speak. i'd like to have more concrit to give, but really it has been so enjoyable as it is, i have little criticism. maybe upon another read thru at another time. for now i will just anxiously awaite more. thank you for writing and posting.
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  • From iJewel on March 31, 2007
    i don't know when this was originally posted. i see that it was updated yesterday. i don't come here often as i inevitably stay reading and searching until i find something wholly fascinating or i'm so tired i have to get to bed. today i achieved both astonishing speed. this is the first fic i tried reading and i only have about a half hour before i need to sleep. which totally sucks because i have been immediatley fascinated by this fic and i want to do nothing but read more but i HAVE to go bed if i want to get any sleep today.

    i'm only on chapter 4. i didn't stop to review any of the other chapters because honestly, they don't need it. i tend to review if i concrit and right now i am too much just enjoying the easy flow of the story and the writing style to think critically. i am reviewing now because i know how important feedback is.

    you have captured the characters well. everything about them seems canon, even the small gestures towards intimacy or attraction. to make an attraction between charcters that are not orignally written that way seem natural is a great feat. you are doing it well, partly because i think you are taking it slow. which is good for the story, but not so good for a me who wants desperately to continue reading but must stop for sleep.
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  • From ANON - fufufu on March 25, 2007
    Gah, I must be using too many spaces. ;~;
    Just want to say also that if you don't continue with this fic, I'll use my Intarwebs Death Note on you (it only requires a nick and avatar image to work it's magic!) >:Q
    (promises to stop spamming up the review page now) >_>;
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  • From ANON - fufufu on March 25, 2007
    omg! I love this fic! XD This isn't really a review, more of a squee fest of how much I LOVE it! :E

    L and Light's personalities are perfect, and I love the details you've included in describing surroundings and thought processes.

    So basically...omg...this fic is so awesome...please write more! T__T _
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  • From ANON - fufufu on March 25, 2007
    omg! I love this fic! XD : Q


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  • From ANON - Iris Anthe on March 23, 2007
    Ah! This is great! You know I had been sitting, thinking a story that is similar to this and then I thought, hmmm... I wonder if there's fanfiction on Deathnote yet, and lo and behold there's a great one!!! I'd been thinking of trying to write the story I'd been imagining, but there's no reason to, since this one is sooooo good!!! Can't wait to read more. ^_^
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  • From ANON - may on March 19, 2007
    aww ! thats awersome ! I want more.

    L is abolutely IC! Light, I'm not sure as he is not kira now, bit nontheless, I love it and I'm looking forward reading more !


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  • From ANON - anessa on March 17, 2007
    it is awesome! cant wait for the next chapter...I was asking myself why I didnt read this sooner...=]
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  • From ANON - Seth on March 09, 2007
    Ah...such a nice thing to find; a well-written fic on this site^^ I know it's really frustrating to see such a terrible view-review ratio, but keep in mind that a lot of people aren't actually out for anything quality. All of the chapter titles are song names, right? Half-Pain is Witch Hunter Robin, Sleepless Beauty is Gravitaion, and the others I don't know...
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  • From ANON - DN Lover on March 05, 2007
    Ah yeay! I love love love Death Note pairings! So nice! Thanks for writing this!
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  • From ANON - fangbaby2002 on March 04, 2007
    Love this one. Its soo cute. Keep up the great work.
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  • From Drear on March 02, 2007
    Waaah I love this with a passion!
    I can't wait for the next chapter! This last one was great! Your innocent!Light and L are perfect. Very well done on writing this story. I adore it. =]
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  • From ANON - sabrina on March 02, 2007
    this is an awesome fic! read all chapters one after the other...i couldn't stop reading. keep up the great work!
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