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Reviews for In The Spaces Between Words

By : Mishizu
  • From Bloodyfire on March 01, 2007
    awwwww that was sooo cute . ^_^
    i was wondering why your named seemed familure, haha you wrote a prince of tennis fic i started reading but i have no idea where i left off in it :p
    anyway looking forward to more of this.
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  • From Bloodyfire on February 26, 2007
    aww this is way cute ^_^ like every chapter and it's all IC *hands you pile of slightly over cooked cookies* they are a little on the sweet side, so maybe L might like them. but yeah great job, i look forward to more
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  • From Zannie on February 26, 2007
    oH WOW! This is really well done! You've managed to keep in character without losing any of the slick pace and second guessing! Can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - Suzanne on February 22, 2007
    Oh my gosh, i love your writing! please continue! i love the whole "ZOMG, HE'S KIRA!!!" thing with L, even though its kinda in the series too! the way you wrote, you made it your own! please continue!!!!
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  • From ANON - Fangirl 101 on February 20, 2007
    PLEASE, WRITE MORE OR I WILL USE MT DEATHNOTE ON YOU! I love your story. It is soooooooooo cooooooooooooool! Want more.
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  • From ANON - yumenoyami on February 20, 2007
    wow. i like the way you portrait light and L ^^ keep up the good work XD
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  • From ANON - Holy Redemption soup! on February 14, 2007
    homg! HOOOMG. That....was so good! And I know you JUST updated...like, TODAY, but you need to update soon! I'm gonna be stalking this fic...so you better indulge me! *LOVELOVE*

    (they totes need to makeout. And more.
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  • From ANON - myloveforyou on February 12, 2007
    Sorry if these messages bother you... I really like this chapter it was nice. Your a good writer.
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  • From ANON - myloveforyou on February 12, 2007
    I liked this one there was a bit of comedy added into it. That was nice. I hope that you keep going because I like this story a lot. The farther I read the more i like it.
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  • From ANON - Violet on February 11, 2007
    I read your full story just now, and i figured I'd just comment on the very last part as commenting on all of them seemed a bit much since there were already multiple pieces out already.

    Anyway, I'm greatly enjoying your story. It's very nicely written and I look forward to reading more. You keep the characters well in character and provide a entertaining story line. Very nice work.
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  • From ANON - myloveforyou on February 09, 2007
    I really liked this insallment, i don't know if there chapters sense they're not really the same thing. They do flow together nicley though I like this one. You write a good yagami-kun. Although i thought that in eastern cultures they didn't change the tone in their voice when they were talking. I could be completly wrong though I was just curious. And what is a P.I.?
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  • From ANON - myloveforyou on February 09, 2007
    This chapter seemed a bit more rushed then the last one but it was still really good. I like your style. You capture the characters well.
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  • From ANON - myloveforyou on February 09, 2007
    Well I have one thing that didn't really settle well and that is I believe that l has no personaly space or rather no sence of personal space, but other then that I liked it. A lot of thinking but I think that really inhansed the tone. Good job^ ^
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  • From maudite on January 27, 2007
    I'm really enjoying this story! I agree with the other reviewers -- your characterization is excellent, and I like what you're doing with the characters as well. I can't wait to see what happens next!

    A note, however, to a previous reviewer: "brunette" is used to refer to women; "brunet" is the proper spelling for men. (Just as "blonde" is the feminine and "blond" the masculine form.)
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  • From KiaKoKung on January 21, 2007
    Hello!

    (gah, I can't believe you need to get an account in order to review now >.> ... tch)

    Well, this explains why you've got so few reviews ^^;

    I love your story so far, it's brilliant, *very* IC, and delectable.

    I love the description parts, the interactions between the main characters ... btw, I think it would be good not to forget the others characters, because a one-on-one all story long quickly gets annoying. I think Matsuda intervention was nice in that account ^^

    I also liked the coffee parts haha XD No, really, description of physic reality is always good, it adds a surrending, a set, and here the sensuality of it worked well ^^

    And so far the balance between L's and Light's point of view is respected, wich I highly appreciate, since it's not offen the case in fics -but then I guess it's hard to achieve. I hope you keep it that way ^^

    Ah, and I loved the humourous bits, like in "seemingly having decided that it was harmless." XD love that :D
    I hope this also will stay in the following chapters ^^

    At last, I like your writing style, it's neat and precise, which suits DN universe, and L and Light characters very well ^^

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