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Reviews for In The Spaces Between Words

By : Mishizu
  • From rabidfangrrl on January 19, 2007
    hey hey!

    Don't be sad! This is really an intriguing beginning. I enjoy the introspection you allow each character. I absolutely adore L and I like the way you make these two loonies interact. I really enjoyed the palpable and subtle sexual tension in their conversation at the end of chapter 4 - where Light totally invades L's space.
    Get him Light! Lick his face! *cheers*

    Anyhoooo!

    Just wanted to say I think this is coming along swimmingly and I can't wait to see what you bake next for these boys.


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  • From ANON - lawliet~hentai on January 14, 2007
    lol i LOVE this story!!! itsm sooo good! i like how you potray(sp?) the characters so well.
    love the discriptions too!!^^ awwww L's sooo mean to Light-kun ^^ but i stilll love him XD
    keep up the awesome job!! ill be watchin for the next chappie!!
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  • From ANON - eleniel on January 14, 2007
    I've been reading this story since your first post and decided to write something after I read your comment at the end of chap5. I think this site is not known much and peoðle who read these stories do not bother to leave a comment on the efford of the author making.

    ý trully appreciate what you have been doing with my best couple :D your style is captivating and you do not do what ý hate the most: smut without plot. you do not rush, and you progress within the boundaries of the real characters. they are so IC in your fic and your story promises a lot, so please continue, never forget that there are people who like reading fic of quality like yours. good work!
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  • From ANON - Desdemonal, not logged in on January 13, 2007
    Mmm, subtlety. How I adore it. And you convey it remarkably well! Please continue this story, it definitely leaves me wanting more.

    And I've come to find that that 110:1 ratio goes for most fics, unless you're writing for some ridiculously popular couple from a ridiculously popular anime. Sigh.
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  • From ANON - sixtieshairdo on January 12, 2007
    hi! i think, out of the many many MANY fanfiction on death note, yours is one of the better writtten ones. most other authors can't wait to push ryuuzaki and raito in bed, making their interaction very out of character. i like your style, how you are careful with the descriptions, the way ryuuzaki is uncomfortable with close human contact, the quiet sarcasm of raito etc. i hope you do continue with this fic as long as possible, keeping the spirit of L and Light alive :)
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  • From ANON - Chrestes on January 06, 2007
    You have very interesting style of writing. I must admit, I also love how you characterized Light and L, as well as how you put so much accent on the little details that pass through Light's thoughts. I sincerely hope you continue this story. ^_^
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  • From ANON - ryou_fell on December 26, 2006
    I like the characterization in here, (particularly Ryuuzaki)...one teeny, tiiiiiny technical thing, though...cold is applied to fresh bruises, not heat, (applying heat to the skin makes blood vessels open further and makes the bruising worse)...
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  • From ANON - Yeyana on December 25, 2006
    Okay. I love you, now.
    Make more.
    ^^;;;
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  • From ANON - abeastofprey on December 24, 2006
    Wow!! This is great! I vote you keep going. (Thanks for bringing Raito's hair color to my attention, as well. You'd think I would have realized sooner... -too lazy to make the fix this moment-)
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