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Reviews for Among The Mad

By : IdentityUnKnown
  • From ShadowedDragon on March 30, 2008
    I read this a while ago and i lived it! YAY for the MAD! Muwahahaha. I love how you added the Alice in wonderland quotes at the end. It really does tie in pretty well with Hellsing.
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  • From RMW on May 17, 2007
    O_O!!! That Alucard is such a tease... :P.


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  • From MistressMizu on March 21, 2007
    There wasn't any explicit scenes. I'm a little sad, but it was still well done. I liked it a lot. >:3 I'd love to hear more but I think it's good as a one-shot.
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  • From KarenLioncourt on February 27, 2007
    Oh sorry, "thouch" is supposed to be "touch". My english isn't at it's best... :P
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  • From KarenLioncourt on February 27, 2007
    By the settings I mean mainly Seras's room and Integra's office. Alucard's "prison" is not included. There I think the mood is set quite nicely;

    "Though there were lights strung overhead, they were old and many of them were burnt out."

    and

    "She could see the deep crimson of his coat, and the outline of his hat laying on the tabletop, giving the appearance of a puddle of blood..."

    One benefit of writing fanfiction is that most of the readers already know the characters and the settings. But just the same, it can never hurt to keep reminding them of what they already know. By doing that you can also put your own thouch to it. Like you did with Alucard's hat. Everyone knows it's wide and red, but I've never thought about it as a puddle of blood before. That was a nice thouch.



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  • From KarenLioncourt on February 27, 2007
    Hehe. ^^ I enjoyed this. I was a little put out that you cut out the more intimate parts, but the witty ending sort of made up for it. If you wanted to improve anything, perhaps you could give more details about the settings. I think much of the intensity in the story comes from the characterizations. Those felt very vivid, me like!
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  • From Crystalwren on February 17, 2007
    Yummy. I like very much. I espcially like the 'Alice in Wonderland' touches. It's appropriate in so many ways.
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  • From MedeaDemonblood on February 02, 2007
    You are an excellent writer. Please tell me you have more stories.
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  • From MissingKitsune47 on January 14, 2007
    i can't get over how you seem to have gotten them so very close to the cannon characters. it's spooky. really great story. love it
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  • From ANON - TheEndOfAllThingsGoodAndBad on January 06, 2007
    I kinda wanted to read a plot like this for quite a while, one where Serras decides to try going to find Alucard in his room, rather than always the other way around.

    I only resent that it wasn't longer.

    “Beware the Jabberwock, my son! The jaws that bite, the claws that catch! Beware the Jubjub bird, and shun the frumious Bandersnatch!”

    Chiao,
    TEOATG&B
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  • From ANON - CountryWhoDunnit on January 02, 2007
    *LOVE* it, beautifully written and all. Kudos!
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  • From ANON - jlucpitard on January 01, 2007
    A nice interpretation of the anime relationships between them.
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