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Reviews for One Shot Smut

By : nimblnymph
  • From ANON - sauncha on August 19, 2007
    Yay! Thanks for the hot Hentia action between Hakkai and Yaoni. I'm a huge fan of siayuki yaoi as much as the next fan girl, but it's nice to see a little man/women ineraction to break up the tons of yaoi out there.
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  • From fangirlqueen on July 02, 2007
    Woooo!! i love storys where hakkai shows his dark side! >_< eek! be still my heart!
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  • From ANON - gen on May 15, 2007
    hmmm. yeah, i was expecting doku/jien (easier to use jien).
    a friend and i were debating jien and kou.
    i said jien holds a special place with kou.
    if you notice, he is the only one who can call kougaiji by his nick, kou
    kou, being a demon lord, must be treated with respect, and doku (jien)
    is very familiar with him.... there must be a story regarding that familiarity, yes?

    interesting masturbation scene you had....

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  • From ANON - gen on May 15, 2007
    well done smut. and since i'm 39, 58 person, this story falls into one of my preferred pairing, which is good.

    the story was nicely done, and the progression is believable.
    a nice one.
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  • From vampslyr on February 01, 2007
    That was totally hot, best one shot so far. I'd like to find out how Goku learned to kiss and with whom.
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  • From fuzzybunnytoo on January 29, 2007
    You did a really good job! I would not have thought it could have been done and done in character but I think you did it at least that is my openion.
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  • From ANON - Lacerta3 on January 29, 2007
    This was awesome! I specially liked the third chapter, but all of them were actually pretty good. Keep writing!
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  • From ANON - jayree05 on January 29, 2007
    mmmm... good stuff
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  • From fuzzybunnytoo on January 20, 2007
    Reviewing Chapter one-- Oh, wow, This was written very nicely. So many of them are just the same thing all the time but this was written really well and I enjoyed it very much. It was very hot, too which doesn't hurt the story. lol
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  • From blackazuresoul on January 17, 2007
    Whoohoo! That was hot! I don't normally go for Gojyo/Hakkai, but I cannot deny that your story was intense. Well done!
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  • From ANON - jarm on January 14, 2007
    One heavy shot of perfect smut!
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  • From ANON - guanyin_kun on January 14, 2007
    Well written and scorchingly hot! I enjoyed your portrayal of Hakkai examining his eyes wondering how the jealous dark jade had gotten in there. And his discovery by Gojyo. HAHA and Gojyo's lame excuse of "situating his sick ass." Yes, definately a keeper in my HD. I hope you don't mind.


    Thank you for writing. Hope to read more from you soon.
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  • From ANON - jayree05 on January 14, 2007
    mmmm... smut
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