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Reviews for 30 Seconds to Mars

By : YamiBakura
  • From Blackwidina on January 29, 2010
    Every time I read this, I cry. Seriously, I can't give it higher praise than that. This is so beautiful and moving and half the time, I don't know if I'm bawling because I'm happy or sad.

    Thank you.
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  • From ANON - xillah on May 06, 2009
    Well, unlike everyone else, I can't blow sunshine up your rear about this--You really shouldn't use cancer as a tool for slash. There's nothing romantic about dying of cancer--in love or otherwise. If you've ever actually experienced it--even second-hand--it's a very nasty and PAINFUL slow-rotting disease. They don't load up cancer patients with morphine because "it won't hurt". This could've been overlooked if the writing/situation was at least somewhat realistic, but unfortunately... Sorry this had to be an ACTUAL critique, but look on the bright side; hearing the bad along with the good will serve more than a writer's ego by making them better writers.

    By the way--the "bed-thing" is an examination table.
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  • From ANON - Kira on February 08, 2008
    oh, that was so sad... The last sentences I can't stop crying

    Wonderfull story, really.
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  • From xLyracax on September 03, 2007
    This was so sad but so cute, i love the twins! construstive critisism: you could have extended either parts to include what happened after they died, or after the new twins were born. other than that i loved it good job
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  • From ANON - Shia on August 06, 2007
    .....AWW! They name their reincarnations after them... -tear-
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  • From ANON - Shia on August 06, 2007
    Gahh... I started tearing up when the doctor and Kaoru were talking, and then I cried when they died. -sniffle- It's so good though... need to read the next chapter xD
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  • From ANON - Olliegami on July 07, 2007
    Oh Gosh. What a wonderful fic...

    I couldn't help but cry though. Wonderful..
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  • From ANON - inuyoukai8 on April 28, 2007
    beautiful, sad but so beautiful. After I read the last part, I just sat very quietly for a while. Then a friend came in and asked what's up? I just looked at him and started bawling!. He is still trying to figure it out LoL. Great work!
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  • From Levia on April 19, 2007
    omg! They're dead. *weeps*
    Nicely written and very IC.
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  • From ANON - SkyLark on January 24, 2007
    OMG it's sooo sad and yet happy all in one I love it. I recently lost someone dear to me to cancer and so I can relate to the waiting nd the finding out that the person is going to die but I must say as far as all the angsty stuff that happened there was still a lota awsome stuff nd I believe you have captured the twins personalities perfictly! though now my thoughts travel to how the host club would manage to continue I mean I'm sure they would lose a lot of people who came spacifically to see the incestual relationship that the twins had but um ya I think I'm thinking too far into this fic lol sry but I must thank you for an awsome fic
    till next review Ja-ne

    ~ Cat ~
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  • From ANON - bobii on January 24, 2007
    Oh my god...It's a very rare occasion for me to find a fic that actually makes me cry. This one had me bawling. TT___TT It was so good, too. Very well written and beleivable.
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  • From Rainbow2202 on January 22, 2007
    OMg... I love it. Its so sad, but at the same time cute. Very well done!
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  • From GravitationInnocence on January 20, 2007
    wow...one word: amazing. u hit the right spots, and ur creativity was outstanding. cannot wait to read more from you!
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  • From GravitationInnocence on January 20, 2007
    oh...my...gosh....

    i cant stop crying. this is so sad. i cant decide to hate this fic or be utterly in love with it.
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  • From Alvinna on January 17, 2007
    waaaaaaaa *breaks down and cry* That's just *sob* so sad. You have done a wonderful job. It not manny stories that can make me cry *sob sob*
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