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Reviews for Blood and Pearls

By : Webglam
  • From Windeen on December 11, 2014
    I can't find any good Ester x Ion fics. That's my favorite pairing from Trinity Blood. With Able x Asthe, a close second. I would like, very much, for you to please continue it. This is too short right now to be very good. I'd like for some location info, setting up of the situation (like, how did they end up there, what lead to it..... So on).
    Also, I'm dyslexic. I CAN read perfectly well though. And yours is a very well written fic, so far. My one fic on here is also likely full of grammar and punctuation mistakes. I use a software to proof-read what I write here and on fanfiction net. That software helps me a lot. If you write anymore.... You may want to look into it. Its called: Ginger. Again, thank you for attempting to write a fic about these 2 and, if you are able to do so.... I would like very much for you to please do so. There's not enough about them and what there is, is quite often poorly written without care as to if it was a good attempt or not. Also, they are often full of crude, unromantic language and rude descriptions of things. Yours seems to not be heading in the direction of that.
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  • From scathach1852 on January 10, 2012
    I think this is a cute couple. If you need a beta, let me know. I have a good grasp at grammar and all that stuff. I would be intrigued to see where you were going with this. Not enough Ion/Ester fics out there.
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  • From Moonauthor on February 08, 2010
    OMG I love this. Its a great begining I hope that you continue it.
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  • From Ketto on April 28, 2007
    mmm, the imagery was beautiful. the way you wove the words together just -tasted- so good. i loved it. please continue. I don't know how to explain it, but i could see and feel everything you described like it was silk against the skin. gorgeous work; keep it up :)

    ~Mel
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  • From poornmiserable on April 08, 2007
    please continue... this is actually my favorite pairing ...if possible could you email me for an update
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  • From luvzsmut777 on February 06, 2007
    I had to do this one over! and boy am I pissed! Anyway, I'll keep it short and sweet! I absolutely love the pair! I love SMUT! I loved your story! and would love for you to continue writing about Ion & Esther! LOVE IT! ~^_^~ So, please continue writing... FOR ALL OUR SAKES! DON'T KEEP US WAITING 4-EVER!
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  • From on January 24, 2007
    I kinda liked it, but... um... it's not a drabble. Gomen! ::sweatdrop:: Still, I thought it was sweet. ^^
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  • From animebarb on January 19, 2007
    I think you have the beginnings of an interesting story. You do need a beta or Word, someone or something to help you with spelling and grammer. Plus, why can't a graphic artist be a writer??? You certainly have a good start here. As for the paring, well anime characters tend to look young when actually they aren't. Especially Ion, he's age could be anthing from 100 to over 600, considering what he is. And Esther is old enough to be in the order, so I'm assuming she's not 10. But that's just me. Keep going, you'll get that spelling and grammer thing licked.
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  • From blackrose24 on January 19, 2007
    Yes! Finally someone wrote an EsterXIon pairing! :D I've been waiting forever for someone to write this. *hugs* Please continue. ^^ I might write one myself, but don't expect anything from me soon.
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  • From CoffeeGyrl on January 18, 2007
    I like this pairing just fine and your title is very nice. I'm frustrated by this new age thing but I will definatly try to watch out for your updates.
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