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Reviews for The Unexpected II

By : FAKEmpregnator
  • From KatzeRaoul on June 14, 2008
    Please update once a week a sooner. If you do chibi DA well give you a cookie!!!!!! Gods, I can't wait to read the wedding chapters, I just hope that nothing goes wrong. That would make chibi sad. See you in next chap. until then bye love!!!!!!!!!! *smiles*
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  • From KatzeRaoul on June 02, 2008
    I am so happy that this was updated. Can't wait for the wedding. *smiles*
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  • From mls1971 on June 02, 2008
    love the new chapter!!! keep up the great job!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Mazy3261 on May 11, 2008
    You are a miracle worker! Thank you for updating so quickly. That sounds like one hell of a party. I can't believe that Dee and the dancer who's name escapes me dated once! That was awesome! Thanks for the update!!!
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  • From ANON - desertblue on May 09, 2008
    I am a die heart fan of this story because you are such a good writer. I was wondering if you could show me where I could find the scanlations of the second season of FAKE. I have read almost all the FAKE fanfictions on this site and you are the best writer I have ever read. About two years ago this author was writting stories just like you are now and she got me hooked but all of a sudden she disappeared with only leaving this message. "Other authors do not like that I am writing such good stories and they have asked me to leave" I ask that youdo not leave this site until you are done with this story because it would crush me and your many other loyal fans.
    Thankyou desertblue
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  • From KatzeRaoul on May 07, 2008
    I would like to see what the new FAKE looks like but I don't no your e-mail to ask of the link to get me there. SO WHAT IS IT???? *cries* me want DEE and RYO!!!!!!
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  • From KatzeRaoul on May 07, 2008
    First I would like to thank you for your review of my very first story. I am really happy that you liked it, it means alot coming from you!!!*smiles* Okay, now to my review of Dee's party. All I have to say is that I am so mad that I DID NOT GET INVITED *pouts* That to me tops Ryo's hands down. Not that Ryo' was boring by no means is that true but Dee' was far more exciting. I am really glad that you updated so fast, can't wait for the next chap. UNTIL THEN BYE LOVE!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 06, 2008
    Brilliant as always mpregor! And thanks for getting this chapter up so fast it really made my day today. And just wondering, are you a native new yorker? Cause if you aren't then I really feel ashamed of myself since I haven't even heard of some of these places, have heard but never seen some, and the rest I haven't seen in almost 10 years (and no I'm not THAT old. I'm only 21 but I haven't seen coney island since I was like 9 or 10). But anyways keep up the good work. We're looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - digianimegirl on May 06, 2008
    I want to just say I found it very amusing that Dee seems to be friends with 3/4 of L'Arc~en~Ciel :) Great as always
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  • From mls on May 06, 2008
    loved dee's party. can't wait to read the next chapter!!!! keep up the great work!!!!!!
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  • From WaterShadow on May 02, 2008
    Have you ever considered using your Carrier concept to write actual books? The depth of your research into the FAKE universe and your incredible verbosity and detail really makes me (1) glad you're willing to produce fanfiction of this quality and (2) that you write AT ALL. I'm so appreciative of your willingness to go into depth with Dee and Ryo's backgrounds that you're creating characters that seem to fit right in! Matoh-san ought to know and approve of this, because I know I certainly do! I love what you've done with Ryo's progression from meek-but-tough to tough! He's become a regular wolf!

    ...and somehow, Dee is utterly appropriate in his role as pregnant man. I see him being so nurturing to Bicky (in his own way) in the series, and you've just expanded that to its natural conclusion. Thank you so much!

    I eagerly await your next chapter in the saga!

    WS
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  • From ANON - Mazy3261 on April 29, 2008
    Yes! Another update! You really had me going with the arrest in the beggining, there. Very tricky! Anyway, I love the update please do it again as soon as you are able!
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  • From KatzeRaoul on April 28, 2008
    GODS, I KNOW I SAID THIS BEFORE SOMEWHERE BUT TO SOMEONE ELSE!!!! BUT HERE I GO AGAIN: GOD I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!! LIKE I SAID TO HER I KNOW, I KNOW THATS SO GAY BUT, IT'S TRUE!!!!!! It must be my birthday and I just don't know about it, because both of my favorite stories were updated back to back. This is so good, you always have me hooked from start to finish with every chapter. Oh, and can I know how she did that with the ping pong balls.*laughs* Here's hopeing that Dee gets a chance to see it. His eyes will be buggin out for sure. Can't wait for the next chapter, until then BYE LOVE!!!!*smiles*


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  • From ANON - Anon on April 27, 2008
    Oh man I'm STILL trying to get over that stripper! That chapter was awwwwwwsome! And I do sympathize with Dee and the sushi craving, it definately sucks (especially if u start craving at like 1 1/2 to 2 months, it TOTALLY SUCKS!). But I digress, keep up the good stuff. I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
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  • From mls on April 27, 2008
    loved this chapter!!!! can't wait to read the next!!! keep up the great work!!!!!!!!
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