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Reviews for The Unexpected II

By : FAKEmpregnator
  • From ANON - shiva45 on April 11, 2008
    The story is great, I had no net for a while and was glad I could catch up with what I missed. The Army base you put in this chapter brought back memories for me, it was where I was born. It was great seeing a place where I had came from. I did not know anyone had remembered that there was an Army base in Japan. Keep up the good work, can't wait for the next installment.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 04, 2008
    Great story I really enjoy it! I've just finished reading bothe the unexpected 1 and 2 and I have to say that I love them both and sorry for not reviewing both of them individually. And I have to say I feel bad now for my ex. Looking at the moodswings that Dee went through in the series I know I was a real *beep* during my pregnancy. Oh well all that aside, looking forward to the next chappie!
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  • From ANON - Vic on April 03, 2008
    Yay! More Unexpected II always makes my day brighter. This latest part made me cry, but they were happy tears. Still enjoying the story and I think you're still handling the whole situation superbly. By the by, Vince is the coolest original character ever.
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  • From mls on April 02, 2008
    loved this chapter!!!! can't wait to read the next one!!!!! keep up the great work!!!!!
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  • From KatzeRaoul on April 01, 2008
    I am so happy to see this updated, and you are so welcome, you are a wonderful writer. I am also very happy to see that the wedding plans are going so well, now fingers are crossed that the wedding day will go just as well. Plus, I am so glad that Ryo' family are happy for them and treated Dee with the respect he deserves. Can't wait for chapter 17, until then bye Love!!!


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  • From ANON - Sol_Luna1 on March 31, 2008
    I LOVED "The Unexpected I" I admit I was hesitating to read about a pregnant man but It just made me Love the Dee/Ryo characters even more.
    I became a FAKE fan some years back after getting ahold of the Mangas. I was dissapointed that it ended on book 7. I wrote a lot of little scripts and stories to contuniue it on my own but they were just for me to read. just recently maybe a month ago I was flipping through channels and FAKE the Animie was on! I had totally forgot that there was an Animie and when I did know of it i thought it was just in Japanese. This started me to google trying to find the dvd's from the Animie series. While I was searching, I came upon the FanFiction.net and to my utter joy! a FAKE fanfic commuity! that lead to the Live Journals and AdultFanFiction.net.
    I read all 26 chapters of The Unexpected I and just finished all 15 of Unexpected II (Im hooked!) and Im so glad that there are a group of people out there keeping FAKE Dee/Ryo and the characters alive!!

    Your stories of Dee and Ryo have kept me ooohing and ahhing so much I cant wait for the Chibi to be born!!, im glad you are extending it though almost going day by day because it just makes it all the more exciting! Looking forward to more of your fabulous saga!! :)

    Your New Fan

    Sol_Luna1
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  • From mls on March 02, 2008
    i love this story!!!!! keep up the great work!!!!! i can't wait to read the next chapter!!!!!!!!!
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  • From KatzeRaoul on March 02, 2008
    GOD I COULD JUST KISS YOU RIGHT KNOW *CHU* I SQUEALED WITH JOY WHEN I SAW THAT THIS WAS UPDATED!!!!!!!!!!!! The whole thing with Ted, Marty, Ryo and Dee had me crying I was laughing so much. STORKS *god* my side hurts. Oh, I am also glad that the press conference went so well and hoping that because Dee WAS the one to do this that the people will step up and help put this bastard behind bars or better yet SIX FEET UNDER!!!! Before he has a chance to attack someone else, but more importantly Dee. At first I thought that Elena was the one to ask what they wanted girl or boy? But it wasn't. Happy that nothing went wrong during the time for them to leave, that everything went according to plan. And, the get together with Ryo's grandma Estelle *lets out held breath* it went splended *smiles* Can't wait for chapter 16, till then BYE LOVE
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  • From KatzeRaoul on February 24, 2008
    PLEASE I'M BEGGING YOU UPDATE THIS WONDERFUL STORY I AM SO HOOKED AND MUST KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!!!!!!!!*gets on hands and knees, and stays there till story is updated*
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  • From KatzeRaoul on February 17, 2008
    Please update that son-of-a-bitch needs to be caught!!!!!!!!!! DEE' and his baby' life depends on it.
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  • From KatzeRaoul on February 15, 2008
    PLEASE UPDATE SOON LOVE THIS STORY AND WE MUST CATCH THAT GOD DAMN KILLER BEFORE HE HAS A CHANCE TO GET TO DEE!!!!!!!!!!!


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  • From mls on January 27, 2008
    can't wait for the next chapter!!!!! Love that jj and drake got together!!!! Keep up the good work!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - digianimegirl on January 02, 2008
    Hi. Usually a lurker, but thought I'd just give a quick review to say LOVE the story (and now I know your "true" identity...I don't have to sad that the other stories aren't being updated :). Also I was wondering if you're taking suggestions for baby names. If you are I have one. *off to read more*
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  • From ANON - yoli on December 09, 2007
    Love the Korea comment. My sister and her friends complain about the same thing and getting more suits is top on her list when she goes back.
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  • From hotgirl499 on December 08, 2007
    Wow! Nice very nice me likeee. I knew i could count on you to update hehe. upadate soon okiedokey! ja ne
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