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Reviews for The Unexpected II

By : FAKEmpregnator
  • From mls on November 16, 2007
    i love this story!!!This is better than the graphic novels!!!!!!!!
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  • From hotgirl499 on November 09, 2007
    Nope i haven't given up on u and i won't ever i will wait forever until the story is finishes no matter how long it takes. nah this is a bunch of bullshit i wrote exceot the part that i won't give up on u thats true. I'll problably come back a couple of weeks later begging for a sooner update hehe. i got some problems yes but hey can't help it its just me. i won't ever give up on u ok sayanora update soon ja ne
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  • From ANON - Kuromei on November 09, 2007
    Mmmm, lemon for a bonus chapter. -w-~ Sounds yummy! XD I can hardly wait. X3
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  • From ANON - Lauren on October 28, 2007
    Oh my gosh, this is all so sweet! I just can't stop reading! I am really anticipating the meeting of both of Ryo's grandmother and their reaction to Dee. Will they be all upty about it or will they accept him with flawless grace and love?
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  • From ANON - Alba on October 10, 2007
    Oah wow I started reading this fic from the very begining about two days ago and I'm already cought up. As a result i'm not acustomed to waiting to see what happens so post please! You are doing a wonderful job keeping everyone in character, which I have found to me a problem in other mpreg fics that i've read. I also am really enjoying the romantic element so of corse i'm just dieing to see what happens on valintines day.
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  • From ANON - Kuromei on October 01, 2007
    And now we're that much closer to the wedding. ^w^ The fluffiness between Dee and Ryo made go go "Awwwww" more than once. ^//w//^ See you at the next chapter! =D *huggles*
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  • From ANON - Vic on October 01, 2007
    SQUEEE! I was thrilled to see that you finally updated. I started reading The Unexpected 1 about two weeks ago and am waiting with the traditional baited breath for more of # 2 now! My partner and I both love FAKE and this fic to death, so good luck writing more soon! This is one of the best fan fics I've ever read in any fandom, so you're definately doing something right.
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  • From dawnmm on October 01, 2007
    please-please dont take so long to update again - if i could figure out how to do live journal i would however i am an over 40 mother who just loves to read and your unexpected had me enthralled from the beginning. I do beta if you need (I saw in earlier chapter you did) I have reread unexpected 1 about 4 times already and read 11 almost as many thanks for sharing AND UPDATE SOON!!
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  • From TrulyWished on September 30, 2007
    I'm still enjoying it a lot but I think you're going a bit far with the sappy mush. Even as soon-to-be parents, every other word as 'I love you' is a bit much. Otherwise, it's a great fic and I'm really glad I found it again. Keep it up!
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  • From hotgirl499 on September 23, 2007
    Excuse me but what the heck is taking so long to update the chapter is it being updated somewhere else cause if it is tell me so i can read it come on its taking forever i'm sure u have some time on ur hands left to write the story or is itwrtiers block well i sorry to hear that if it is. Excuse me for being rude but this story is just to good to not be i'm into it like hell man come on update plz
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  • From hotgirl499 on September 08, 2007
    Come on when are you going to update i'm waiting her dying
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  • From Kuromei on September 01, 2007
    This is fic is so good! I can really fell Dee and Ryo's emotions with them. It made me want to laugh, cry and laugh my ass off some more. You're that good a writer, my friend. I bow to you. *bows*

    Now, to fangirl mode: Squee! X3 The wedding's getting closer! XD I can't wait for the next chapter! ^o^
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 19, 2007
    Please update if there is anymore to the story cuz i read the first one many times and want to know more so please update
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  • From hotgirl499 on August 12, 2007
    nice its getting really good. Plz update soon and keep up the good work
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  • From dawnmm on August 11, 2007
    excellent as usual please update soon i know it could be a while but im keeping my fingers crossed for no more than a week. just cant wait for more--thanks for sharing
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