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Reviews for The Unexpected II

By : FAKEmpregnator
  • From perfect_blue_rogue on August 11, 2007
    lol. i really love this story. ya know now that drake and j.j. are together, don't cha think they should get checked out incase one of them is a carrier before knocking each other up? cause then i could see dee and ryo laughing their asses off and chief and the commish sighing and rubbing thier foreheads in pain.
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  • From ANON - Mazy3261 on August 05, 2007
    Wow! I really love the new chapter! I hope Dee's okay. I'm glad that you'll be posting soon. Reading a new chapter always makes my day! Thanks for posting!!!
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  • From ANON - Sofia on August 02, 2007
    I have read both stories and can't wait for the next chapter. It does keep me on the edge of my seat chapter seven was certainly a cliffhanger.. thanks for these two stories it is really sweet.. and i love it thanks again Sofia
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  • From ANON - LucianaSkyle on August 01, 2007
    AAAAAAAAAAAAAhhhhhhhh Cliffy.. Poor Dee!!!!,

    U CANT MAKE US WAITTTT
    WE NEED MOREEEE
    *Shakes Back and Forth*

    I Love IT!!!!!!
    xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

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  • From dawnmm on August 01, 2007
    the cliffy was awesome pleeeaasseee dont let us wait a month or more for the next part i am really engrossed inthis series and love it to death thanks
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  • From moontatoo on July 31, 2007
    oh no !! poor dee ! please don't leave us all hanging too long ...I remember nearly passing out once when I was pregnant with my first. I was standing in line at the bank and everything started to go grey. I have no idea how I made it through the transaction, or walked across the parking lot to my car. By the time I sat down everything had gone dim and my hearing was gone too. I just sat there until gradually the feeling passed...It is a scary thing, moreso when you are alone or separated from people you can trust. You captured Dee's fear perfectly. The main thing you feel when you are pregnant is the sense of not being one person in one body anymore, but two.

    Well, that's enough about me . Love it anytime I see an update to this saga. Keep up the great work !

    Moon
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  • From ANON - Bamseline on July 11, 2007
    Hey, Great story! Love it! XD
    Anyway, I noticed you wrote about the FAKE extras in your AN. I have some good news, you can get the translated scans of extra 1-4 from here http://yes-rhade-djs.livejournal.com/
    Happy reading! XD
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  • From ANON - desertblue on July 07, 2007
    I have been read your stories for awhile now and can't wait for the next up date. The story is great to read because the reader really never knows what is going to happen next which is good for a writer becaus e yu keep our interest. I was just wondering if you could send me a link of the new FAKE scans. Thankyou and keep writing!
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  • From lemon47 on July 03, 2007
    Lovely chapter, as always! I am really looking forward to the next one.
    By the way, I haven't been able to find the raw scans of Part 5 of the Fake Extras online yet..
    If you have been able to scan them, would you be able to share them?
    I would really appreciate it!
    You said to e-mail you but ofcourse I don't know your e-mail, so I hope you see this.
    Thanks for everything! Hope to hear back from you soon. Let me know if it would be easier to e-mail them to me and I'll give you my e-mail.
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  • From ANON - Angels_Will on June 26, 2007
    Yheee yippy sqweeeeee

    *jumping up and down on the chair*
    More more MORE MORE, Next Next NEXT NEXT.....

    Ok, now I've got this out of my system. O wait I think 1 more YESSSSSSS.

    I love this story. looking forward to the rest
    (like that wasn't obvious)*rolls eyes at her self*


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  • From dawnmm on June 25, 2007
    definately worth the wait but i hope it is sooner been checking everyday i love this and how youve personalized them to the point i can actually see them-thanks for sharing
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  • From moontatoo on June 25, 2007
    what great update ! This story keeps getting better and better. I can't wait until Dee feels the baby kick !

    I would love to see any scanlations you have . I'm at A2M4snj@comcast.net if you would like to send me a link.

    Moontatoo
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  • From dawnmm on May 24, 2007
    what happened with the school and marks parents still on pins and needles here you write such an engaging story had to reread the 1st one already
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  • From ANON - Angels_Will on May 18, 2007
    I love your writing.
    It hits all the rite spots.
    I'm eagerly awaiting the next Chapter

    mmm...
    as for Fake Volumes
    I can't email.... not aloud
    But (don't tell anyone)

    Fake volume 6 -----> http://www.sendspace.com/file/gmvkgv
    Fake volume 7 -----> http://www.sendspace.com/file/5b5n7f

    Cant find Volume 5 sorry

    Angels_Will
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  • From dawnmm on May 16, 2007
    fantastic cant wait for more thank you-thank you
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