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Reviews for The Unexpected II

By : FAKEmpregnator
  • From on May 16, 2007
    :D! I think this is my favorite chapter so far. Very well done!
    I'll be eagerly awaiting the next chapter- thank you for sharing this wonderful story!
    All the best!
    I wish I could speak japanese, so I could understand what they are saying in the extras, damnit..
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  • From ANON - Dee on May 10, 2007
    Please I am dying here, where is the rest?? I am seriously begging here, please update soon, I love the story!
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  • From ANON - Ayeshagirl on May 05, 2007
    I already wrote this review once but I shall try to remember it, damned 'daily moment of down time'!

    Dee snapped, I so knew he would. I am totally on his side though, and understand exactly why he is pissed off, I would be too...

    Wonderful writing as always, you managed to suck me in and really make me feel for the characters. Hence my current anger and desire to kill Aunt Elena and even, dare I say it, Ryo, although I do think he is just misunderstood.

    Keep up the good work.

    I hope dee gets his yacht. :D
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  • From on May 04, 2007
    ..waaah! it can't stop there! i have trouble being patient, but i'll try *taps foot rapidly* amazing chapter, i'm really looking forward to more! keep up the great work- you've definitely got me hooked.
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  • From Crya2Evans on April 30, 2007
    Noooooo! You left it there??? With me hanging on the edge of my seat, my heart pounding in my chest for the sheer emotion of it all?!? Maahhh, and I thought I was good at cliffhangers. Was so looking forward to this update and now I'm back where I started, anxious for more. Update soon... please?
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 30, 2007
    ::gasp:: ..... I feel soo bad for Dee...your stories are GREAT I love reading them!!! please please please please time infinity and 10 update soon!!!
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  • From moontatoo on April 30, 2007
    wow, you're the one translating the extras ? thank you so much ! I look for those constantly.

    oh , poor dee. poor ryo too . ryo is so clueless, he really has no idea what dee is going through with this wedding planning. yikes , I can see an even worse blow up coming. someone is going to have to convince ryo other than dee.

    and dee has no clue ryo is doing this for him . neither is listening to the other one.


    glad I'm an old married lady , way past all this , until my first kid has to get hitched...

    great update , you're audience is still here and still waiting for more !

    Moontatoo
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  • From Ayeshagirl on April 01, 2007
    Excellent, as always.
    Looking forwards to the next chapter. :)
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  • From moontatoo on March 24, 2007
    what a beautiful , nice long update . I have been anxiously awaiting more of this story ; you made my Saturday by providing it ! Once again , your detailing of the carrier experience is extreemly well thought out . the sonogram was very touching , I remember I cried at mine too with both my kids .I especially love how you're having Dee remain completely in chararcter , while evolving at the same time . ryo too . and offsetting the horror of the killings with beautiful details of new life as well .
    and didn't you say a little something will happen with my favorite pair , Drake and JJ too ....?
    I also know how annoyingly busy RL can be , when all us fanfic addicts want to do is write !! but care for yourself first . your audience will still be here when you post .


    Moon
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  • From Ayeshagirl on February 21, 2007
    I always check to see if this story is updated and today it was!!! *grins*

    As always, I love this plot and I adore Dee, keep up the good work :D

    Ayeshagirl
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  • From moontatoo on February 18, 2007
    fabulous chapter ! this has potential for a lot of drama and you keep it moving very well. I love the developing pregnancy too. can't wait to 'feel' the baby's first kick ! I had a crappy weekend but finding this chapter ready to read was a wonderful treat. don't doubt that I will read every word you type in this lovely , original epic.

    moon
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  • From scriobhannsi on January 23, 2007
    Oh thank GOD! That's all I have to say at the moment. I was hoping you were as fast a writer as you seemed based on the length of the parts and story its self and how long it took you to put out.

    I'm glad you aren't going to bring Vince and David closer up. As good as some of the writers are out there, that is my biggest pet peeve--non-cannon characters that are portrayed in the "perfect support" role so people can play up angst in the main characters. I am also very glad I didn't have to wait a month for this fic to start!

    I love the traditional "aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah! WEDDING" stuff you're doing. I have yet to see any couple manage to plan a flawless, argumentless wedding. I could tell stories about a Wedding From HELL that would make your hair curl (and it was planned so nice and sentimental and small too). You've portrayed both Ryo and Dee in a way that makes sense. I do think that Dee caved a little too soon, but that's probably my own stubborness speaking there. However, you have drawn me in to the story in a way that I evaluate myself to see how I would react in the situation. Good job!

    Btw, I love how you're pulling Diana in. She isn't on Dee's side or Ryo's, but she is recognizing that Dee can't completely handle their normal interaction right now and is treating him with the same kindness shown in book 7. Nice.
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  • From moontatoo on January 21, 2007
    lovely new start to a new trimester ! The promise of a Drake/JJ subplot makes my day ; I don't even care if it's platonic, just as long as they get some text. Keep up the installments, you have a faithful follower in me .

    Moon
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  • From shiva45 on January 21, 2007
    You just keep getting better and better, you have the mood swings down pat, and the wedding angst is perfect. I am planning my wedding now as we speak. And I know what Dee is going through. Keep up the good work, and I look forward the the next chapters.
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  • From on January 21, 2007
    yay, the second trimester is here! and I get the very first review! :) anyways, I love this story and I'm delighted to see the second part up. keep up the good work, I'll be waiting for the next installment of this beautiful story :)
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