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Reviews for The Unexpected II

By : FAKEmpregnator
  • From ANON - kirie on July 29, 2009
    i was wondering if you were going to be doing a unexpected 3. i love your stories and i really hope to read more of them. thanks your fan Kirie.


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  • From yaoilover08 on June 30, 2009
    awesome story i was wondering if you had a account for fanfiction.net where this story might be at. and again i loved this story alot. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Maddie on May 27, 2009
    Have you not posted the third part? :P If you do have it somewhere could you send me a link?
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  • From ANON - asclepias on January 26, 2009
    Please update soon do not like cliffeeee. thanks keep up the great work
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  • From ANON - asclepias on January 25, 2009
    Hi please update i have read all the chapters i am rereading them.. thanks wonderful how you put everything together..
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  • From ANON - Kuromei on September 05, 2008
    lmfao XD It's been months since I read the story, and boy am I sorry. Look at all I missed! X3 But now I'm all caught up, and I loved chappie 31 immensely. lol Payback's a bitch, indeed. *lols even more* XD I can't wait for the rest of the honeymoon, and I'm rooting for the rest of the 27th to catch that freak by the time Dee and Ryo get back.

    I might not come back to the story for a while (rl getting in the way and such), but rest assured I'll come back eventually. ^w^ *hug* Oh! And I look forward to TUIII! =D
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  • From Erin2468 on August 30, 2008
    Wow!! I just finished reading all of TU I and what you have posted of TU II. Took me a week but man! This story is AMAZING. I love everything about it...except all the bitches down south and of course the killer. I dont love them lol =D The wedding was crazy with all the detail, geez! dream wedding to the max, i'm jealous lol. JJ and Drake are my favorite little side story, hope there is more about them in later chapters/ TU III. Keep up the great work! I'm excited for the next time you get in an update ^__^
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  • From SoLuna1 on August 29, 2008
    HEY THERE!! remember me?? *Sol_Luna1* I have been following your awesome series and I STILL Love it!! I have been wanting to review but it seems like I always have trouble logging on to be able to post reviews.
    I enjoy your story SO MUCH I'm always checking for new chapters. Keep up the great work :)

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  • From ANON - Mazy3262 on August 25, 2008
    Yes! An update! I liked this chapter, even though it was kind of a downer. Don't get me wrong! It's exactly what it needs to be, but it makes you feel bad for Dee. Poor baby! If I was him, I probably would have killed someone by now! Well, keep up the great work, and thank you for another awesome chapter!
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  • From ANON - Kay on August 01, 2008
    Admittedly, I started reading this 'cause I was curious as to how a Fake mpreg would work out - I'm a fan of mpreg if it's done well, and I must say, there is so much pure love in this story that I find my belief completely affirmed. I think few writers realize that a good explanation is great, and you have it, but what works even better is when there's so much honest emotion behind the characters that we can't help but fall into it. :) And there's so much in this fic, between all levels of family and friends and things beautiful. There's funny, there's sweet, there's anxiousness. S'great.

    And also, even though I started reading it because I love the idea of Dee being pregnant as opposed to Ryo... somewhere, somehow, I've become completely and totally in love with your JJ! HE'S JUST SO TERRIBLY ADORABLE. XD I already loved JJ to pieces as my favorite, but Drake and JJ in this are fascinating since we only get to see glimpses of what's going on in their own troubles. I have to say, I'm dying to know what happened the night of the wedding. *crosses fingers* Drake, dammit, you be good to your partner! Give JJ some love! Rawr.

    (Furthermore, thanks to you, I can't get the idea of pregnant JJ out of my head. He'd be so... tiny-pregnant-adorable-crazy. XD Poor Drake. But seriously, pregnant JJ? Could anyone keep their hands off of him? ... WOULD THE PRECINCT SURVIVE? He's a distracting idea. It's not usually my style to hint at things I want to happen - I prefer to let authors take the reigns - but omg, if ever in anything you wrote were JJ to be pregnant, sequels or whatever, Iwouldbeyourslaveforlife.)

    So! I'm very much enjoying this, and I admit, I'm stalking your lj in hopes of any future updates. (Not that I don't like your Torchwood stuff, too!
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  • From ANON - RaiL on June 29, 2008
    Ahhh! I've been away from this wonderful story way too long! >.< I'm at Chapter 9 right now and every single page is just a complete joy to read. I don't think I could ever tire of your writing style. It's very fluid and there's a comfortable consistency to it that you've maintained all the way through this epic fic! I'm gonna go back to the happiness that is having loaded all three PSP pages with chapters of your fic. XD
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 23, 2008
    *pulls out .45 caliber and loads it up with a silver bullet* La la la la la *cocks gun and aims* La dee da *BANG* Oh what fun! *Harriet falls to the ground and I drag the useless corpse out* Hope no one minds me taking out the trash!
    I totally loved this chapter. It totally rocked! I just hope JJ and Drake make it in time. Ooh, and for names, I always like Darius for a boy, and how about Soraya for a girl? I don't remember what Darius means (I know it has a meaning) but Soraya is Persian for Princess (I know that cause its my daughter's name and I found it in a great baby name book I have). Till next time. Ja'ne!
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  • From KatzeRaoul on June 23, 2008
    I LOVED TUII I READ ALL OF IT ON LJ AND I MUST SAY THAT THE WEDDING WAS BEAUTIFUL THE SONGS WERE PERFECT FOR THE CEREMONY AND THE RECEPTION. CAN'T WAIT FOR TUIII. Until then BYE LOVE!!!!!!!!!!!!!*smiles*
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  • From ANON - digianimegirl on June 23, 2008
    I would have picked the name Jess, because Jess was very important to Dee, and it always seemed more like a girl name to me.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 18, 2008
    Great chapter as always. I'm looking forward to the wedding chappies! I would have reviewed last chapter but since I had finals, I got kinda lazy (I got lazy with the finals too!) but I did read it. And I'm so happy I finally recognized a place in TU II. When I worked at Radio City a lot of ppl asked me where Tavern on the Green was. Of course I had no clue where it was but now I feel better that I know about one place in the story. That just made my day. Can't wait to see the next one!
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