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Reviews for Wild Strawberries

By : hawker748
  • From ANON - SPike of doom on March 20, 2007
    Another top quality lemon! im looking forward to where your going to go with this.
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  • From ANON - benn454 on March 13, 2007
    Great story Hawker! Operation: Keitaro Nails the Aoyama Women complete lol I was expecting Mo/Kei, but you surprised me with this one. I really like Chiharu's character. Even though she's an OC, she fits perfectly. Good job, and keep this one coming :)
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  • From ANON - lbg on February 11, 2007
    Very readable and interesting so far. I was honestly surprised at the pairing, I thought for certain it was going to be about Motoko. That's not a bad thing though, as the Keitaro/Motoko pairing is overdone at this point. I hope you will continue this.
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  • From ANON - Spike of Doom on February 11, 2007
    very good stuff. id say your quality of 'hawtness' doesnt even neeed to improve its already great and any further improvement will turn all readers into mindless slaves >.< look forward to your next story or a continuation of this 1!

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  • From ANON - Anon on February 09, 2007
    A lot of your stories involve Keitaro with an older woman, so I wasn't really suprised by the pairing (you're losing your edge ^w^). Anyways this is pretty good, however it lacked a lot of the tension that was presented in your previous stories so it is not my favorite by far. I'm hoping for something similair to Blizzard in your next installment of the "Let Keitaro Get Some" saga of yours.

    Also if you could...return to the Evangelion section and give us another gem...Nightshift is getting a little too weird for me (grasping at pairings comes to mind) and I am in the mood for something fresh, and yet still traditional (I like your OC's better).

    Anyways thanks for the good fic, and I hope you continue to make more.
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  • From ANON - SpikeyKun on February 07, 2007
    Keitaro definately didn't seem to resist all that much when Chiharu jumped him... The spark of chemistry Chiharu spoke of must work both ways, although it wasn't particularly apparent despite the story mostly being in Keitaro's perspective...

    Anyways, awesome work as usual! I love how many of your stories leave Keitaro emotionally fucked over... The slight "disturbing" factor is something that's characterized your work in the last year, and prove have much more original content than the standard fare. Please keep it up!


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  • From ANON - Sean on February 06, 2007
    Nice job on the beginning of this story, I look forward to more chapters
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 05, 2007
    Very interesting. It's got a lot of potential for a great fic. The results of the last fight were a bit unclear, but I'm leaning towards the fact that they lost. Correct me if I'm wrong. The fic does a seem similar to Ships in the Night. Now weather that was intentional or not, I'm not sure, but the two do seem to have a lot of similarities in them. Anyway, with that said and done, I can't wait for the next chapter to be up. Hope it's up soon.

    Farezzz
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  • From ANON - jett on February 05, 2007
    I must say, most excellent story, if a bit of a disappointment. I was kind of hoping Keitaro and Motoko would "do the dirty deed" but still very enjoyable. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - D4rK on February 03, 2007
    Damn thats a nice fic waiting some update congrats!!
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  • From Ravenmaster on February 02, 2007
    Hawker Its Very Well Written But the Affair With Chiharu is Confusing. Are you Trying to Kill keitaro?
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  • From ANON - Fenrir on February 01, 2007
    Again, a great story...I love the new couples you come up with. Congrats on another bonafide great fic. But, if you don't mind and I make a request. Could you do a fic with Kitsune and Keitaro? I've never seen one of those...

    Thanks and congrats,
    Fenrir
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  • From chibinari on February 01, 2007
    a continuation of this fic would be most appreciated..can't wait to know what happen next..
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  • From ANON - JockoMegane on January 30, 2007

    Hawker,

    Good work, as always. Quick, dirty (but sweet), and as always you leave the reader with just enough to think about, and a lot to read into the future in the perverted continuities you create.

    Though, I must confess, this is not as good as "Face In The Mirror," which I believe time will prove me correct in considering that piece one of the very best Love Hina fanfiction works.


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