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Reviews for Outer Treatment

By : Sethite
  • From ANON - chilled monkey on January 06, 2011
    This is utter garbage. I have seen some truly rotten fanfics before but this ranks near the top as one of the absolute worst. It's like looking at a pile of vomit.
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  • From on April 04, 2007
    so many mistakes, so little time to count them...in my opioin, the story could've been a lot better if you had corrected the mistakes.
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  • From JayDee on February 15, 2007
    I read your 'Outer Treatment' story recently and it's really hot! My favourite segment is the tentacle rape and impregnation, but the other stuff is cool too, particularly the mention of Michiru Kaitou being raped for hours *after* she passed out. Haven't really much more to add to that except to say that given it is not your native language, you still write better quality English than 90% of the English fanfiction writers.

    Keep up the good work!
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