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Reviews for Hoenn Harem *Author's Note*

By : DarkMaiden
  • From xain34 on October 30, 2007
    take your time DM there's no need to rush honestly. take all the time you need...like i am XD (trying to make all my thoughts come together before i make the second chapter in my story)
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  • From DarkMaiden on October 29, 2007
    I know she saw him in that round =P Later on in this chapter she feels ashamed for not remembering who he was from the start =3

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    Ok there has been some confusion with some emails so I couldn't do it this weekend, I wasn't gonna start without most of the contestants.
    But since I'm gonna have a few free days this week I promise it will be posted by Wednesday (or Thursday tops). If by Friday it's not posted you can hit me in the head all you want =S
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  • From xain34 on October 26, 2007
    On the next table was Mark hanging out with Emma, apparently they were discussing the subject of evolution, Steven was alone on another table next to them pretending not to listen to their conversation, it was obviously interesting him but he wasn’t really the social type of guy.

    Oh my fucking god...that sums up Steven almost perfectly. XD
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  • From aok1992 on October 26, 2007
    That took long...seriously long...i was begining to think you abandoned the story....good chapter though...but there were still a few mistakes.Such as

    "Almost every person that {sinned} up for the Pokemon League had joined the party"

    Sinned or Signed...

    But then you just recovered from....whatever you had...so I cant really say much...
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  • From xain34 on October 25, 2007
    Oh fuck yes! I fianlly got my name back with the capitol letter in it! V FOR VICTORY!!!
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  • From prinny99987 on October 24, 2007
    my real name is jake not jak damn computer but anyways my strategy is i exploit weaknesses and take advantage by using combination moves
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  • From xain34 on October 24, 2007
    lol...volkner XD
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  • From xain34 on October 24, 2007
    um...had to use a small portion of your story or the flash back wouldint have worked....sorry if you want me to remove it let me know ok?
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  • From xain34 on October 24, 2007
    Thanks dark ill get started on the rest of that chapter but i want you to E-Mail me sence the story might contradict your own. O_o johnfnkey@sbcglobal.net
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  • From DarkMaiden on October 24, 2007
    Hello, I'm hoping to update today or tomorrow actually, I'll explain the reason for this huge delay later. Off corse you can use Damien, everyone can use my characters as long as you notify me first and show it to me later =P
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  • From GrimMorrei on October 23, 2007
    Are you going to update soon?
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  • From xain34 on October 09, 2007
    Dark, I want to know if I can use your character Damien for a flashback scene in my story Leave a response please.
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  • From DarkMaiden on September 21, 2007
    The next chapter will be divided into 2 parts, part 1 is just storyline and part 2 will be the battles.
    So everybody can send or change strategies until part 1 is posted (and a little after).
    I've been really busy lately so it will probably take a week until I finish the first part =3
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  • From DarkMaiden on September 07, 2007
    First I would like to thank everybody for 15000 hits ^_^ I actually never thought I would reach this far so soon.

    Now to answer the last review, that is not a stupid question =P I'm just not sure if I can answer correctly.
    What I can say for sure is that you cannot enter the arenas during battles, to use potions ask that pokemon to get near you and use it just like in the anime (that little spray that cures wounds) if your opponent gives you time to do it before attacking that pokemon again (they aren't forced to wait until you finish), using natural healing objects like Lemonades or Fresh Waters might be more usefull because they only need to swallow them, but their not as effective.
    For the other items I know their stupid but all I can say is...use your imagination lol.
    I have no idea how a Defence X works, saying "the pokemon was holding a Defence X so his defence was increased" is good enough, I've never seen the other items in the anime, I'm guessing the leftovers work just like healing berries but you only eat tiny bites from the apple each time...damn that IS stupid.
    But there's no need for so many details, keep it simple ;) Bye **
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  • From xain34 on September 04, 2007
    watch this vid of how he looks http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gSYawSLHH-M by the time you post a new chapter DM he will have already removed the eye-patch (even if i dont post it before hand in my story)
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