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Reviews for Hoenn Harem *Author's Note*

By : DarkMaiden
  • From xain34 on August 27, 2007
    oh one last thing i may post a last chapter for my character when he losses in your fan fiction
    if you dont mind me doing so ill get to work on it as soon as he losses ok?
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  • From xain34 on August 27, 2007
    forgot to add the lvls on that list**
    61 – 65____________100 – 100

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  • From xain34 on August 27, 2007
    Steven pulls out his match sheet and reads it*
    --1º Match--

    Geff (M)___VS___Steven (M)

    Gyarados________Lucario
    Skarmory________Spiritomb
    Blastoise________Gardevoir
    Sneasel__________Regice
    Scizor___________Registeel
    Blaziken_________Regirock

    48 – 63__________60 - 60

    Steven:This should be an interesting battle....Hmm? What is this?
    *Looks down the list to Sams battle*
    Sam (M) ___VS____ Desiree (F)

    Medicham__________Blissey
    Machamp
    Ariados
    Nidoqueen
    Milotic
    Golduck

    Steven:Odd....Only one pokemon...But I have had the librity to fight
    a blissey before they are diffinantly strong...
    In terms of special defence and health...Sam...Now where in the world have I heard
    that name before.....I guess I will find out later...*Walks off outside of the arena to have a ciggertte an hour before his match*
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  • From xain34 on August 27, 2007
    id still like to see my char talk to sam after his match *win or lose* and sam probly asking him if he wanted to watch his match #1 before he left *if my char losses* #2 just for the hell of it *if he wins* and probly something about him beating the shit out of a rocket member before his match or something...*cold sounding voice and uncaring about other people rarly gives other people any mind and either ignore/insults/injures the person or will talk to the person if he/she doesint act like an ass in front of him doesint care wither he win's or losses just loves the thrill of battle *more of steven's personality*
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  • From xain34 on August 27, 2007
    uh oh im in sam's division O_O;
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  • From DarkMaiden on August 27, 2007
    Ok I edited both the Yellow and Orange Divisions. No need to read the Orange battles again, it was just minor adjustments, but the last battle in the Yellow Division was mostly changed.
    I wasn't happy about a forfeit either so I turned it into a simple battle, in the next round all arenas will be adjusted to all pokemon.
    Thank God this will be the last division, my creativity for one on one battles is almost empty now lol, the Fourth Round will be very different from this one =P

    “I figured Damien there helped Jack out after we saw his abilities so many chapters ago.”

    Yeah he did, it’s just like Vi said, before it was a life or death situation, now Jack would have healed in time by himself. Before it really was helping, Damien had no interest in Jack being dead, now it was a deal.
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  • From DarkMaiden on August 26, 2007
    Damn I'm far too tired to check for more errors now, I'll edit everything later.
    Now just before I get complaints: I realized in this chapter that the Leagues (and most Gyms) suck ass for some Water Pokemon!
    It's true, in the anime version the arenas are just like the ones I used, people with pokemon that are dependent on water to breath just can't battle, that's really unfair, I should have thought about this before but now it was too late (note that nobody lost because of this, the winners were picked just by luck).
    Only one Division to go, if you need to change your character I suggest you do it quickly, also I repeat that if someone didn't like anything done until now just tell me and I'll see what I can do ^_~ *goes to sleep*
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  • From LordofSteel on August 25, 2007
    I HAVE BEEN REBORN*cough*...what I'm always too lazy to login. Anyways at least the annoying one is gone*he stabbed me w/ a rubber knife...moron* I will be one of the many people rechecking for the update tomorrow...can't wait to see my other OC lose...
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  • From DarkMaiden on August 24, 2007
    Ok people calm down, I know Anon has been annoying a lot of us (especially me lol) but just ignore him. I had to take out the "anonymous review" option, I didn’t wanna do it before because a lot of you do it besides Anon and The Critic (as if it wasn't the same guy *rolls eyes*)but now it's getting annoying. I'm sorry about all other reviewers that aren't normally Logged In when posting but it had to be done.

    Ok now a good announcement =P I'll be posting the Green and Yellow Divisions at the same time today or tomorrow. Thanks for all the support ;)

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  • From xain34 on August 24, 2007
    Steven = ragnorok creator if you need to know his skills look on the ragnorok web site for alchemist/creator XD
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  • From xain34 on August 24, 2007
    Steven: oh your hurt bren one second *pulls out a red herb a medicine bowl and a bottle and uses his potion creation guide to make a red potion and tosses it to bren* your welcome >_>
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  • From xain34 on August 24, 2007
    Steven: thats it you fucking anon your ass is mine! *pulls out a grenade bottle and an acid bottle* ACID DEMONSTRATION! *throws both bottles at the same time at the anon incinerating him instantly* that anon was the biggest fucking waste of time ive ever seen in my life -_-
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  • From ANON - Bren on August 24, 2007
    ok...I think I said eveything...is the critic bugging us again *stabs him with a dagger*
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 23, 2007
    HEY LORD OF STEEL SHUT THE FUCK OFF *pulls out a dagger and stabs him*
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  • From ANON - Lord of Steel on August 23, 2007
    anon don't you dare start this again
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