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Reviews for Hoenn Harem *Author's Note*

By : DarkMaiden
  • From ANON - Anon on August 23, 2007
    update please
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  • From DarkMaiden on August 23, 2007
    Hi there, you guys are completely correct, but the truth is that it wasn't "fully" a mistake =P This chapter is very different from the others not just because it's the League, but because I'm working with characters that don't belong to me, with my characters I can do whatever I want with them, but with characters that were kindly given to me by readers I can't steal their spotlight for storyline or defeat them just because of Type or Level Advantage. In Vi's battle her adversary was a Bug specialist, and that gave me a tiny headache cause Vi's party pokemon ALL had advantage against them, I would never go "Flawless Victory" on anyone because I kinda agree with the anime version of the battles where they sometimes ignore Type and use strategy, so most times when I say "didn't have advantage" it means they were equally strong. The Ice/Ground I really didn't know, you can shoot me for that one LOL. I'll try to edit those battles soon and improve them.

    Don't worry about the Green Division it will have a bit of storyline, but the Yellow Division will be pretty much just battles again =P Half of the players are eliminated in this chapter so I need to put the spotlight on all of them now. I promise the next chapters won't be like this. Thanks for being such faithful readers ^_~ and I'm working on the Green Division currently but I've been having a busy life lately. (Also don’t worry about correcting stuff I like that lol) Until next time ****
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  • From ANON - The Critic on August 22, 2007
    ...why must you shoot me...
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  • From ANON - Bren on August 22, 2007
    I want to add another pokemon in my team, its used only for mission (ninja missions I get) and battle if needed, Ditto level 70, also I use it to....well have sex with a girl
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  • From ANON - Lord of Steel on August 21, 2007
    ...Chris won?...uh..THANK YOU! Although I wish you would of used the first pair*sniffle*..not that I'm complaining at all*Sees The Critic trying to get up and shoots him again* Even?...crap I missed...
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  • From ANON - Yuutousei on August 21, 2007
    I won! *does a little happy dance*
    My god, if I'm willing to get up at some ungodly hour (6 AM my time), to go see if you wrote anything new, that ought to be a compliment :P I like my sleep!

    'nyways, I'm glad to see you're alive, and the matches were great! Keep up the good work, yo!

    ~Yuu-chan
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  • From ANON - Bren on August 17, 2007
    well my Blazikin knows, Flame kick and Flame thrower but he uses hand signs before using it to make it stronger, Shadow claws, and Rock Slide
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  • From ANON - Bren on August 14, 2007
    my Shedninja is very unique cause I taught him Ice beam, Shadowball, Hydro pump, and Thunder the down side is that all his stats are pretty low so the moves I taught to leavel it out
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  • From ANON - Bren on August 14, 2007
    *pulls out a shot gun and kills The Critic* man what a bastard
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  • From ANON - The Critic on August 14, 2007
    I STILL HATE THIS
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  • From ANON - Bren on August 14, 2007
    MY Alakazam is named Silver you know, Shedninja is Shino (from naruto and I like Jack using Sanji for tenacruel because I like one piece) and Blazikin is named Hot Shot, Alakazam was my first pokemon...also she is a girl HEHEHEHEHE so you can put in a sex joke if you want
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  • From ANON - Bren on August 14, 2007
    Glad to see that I did well...anyway I hope I get to face Vi
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 13, 2007
    HEEEEELLO PUTDATE NOW!!!!!!!!11
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 13, 2007
    UPDATE COME ON
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  • From ANON - ... on August 13, 2007
    damn my character lost (my character was cherry)
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