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Reviews for Hoenn Harem *Author's Note*

By : DarkMaiden
  • From ANON - CrazyIvan(Notloggedin) on May 20, 2007
    WEll, that was certainly something else. That evee is really really fucked up, but in a good way, I think. Anyways, nothing new to say, so untill next time, semper phi, carry on...
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  • From ANON - Celestialkit on May 19, 2007
    Cool an update. I am now a fan of your work and the structure improved too. I hope to see an update soon. I'm rooting for you! *Gives muses*
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  • From ANON - Celestialkit on May 18, 2007
    I really love this story mainly because of the different pokemon and the intersting characters. I truly hope you finish this story. Although the format is a little too confusing but other than that I really enjoyed reading *Holds I'm a Jack/Damien fan sign*
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  • From SublimelyStupid on May 16, 2007
    omg. this story is so incredible. i love all the plot twists. but why? why did you have to make it be gabriel??? I was hoping he would be a good guy and be all powerful and help vi and the others defeat team genesis.
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  • From JynX87 on May 11, 2007
    LOL actually I haven’t sang that stuff in months, I don’t even remember the cartoon where I got that song from. Ok now onto the review, I loved this chapter, you’re finally revealing stuff!
    I don’t like Bird pokemons either, in all the games I only capture them to use “Fly”, but Skarmory is actually a great one.
    Don’t be so smug about having a shiny Crobat I had a shiny Ponita once too hehehe.
    The writing is also better and I think each chapter is getting longer, that’s great.
    I think I know which chapter will be next and I can’t wait for it! ^_^

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  • From DarkMaiden on May 09, 2007
    Hi, actually this chapter wasn’t as bad as the two past ones lolol I always write very quickly so some letters get misplaced =P In Portuguese I normally see all errors but in English and French there are always some that pass by me. Next time I promise I'll be more careful. I thought about changing the title too but my sister told me that some readers might not recognize the story afterwards so it’s better to leave it this way. I don’t wanna have to hear her sing the “I told you so” song again so soon lolol. I’m glad everyone seems to be enjoying the story, thanks for all the reviews ^_^
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  • From aok1992 on May 09, 2007
    “That doesn’t matter, after we figure it out you may become one of the strongest pokemons who ever lived!” she happily answered before being interrupter by the blind Absol’s bark.

    Interrupter?

    You shoulkd hire someone to check your mistakes
    Btw change the name to something like Hoenn Chronicles or something...Harem doesnt fit here.....
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  • From CrazyIvan on May 08, 2007
    If I told you I loved you, I'd probably be lieing, but I do love your story. :D
    Another good chapter, repeat previous praise and add twelve percent.

    Untill next time, this is CrazyIvan, signing off. Semper phi, carry on...
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  • From aok1992 on May 08, 2007
    Ummmm so Gabriel is kinda like Half Human Half Skarmory?
    Who cares i cant wait for the next chapter!!!!
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  • From CrazyIvan on April 27, 2007
    Damnit to hell! I LOST MY FORKING PIE!!

    Oh, right, review time, well these past chapters have been steadily more interesting. New characters, crazy powerful wierdos, and more dumbass Team Rocket grunts, although, unless in ten years Team Rocket established forward bases in the Hoenn region, it should still be Team Aqua and Team Magma territory. The mutated Evee was an interesting, albeit wierd addition, it makes it a hell of a lot easier to find out how pokemon are feeling, kudos for the unique plot device. A large houndoom eh? Well, that could be a powerful ally.
    I noticed that the team rocket guy had a Tyranitar, a powerful pokemon in their own right, and generaly they don't respect anyone unworthy of training them, so I really don't think that coward of a duesch bag would be well off with it, hell, if I wa the Tyranitar, I'd hyper beam the fucker, and go back to Silver Mountain.
    Anyway, still good spelling and format, nothing much to complain about, so that pretty much wraps this rewiew up. I'll be looking forward to your updates. Untill next time, semper phi, carry on...
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  • From aok1992 on April 22, 2007
    Hehehe i love pointing out mistakes....
    Anyways ive got my exams in a week....wonder if my state is gonna be like yours after mine.......
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  • From Imlucky on April 21, 2007
    This story is really good.
    I write a pokemon story of my own, but its on Fanfiction.net and not nearly as good as yours.
    I like to read stories here cause its better and more mature then most of the crap on Fanfiction anyway, and yours caught my eye. Your writing style is really good and i love the characters.
    Nice job and keep it going!
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  • From DarkMaiden on April 21, 2007
    Damn it you’re right, I already checked the chapter again and correct the ones I saw, after so many exams in one week my brain is pretty much like a fried egg lolol I actually had an error where I wrote “Jump” instead of “Just” (Hopefully I didn't write anything as stupid as that on the exams...) Thanks for noticing!!
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  • From aok1992 on April 21, 2007
    Btw there are some grammatical errors you should check out....
    Heres an example

    “Damien?” she asked turning around.

    “I suggest you tell "you’re" (it shouldve been your not youre) pokemon to calm down.” he answered.

    “Spike stop barking, why are you here?”


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  • From aok1992 on April 21, 2007
    I seriously love how this is developing...good job
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