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Reviews for Hoenn Harem *Author's Note*

By : DarkMaiden
  • From JynX87 on April 15, 2007
    Hey sister, sorry but I decided to remove my last review, I read it again and I figured that not only was I spoiling a few things but also I was being kinda mean, so I just wanted to say that you did a lovely job so far, you've been improving a lot in the last few years, and I can't wait for you to post your Diablo II story.
    Yeah I changed my penname that last one was freaking old, also Ciarán really is a cool name but seriously next time you play an RPG with a male character come up with something more original lolol

    Love ya and keep up that awsome work! (And yeah I'll eventually make the fanarts I promised...eventually)
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  • From DarkMaiden on April 09, 2007
    Oops my bad, what I meant to say was something like “and he could feel a part of himself growing” =P. You have a really good eye, I didn’t notice that when I was checking the chapter for errors, it’s already edit now. Thanks! ^_^

    (And sister thanks for reviewing but pleaseee try not to put spoilers in here…and the reason why I didn’t change Ciarán’s name it’s because I’m using the same names I used when I was playing PKM Emerald. Thanks for the fanarts, I’ll be waiting ^_~)
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  • From aok1992 on April 09, 2007
    Btw id like to point this out

    Ciarán was shocked about what he was seeing, he wasn’t even one month old, he didn’t really understand what was going on, but for some reason he felt some excitement watching it, and he could feel one of his members growing. But he had no idea why.

    Last time i checked males had one member......does the mutant thingy enable him to have more than one?
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  • From aok1992 on April 08, 2007
    Lolz the smoke ball bit reminded me of Ash getting his face roasted by charizard all the time...good work cant wait for the next chapter!
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  • From aok1992 on April 02, 2007
    Awesome job with this fic!
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  • From theyaoimistress on March 24, 2007
    Wow! i knew it!this is something big!! please update soon!
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  • From theyaoimistress on March 14, 2007
    I like Damien. but why do they broke out, do we meet him someday i mean does jack will see him again? so many misterys.

    see you
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  • From theyaoimistress on March 05, 2007
    not so bad, and i like the psyquic girl a little. please update soon.

    see you
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  • From CrazyIvan on March 05, 2007
    Well that was certainly something. I like you, and I like this fic, it's too early to tell, but I'll hang around and see what you come up with.
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  • From thePD1 on February 26, 2007
    Ok, i admit it, this is REALLY funny and quite well done.... VERY funny :P I love/hate the last chap's ending lol.... Love the funny, hate gay, but its funny! SO I HAVE TO!

    Marvelous!
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  • From theyaoimistress on February 26, 2007
    Not so bad, and alredy want to read next chapter. :P
    longer chapters please!!!

    see you
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  • From Xtra on February 18, 2007
    Sounds interesting. I'll be following this one.
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  • From JynX87 on February 16, 2007
    Awsome! I loved it!!
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