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Reviews for Hoenn Harem *Author's Note*

By : DarkMaiden
  • From DarkMaiden on April 24, 2008
    The info on Team Genesis is now posted, some of it may look like spoilers but it's actually only a little of extra information.

    I don't mind Damien being used, just don't put him in hummiliating situations lol.

    I'm still trying to decide either to put Vi's party in this Characters Data or on the next chapter. But for now I think this one already has much more info than the first one I did.


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  • From xain34 on April 20, 2008
    Oh, and the fight with Damien has started. ^_^
    Sad thing is, i'm going to give him help against an S rank summoner. O_o;

    I hope you don't mind me using Damien in a fight, if you DO mind let me know and i'll bypass this battle alright?
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  • From xain34 on April 20, 2008
    Okay, getting his head cut off MAY work but he's a freakin biochemist, cutting his head off is damn near impossible. O_o;

    I think i'd have more luck killing a dead horse. XD
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  • From xain34 on April 20, 2008
    Quite**
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  • From xain34 on April 20, 2008
    Think of Logan (Wolverine), but different instead of mutant regeneration, the chemicals in his body regenerate him. Also a biological regeneration. Like a normal human heals but quit a bit faster. 1/2 the speed of regeneration of Logan's. It'll be explained better in the rest of chapter two in my story as soon as I stop being lazy. XD

    That an fatal wounds don't really work against someone who's life support system is damn near unbreakable. (left arm says it in the story.) And I kind of messed up, it's suposed to be Damascus not Damask. D'oh! Well, same thing really. -_-;

    If you need anymore information DM let me know alright? Also another character I use...Myself has some pretty kick ass abilities. XD
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  • From xain34 on April 20, 2008
    And plus I don't think it'll work out really well, since he's not really the mentoring type. Unless that is shes trying to become an alchemist. XD

    All joking aside my guy sucks at mentoring besides from alchemy. O_o;
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  • From xain34 on April 20, 2008
    That's why I didn't ask to be a mentor. My guy has a tendency of "not staying dead." -_-;
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  • From DarkMaiden on April 19, 2008
    Sounds good to me =P But it can't be a "full time job", you'll see why in the first chapter, but during a few sagas/situations it's actually a cool idea.
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  • From xain34 on April 17, 2008
    I would actually be afraid of the xatu more. since it actually CAN withstand a one shot kill, and therefore can do more damage in the bases of two turns. Freakin defencive Xatu...-_-
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  • From DarkMaiden on April 16, 2008
    I like debating and having others starting debates in here but not wars.
    Xain I'll have to ask you (and everyone else) not to offend other reviewers, he didn't attack you personally, he just said he doesn't like people overusing Regi's and large Pokemon.
    Of corse you're free to disagree with him but do it in a debating way instead of just offending the person.
    I just don't want readers to begin getting afraid of posting reviews.

    I hope you understand ^^
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  • From xain34 on April 16, 2008
    Sorry about starting shit on your review page DM, but this idiot needs to learn that just because he's hacked his pokemon doesn't mean he knows how to play the game.
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  • From xain34 on April 16, 2008
    And actually, I would be afraid of the Xatu wanna know why? BECAUSE XATU'S STATUS ARE BETTER! And it's so fucking obvious your team is hacked it's not even funny. Hell your fucking abra. CANNOT LEARN RECOVER! So, AR fucking noob before you run your god-damn mouth again saying you know ANYTHING about pokemon. Try not putting your own foot in your ass and showing off a team that has hack moves.

    Arcanine(M, Flash Fire)
    Crunch
    Overheat
    Dragonbreath *HACKED MOVE*
    Dig

    Skarmory (F, Keen Eye)
    Drill Peck
    Razor Wind *HACKED MOVE*
    Sky Attack
    Steel Wing

    Gallade (M, Steadfast)*unhacked as far as I know*
    Leaf Blade
    Double Team
    Psycho Cut
    Swords Dance

    Abra (F, Inner Focus)
    Psychic
    Recover *HACKED MOVE*
    Safeguard
    Energy Ball

    Umbreon (M, Synchronize)*unhacked as far as I know*
    Faint Attack
    Quick Attack
    Sand-attack
    Moonlight

    Tyranitar (M, Sandstream)*unhacked as far as I can tell*
    Rock Slide
    Crunch
    Earthquake
    Outrage


    Even though it's obvious that three of your pokemon have hacked move I don't know thier status and natures. So seriously kid, if you're going to talk shit and say everyone here dousn't know how to play this game you better make sure no-one here knows damn near every move in the pokemon game and what pokemon learns what. And if you still want to try and say your team ISN'T hacked go to

    www.serebii.net

    And try to prove me wrong kid.
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  • From xain34 on April 16, 2008
    Mr McBob 2008-04-15 id # 3000050327
    You, and apparently most of your reviewers, seem to have made the error of believing that the big, strong pokemon are somehow BETTER than smaller pokemon, unless they're legendary. Even among the legendaries, people think that the big ones, like Lugia or Palkia, are more powerful than smaller ones like Celebi or Shaymin. This is NOT the case. For instance, Shuckle, who one of the trainers was "unfortunate" enough to call, actually has the best defenses, normal and special, out of all pokemon. Period. Not even the Regis come close, with an average difference of about 50 points, and the famed defensive Deoxys has a difference of nearly 200!
    And which would you be more afraid of, the Psychic of a Xatu, or an Abra? If you said Xatu, YOU'RE WRONG! How about a Tackle from a Krabby vs. a Shiftry?
    And don't even get me started on using them properly.
    Also, Don't come crying to me saying stuff about levels and Natures. I'm talking lv. 100, beneficial Natures.
    Excuse the rant, but I'm tired of the only pokemon people see being the starters and Regis. Yes, the Regis are good, but I hate how every Tom, Dick or Harry has one.
    Anyway, great story. Keep going





    Hey smart-ass, that's not my real team and if you don't like me using regi's IN A FICTIONAL STORY! Then you can just kiss my fucking ass. And I also love how you mention your pokemon being level 100 with beneficial natures and left out EV training, shows how much you really know about the game kiddo. As a side note I WAS the one with the fucking Shuckle so fuck off.
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  • From xain34 on April 16, 2008
    Canalave city, and I would like to have byron pretty much shit himself when he fights against Steven. And have him say something about being a gym leader in Felgrand.

    *Not accessable in your story mainly, not an actually pokemon city.*

    And yea, i'll join in the final battle if you'll let me. And here's some more data.

    Steven is wearing a t-shirt with a long sleeve on the left side, has a pair of padded gloves on the right hand glove has the fingers cut out for it. The shirt has silver linings for it on the rims of the sleeves the bottem of the shirt and the coller of the shirt. shirts color is black. Has short raven black hair, cut short and part in the middle. Is wearing black cargo pants.
    (6 pockets 4 in there original place and two near the ankles. all six have deep pockets.)

    Is also wearing a black interwoven belt. Has three pouches along the belt 1 on each side and one in the back. Is also wearing black steel-toe'd boots. The pants and boots have silver linings. Is still wearing that black eye band with the metal plate in the middle of the band woven in.

    If you need more data on steven let me know. O_o;
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  • From DarkMaiden on April 16, 2008
    Sorry, I took in characters when I was publishing the Pokemon League chapters, right now I'm only adding the winners of the League into season 2 plus a few that wanted to reappear in the story.

    I know it's frustrating for those that came in late, but it's hard working with characters that belong to others, right now I wanna go back to the old working with my original characters and cameos for this season.

    But thanks for the review you're completely right, I normally prefer the evolved versions simply because of esthetic reasons, but really during the League there were plenty of people that shared your view and fought with smaller stronger ones.
    I admit I prefer big guys, but personally I always keep a few smaller ones as a powerhouse...or just cause they're cute lol

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