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Reviews for Hoenn Harem *Author's Note*

By : DarkMaiden
  • From MrMcBob on April 15, 2008
    Oh, by the way, If you're taking trainers for later on in the story,
    Jamie (M or F, I don't care. Also, do what you want with them, but keep the pokemon)

    Arcanine(M, Flash Fire)
    Crunch
    Overheat
    Dragonbreath
    Dig

    Skarmory (F, Keen Eye)
    Drill Peck
    Razor Wind
    Sky Attack
    Steel Wing

    Gallade (M, Steadfast)
    Leaf Blade
    Double Team
    Psycho Cut
    Swords Dance

    Abra (F, Inner Focus)
    Psychic
    Recover
    Safeguard
    Energy Ball

    Umbreon (M, Synchronize)
    Faint Attack
    Quick Attack
    Sand-attack
    Moonlight

    Tyranitar (M, Sandstream)
    Rock Slide
    Crunch
    Earthquake
    Outrage


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  • From MrMcBob on April 15, 2008
    You, and apparently most of your reviewers, seem to have made the error of believing that the big, strong pokemon are somehow BETTER than smaller pokemon, unless they're legendary. Even among the legendaries, people think that the big ones, like Lugia or Palkia, are more powerful than smaller ones like Celebi or Shaymin. This is NOT the case. For instance, Shuckle, who one of the trainers was "unfortunate" enough to call, actually has the best defenses, normal and special, out of all pokemon. Period. Not even the Regis come close, with an average difference of about 50 points, and the famed defensive Deoxys has a difference of nearly 200!
    And which would you be more afraid of, the Psychic of a Xatu, or an Abra? If you said Xatu, YOU'RE WRONG! How about a Tackle from a Krabby vs. a Shiftry?
    And don't even get me started on using them properly.
    Also, Don't come crying to me saying stuff about levels and Natures. I'm talking lv. 100, beneficial Natures.
    Excuse the rant, but I'm tired of the only pokemon people see being the starters and Regis. Yes, the Regis are good, but I hate how every Tom, Dick or Harry has one.
    Anyway, great story. Keep going.
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  • From DarkMaiden on April 15, 2008
    "Personally, I like Houndour more. Houndoom is just too disproportionate. Also, Growlithe/Arcanine had better be coming soon, since it's MY favorite."

    Chapter 8 huh? Don't worry it'll show up soon =P

    Thanks for reviewing! It's good to see newcomers.

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  • From DarkMaiden on April 15, 2008
    Ok before more people begin sending info remember that what I was refering to in my previous review is the prize for the two contestants that won the League, namely Ulforce and Nevyn.

    As a reward I gave them the opportunity to enter the story with their characters any way they want. It doesn't mean I won't add anyone else guys, but I obviously can't give as much spotlight to the other characters as I will to them.

    But since both of you asked so much I'll be good =P :

    Xain - pick a Gym or City in Sinnoh I'll make your character join Vi during that chapter (Except for Hearthome, Oreburgh or Sunyshore), and later on in season 3 you can join the main battles obviously.

    Bren - decide if you wanna be a good guy or a bad guy. If you wanna be a bad guy you can join Team Rocket in Eterna City, if you wanna be a good guy you can appear in a gym or join in helping for the war.

    How does that sound? ^^

    Season 2 is pretty much already developed so you must understand that it's hard to change it here and there =S
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  • From MrMcBob on April 15, 2008
    Personally, I like Houndour more. Houndoom is just too disproportionate. Also, Growlithe/Arcanine had better be coming soon, since it's MY favorite.
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  • From xain34 on April 15, 2008
    OOO OOO! I wanna have my main dude join Vi. O_o

    Real team:

    Lucario: Age:8(24) Female, Lv.65, HP:193, Attack:188, Defence:117, Sp.Atk:154, Sp.Def:118, Speed:162,
    Aura Sphere, Dragon Pulse, Swords Dance(increses attack two stages.), Close Combat(decreses def and sp.def one stage.).

    Empoleon:Age:6 (18) Female, lv.40, HP:130, attack:77, def:81, sp.atk:107, sp.def:96, speed:71, bubblebeam, brine, peck, metal claw.

    skarmory:Age:4 (16) Female, level 37, att:72, def:132, sp.atk:36, sp.def:68, speed:60, Fly, Air Cutter, spikes, agility.

    Steelix:Age:4 (4) Female, level 42, att:99, Def:174, sp.atk:54, sp.def:68, speed:57, iron tail, earthquake, screech, crunch.

    probopass(Compasouth):Age:6 (6) Male..., lv.40, hp:108, att:55, Def:135, sp.atk:69, sp.def:137, speed:43, rest, toxic, earthquake, doubleteam.

    scizor:Age:2 (2) Female, Lv.14(temp level. Needs at least 40), hp:46, att:43, def:36, sp.atk,22, sp.def:29, speed:23,
    (temp moves will tell better later.) quick attack, leer, false swipe, pursuit.

    Steven Key: Age,23 prequistics: Biochemist height:5,3 wheight:90 Job:(will only be told to DM in an E-Mail.)
    Abilities: controlling chemicals, regeneration, lock-on,(left eye) nocternal sight(right eye),(able to see in absolute darkness *not perfect*), life support system (left arm) has no pulse to date. Brain wave functions seem to be far above average. Expected I.Q. 183 Health: peek physical condition but shows signs of some malnutrition.

    I will send some more data when it comes back to me. >_
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  • From xain34 on April 15, 2008
    Oh yea, just what I was waiting for. I'm going to join in the last battle in your story one way or another. XD

    But not in the MAIN battle itself. I don't interfere in main stories. I beat my own path. Anyway, it's a war, and I don't take kindly to psychopaths trying to take over the world. If I have to i'll destroy the entire continent to stop them.

    Steven, A.K.A. The Berserk Biochemist.



    Huh, a last battle in the conclusion of your story. That's definantly going to be one hell of a battle if I may say so myself.

    Xain, A.K.A. Arch Angel Xain.


    Ok, anyway i'm done ranting like a moron for the time being, and I believe I gave you my new E-Mail address. So drop me a line sometime. If you don't have it here it is again.

    xainRM@yahoo.com

    Bye for now everyone, and i'll write some more of my story when I get the chance.
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  • From DarkMaiden on April 15, 2008
    Thanks Ulforce ^_^ first I would like to apologize for not reviewing your story for a long time.
    I really love the story! But by being tired of pokemon I rarely even entered this section of the site -_- but I will as soon as I read all the chapters.

    Now about the rewards -> I was going to suggest for you guys to only think about what you want to do after the next chapter is published.
    Simply because right now you don't really know what the second season is going to be like.

    I don't mind characters joining Vi at all (I actually like the idea!), but I would have to ask for that not to last the entire travel in Sinnoh, mostly because in this season Vi is gonna have to learn how to stand on her own.
    However, that doesn't mean she can't have companions during certain saga's.

    Also you guys (the finalists) can appear in both seasons, as long as it doesn't go against the storyline it's all good =P

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  • From xain34 on April 15, 2008
    Glad to have you back. And i'll get to reading the season finale ASAP.
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  • From xain34 on March 04, 2008
    Oh ok, I did the same thing and switched from digimon to pokemon. O_o
    I'm still working on my sotry, but don't expect me to post all the time it's really just a hobby to pass the time. ^_^;
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  • From DarkMaiden on March 03, 2008
    Hello, yes I am alive and the next chapter wont take long to update but...I must admit I'm having a sickness of pokemon right now.

    No excuses this time, I'm simply a little sick, that doesn't mean I'll quit the story but after I finish the first season I'll probably post one or two short stories in different sections of this site and then return to Pokemon.

    Sorry everybody, up until now you were an amazing support and thank you all for everything.

    Until the next post **
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  • From xain34 on March 01, 2008
    Well, I just came by to see if you're still alive DM. And uh, hope to see the next chapter up someday. O_o;

    I'm not saying rush, hell you can even take a year. Just don't give up on the story it's really good. ^_^;
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  • From Spacious on February 01, 2008
    WHAT!!!! COME ON YOU CANT LEAVE US
    LIKE THIS OMG COME ON PLEASE YOU HAVE
    TO UPDATE OR I WILL SERIOUSLY GO CRAZY
    PLEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAZE
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  • From xain34 on January 30, 2008
    Ok, I repaired part one and added both parts one and two together. Meaning chapter one is FINALLY complete. XD
    Now to start work on chapter two. O_o;
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  • From xain34 on January 29, 2008
    Oh, and i'm still working on part one of chapter one. I'm just being lazy and not getting to it even though I have all of this free time. XD
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