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Reviews for Interruption to a Bath

By : haruharaharu
  • From 1upmushroom on July 28, 2007
    Is it over now? Big :) if it's not over. Even tho they're sorta related, Ka/Kei is uber sweet, and I uh.. (word failure here) 'Dig' the way you write them, and their internal struggles and external sack romps, hehe. So moar, please and thanks.

    Chiao,
    TEOATG&B
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  • From ANON - anon2 on June 12, 2007
    Well, the first chapter was really good, and I'm glad to see it's going to continue.

    To be honest, as much as I hate Naru and can't stand the Kei/Naru pairing (especially since it's canon), I never really could see a Kei/Kana pairing.

    This is until now. Most fics that involve Kanako relegate her to a subplot, but this story (and Snooping Around Pays Off) blows my former conceptions away.

    You have an exquisite attention to detail both in and out of the erotic scenes, and that's what really makes them worth reading.

    I only ask that you continue.
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  • From Bishonen on June 09, 2007
    Well that was the first het I’ve read in a long time it was pretty good I read almost nothing but yuri anymore

    With Love; Imasuky Lomae
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  • From RAW19 on June 08, 2007
    Most excellent. It was a lot shorter then the previous chapter, but i have no real complaints. i look forward to the next update!
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  • From Mangafreak on June 07, 2007
    Continue? Please do. i wish to see more.
    Descendant of the shadows
    -Twisteddarkness-
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  • From ANON - evil chaos on June 07, 2007
    Wow!!! I did not think they would be anyone capable of doing a great Keitaro,Kanako lemon but you have proved me wrong. I liked your other fic with those two and Shinobu. I hope you continue on with this fic or at least write one more Keitro,kanako lemon. Continue with the writing and don´t worry about romance. I am only concerned that they´re doing it becuase they love each other or because Kanako wants to fuck her stepbrother. If you do make another lemon with these two have some WAFF in it OK
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  • From ANON - TheEndOfAllThingsGoodAndBad on March 26, 2007
    This is only your first fic ever? Its marvelous, A++ without a doubt. I wish you'd reconsider your choice and add more to this fic, definately not one-shot material. It screams for more development :)

    Update soon please, I hope.
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  • From ANON - ji on March 20, 2007
    You Dick! There Not Related! Kanako Was adopted!

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  • From Raelax12222 on March 12, 2007
    i like the story it has great potental make it evolve into a long running fic
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  • From ANON - teamplayer on March 11, 2007
    wow that was really good
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  • From ANON - bait you in on March 11, 2007
    truly something to behold
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  • From ANON - RAW19 on March 11, 2007
    you've done an excellent job with this story, don't even worry about it.
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  • From ANON - Kippenberger on March 11, 2007
    Just one minor correction.
    Keitaro and Kanako arn't blood-related so it isn't incest
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  • From ANON - Shard on March 11, 2007
    An interesting and very enjoyable story. I don't think there are enough Keitaro/Kanako fics with her being an adopted sister and all.
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  • From Bishonen on March 10, 2007
    That was a good fic I prefer Mokoto and yuri but this was a good het great friswt story but a tip for the sex secnes just go with what feels right i've tried to write like other people but it never worked out just let it flow naturally and thats all I have to say other than hope you post more fics soon

    With Love; Imasuky Lomae
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