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Reviews for Helpless

By : Gunwild
  • From Lukylady123 on February 09, 2008
    Very well done. It's the first story that even was remotely interesting. Very well done-- it was mindless sex yet it wasn't. I liked how it ended, "I'm so fucked up". What was nice was that the men were very well portrayed-- men in that situation do not turn away-- maybe a few.

    Very good!
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  • From AsukaAndShinjiForever on June 30, 2007
    Damn, I gotta say that was hot. O_o
    Personally, I hope it'll end happily with Misato & Kaji returning from the LCL Sea together and happily bangin' away, but till then... With the next chapter, I think it'd be interesting if Misato would stumbled upon A/S doing it (you provide the context, for instance; it maybe can tie in with your Get it on fic and be when "they do the rest"?) but instead of trying to join them (they wouldn't let her, anyway, LOL!), she masturbates instead.
    I dunno, just spur of the moment thought.
    Keep up the great work! btw, I have a new fic up. Its A/S and yes they actually do it. ^_^
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  • From ANON - spiritwolf30 on March 29, 2007
    Well you should update your story but the thing I would like to see is Shinji should take care of her and stop her from doing what she is doing to herself and ave her love him oh well its your story I just hope you will actually update the story but I doubt it
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 19, 2007
    Well...

    Is the Angel War still going on, or is this set later?

    Is Shinji still living with her? If this is set immediately after Kaji's death, then it seems to me that there is at least a possibility of some hawt shota action involving our favorite neurotic mecha pilot and his alcoholic guardian. Maybe even something that isn't just physical--in the series, I think they do love one another, even if they aren't in love.
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  • From dave69812 on March 18, 2007
    Interesting. Hopefully Shinji can rescue her from her self destructive behaviour and show her the love and comfort she is seeking.
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