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Reviews for Six Senses

By : moontatoo
  • From Iarejedi on December 12, 2007
    That was a really cool short series of stories. I really enjoyed reading them. You got into each other characters heads so expertly it was hard to believe they weren't yours at the end of it all. Wow, is all I can really say. You did an excellent job. You should have way more reviews for this story than you do.
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  • From Daxemon on July 02, 2007
    AWESOME. You got Berekley down to a "T". You are one talented writer. This fanfic was freaking awesome. As well as all your others in the FAKE universe. I cant't wait for you to do another Drake/JJ fic. I happen to have just tripped over your work and I have never been so happy to have fallen flat on my face before, because when I looked up, I found something great. Will be checking in every now and then to see what you've written, will be looking forward to see what other little surprises you have in store. Thanks.
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  • From AkitaandSubuchan on April 25, 2007
    Hiya, Moon. Sorry we haven't been here for a while. Subu-chan's been busy writing the sequel that we promised (First eight chaps are up on MM) and I got hospitalized for a while. Anyways, three whole stories for me *leaves sickbed and does a happy dance then collapses and crawls feebly back into bed* Ooh, okay, won't do that again. Love six senses. It was funny seeing the precinct through everyone's eyes. Drake was so, so right as a listener. Ted peeping was great and I laughed so hard at JJ the Klepto. And Ryo kissing everyone? *giggles* As always, reeeaaalllly good stories. You are a really good writer. Okayies, enough for this review, have to go read the other two stories now... (mmmmmm, toys)Love ya, Kita.
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  • From Ladymynx on April 06, 2007
    Hello! I've seen some fantastic FAKE fiction and this is one of them! Very inventive and creative the way you chose the six senses to give us an accurate glimpse into the characters. You truly allowed the reader inside the minds of the people populating the 27th and to hear their thoughts and feelings in their own unique voices. Looking forward to reading more by you.
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  • From TrulyWished on April 04, 2007
    That's so pretty, the little secrets everyone keeps and the ones who know about them.
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  • From rj1ofakind on March 23, 2007
    That is just fucking awesome. Sorry for the profanity, but any other words allude me to how great that was to read. You saved the best for last. I don't think you hate Dee, you just see a path of your character. It so fit and worked with everything else. So, as you can tell I thought this was well written and a fun read. I loved your Rose by the way, calculating but not cruel. This is a rare occurence. I'm rather picky about my Rose. You see, I don't hate him. Yup definately liked this story.

    RJ
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  • From rj1ofakind on March 22, 2007
    First off, I loved this. Ted the voyeur, J.J. stealing, Ryo the kissing bandit. Very well done. Although I think it could be stronger for both J.J.'s and Ryo's part if you put more of how the items feel and how the others taste. Ted's and Dee's felt the strongest because of the description of the sense. Also, I assume you plan to put a "sixth sense" in? Who and what that "sense" is will be interesting.

    RJ
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  • From BrittColumbia on March 21, 2007
    Hi Moontatoo,

    I just wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed this. I don't know what it is about your writing that makes me want to read the same piece over and over, but that's the effect that it has on me. I felt the same way about Passing The Time.

    My favourite line in Six Senses is "And the commissioner is the classiest bastard Ted's ever seen." What an apt description of Rose! (As you know, I've been in Rose mode lately) I enjoyed all the descriptions. Very well done.

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