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By : Stormborn Apostle
  • From Darkone21 on November 26, 2007
    yet again you amaze me .. incredibly hot and sweet i couldnt put it down +1 to you slash
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  • From Stormborn Apostle on November 26, 2007
    Tai---I SHALL NOT COMMENT ABOUT THE BATTLE, AHAHAHA

    I CAN comment, however, that chapter 18 will likely be shorter than this one, as I think I'll be devoting all of it to the battle.

    And yep, it is insane. Like Slash said, in a straight-up battle Watson would destroy him. Which means he needs to do something batshit crazy if he's to have any hope of victory.

    It'll be close...
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  • From ANON - Tai on November 26, 2007
    An awesome chapter... but you're pure evil for ending on a cliffhanger! >< I've spent all damn day trying to ponder Slash's strategy for Watson...

    Since his idea is either genius or stupid, I'm assuming one of his lead-ins will be Corphish, possibly alongside Growlithe. And since he isn't using Graveller, and probably won't want to risk Electrike till he knows what the little guy can do, that leaves Psymakio on reserve, or possibly as one of the lead-ins (though I think he'd rather have her on reserve - he probably wouldn't put her at risk until necessary, despite what she said about being more than willing to battle).

    So, with that logical conclusion, I have to now figure out how he plans to win this... After all, he's got a Plan, and that Plan is most definitely insane, which means it just might work. :P
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  • From Stormborn Apostle on November 26, 2007
    Imasuky Lomae---Heh, thanks. I'd recommend "Slash-tastic", even though that might go better with yaoi, heheh.

    Twi---I fapped while writing it. Thankfully I've much practice in the art of typing with one hand...

    If anyone correctly guessed who the Interloper is now, I'd be shocked and wager they read my mind, heh.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 26, 2007
    Excellent.

    ...But still unfappable. :P

    I have an idea as to who the Interloper might be- but I'll keep my wild and unverifiable speculation to myself until there's more evidence.

    -Twi
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  • From Bishonen on November 26, 2007
    All I have to say is.......I'm speechless this was just great that's all i can say without makeing up words...Next chapter I'm makeing up a word for this it will take me a while to think up somethis good enough.

    With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
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  • From Stormborn Apostle on November 26, 2007
    Xain---I punched the keys, for God's sake!

    Black Whole---I was a bit surprised at how long I stretched a single sex activity, heh. I'm also surprised that I made the whole dominance/submission issue into something romantic. Honestly, when I started writing it, I had no plans for D/S...and once my muse started nudging me there, I had no idea where it was going with it. The whole issue ended up with me discovering the lesson of the D/S---to give, not to take---at the same time as story-Slash, which was pretty amusing for me. XD

    I'll be revealing more about Kiako, and his history, as Arc 2 goes on. A little piece here, a little bit there...maybe a big ol' chunk every once in a while...heh. I can't wait to get to talk about "the battle on the mountain". :3

    Incidentally, Kiako's choice of travel reveals more about him than you'd think...kukuku.

    I WILL NOT COMMENT ON THE BATTLE WITH WATSON, SO NYAH

    And for those of you who waited in suspense for chapter 17, you can take solace (or evil laughter) in my karma...I've been waiting eagerly for an update on my personal favorite story for about two months now, lol. :-(

    ThatGuy---Heh, I almost missed the deadline AGAIN. The original deadline was sometime in October, which then became November 15, which then became November 24, and lastly Sunday. I finished and published less than an hour from unleashing a wave of murderous animals on myself...

    Now, as for chapter 18...I don't know when it'll happen. The Christmas oneshot is coming up soon, and I'd like to put out a chapter of my upcoming original story before 2008, so...we'll see, heh. I need to stop giving out estimates for my chapters/oneshots, because I almost always miss them. ^_^;
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  • From Review on November 26, 2007
    Wow, what a time to log in. I haven't been on in ages, and the first thing I see is the new chapter for Sinners! Yeah! To sum up this chapter; It fucking owned. A combination of SEX, the mysterious past of Kaiko, the inner workings of Slash's mind, Slash and Psymakio's future, and an upcoming battle! Could things get any better?

    Answer: When chapter 18 comes out, duh.

    And the gophers are more than pleased. Actually, they're currently dicussinng Slash's upcoming battle with Wattson. Hmm...I wonder what Slash has up his sleeve...

    KABOOM!


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  • From xain34 on November 26, 2007
    (Perfectly mimics shawn connery's voice)
    Yes, YES! YOUR THE MAN NOW DOG!
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  • From Stormborn Apostle on November 26, 2007
    Xain---Your wish is about to be answered. :3

    Drew Pickles---All hail Drew Pickles. THE SECOND COMING OF THE BARNEY BUNCH APPROACHES. Maybe.

    Goggles-I am about to atone.

    Yep, chapter 17 in 3...2...1...
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  • From ANON - Goggles on November 25, 2007
    The real sin here is that there aren't any more chapters yet :(
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  • From ANON - Drew Pickles on November 25, 2007
    This story is really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really good and if you update soon I’ll come to your house and shove my twenty inch cock up your ass and fuck you till you cum hard
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  • From xain34 on November 25, 2007
    I'M GOING OUTTA MY FUCKING MIND SLASH GIMME SOMETHIN TO READ PLEASE!!! I'M BEGGIN YA!
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  • From xain34 on November 21, 2007
    I have the next part of chapter two already planned out...I just dont want to write it...-_-
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  • From Stormborn Apostle on November 19, 2007
    Xain---My biggest hurdles are my own laziness, my need-to-be-in-the-writing-zone, and my tendency to scrap a chapter (no matter how close to completion) if a better idea comes to me while writing. fssagsdfgsdfg

    Anyway, bad news everyone. I had one of those OMG-KEY-STORY-POINT moments last night. An entire segment of story, perfectly planned by my muse, is scribbled in notes for later writification. The bad news is that it's a really, really tragic event, and I wish I didn't have to write it...but I do.

    I won't say anything in regards to what happens, when it happens, or who it happens to...no hints...but...sigh. I knew I'd have some dark parts in Sinners, but I only had a rough idea of some of the points before. Now it's clear and in my head.

    Maybe I'll get lucky and my muse will change its mind before it's time to write it.
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