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By : Stormborn Apostle
  • From xain34 on November 19, 2007
    And I meant fully update chapter two. Sence im being fecking lazy right now. >_
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  • From xain34 on November 19, 2007
    Just don't give up man. But i'm letting you know, although the chapter on my story (chap 2) looks halfed ass, it's because i write it as it comes to me. XD
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  • From Stormborn Apostle on November 19, 2007
    Xain---Certain hold-ups may lead the chapter to be delayed to late November. Bleh. Things can never go easy...

    Imasuky Lomae---I think so, too. I mean, after only 16 chapters, there's over 500 reviews. And there's still nine more arcs left (tentative number). Some arcs will be longer, some shorter, but I'm guessing this story will end with around 100-120 chapters...so fuck, 1000+ is almost a certainty.

    That's almost frightening. But kinda awesome, too, heh.
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  • From Bishonen on November 18, 2007
    I think this story will have more than a thousand reviews long before you get to ninety chapters

    With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
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  • From xain34 on November 18, 2007
    let's see which one of us will update our story first XD (probly you lol)
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  • From Stormborn Apostle on November 16, 2007
    DemonicStrife---Added, heh.

    Imasuky Lomae---You got it.

    Anonymous---Changed Slash's use of "pussy" in a previous chapter, lol. I like to avoid that word in lemons...just not sexy enough, heh.

    I haven't started the massive copy-editing I intended to do after 16 yet (most of my time has been spent on the Sinners oneshot and planning for other stories), but I will eventually. I'm aware of several problems in the story (minor continuity issues, a handful of grammatical shit that slipped by), and I'll nail em when I get some time, heh.

    I was actually considering putting each arc in a separate story, but then I'd have to add up views/reviews/etc for a total, and yeah, I'd love to break 1000 reviews. I haven't had any of the loading problems yet, but I know some people have to a small extent, which leads me to consider a couple ideas.

    1) Break up the arcs into separate stories as you suggested, to limit the massive review counts in each.

    2) Break up every three arcs into separate stories; that way I could have a "Sinners Trilogy" with 3 arcs each, and a final arc to round things up.

    3) Keep it as one massive story, and anyone having problems loading this page can just ask that I reply to their reviews through e-mail.

    I'm more inclined for 2 or 3, because I'd love for the final hit/review tallies and history of Sinners to be readily seen for those who come after I leave...hell, it's already impressive enough, but imagine someone stumbling along a story with 100+ chapters and a few thousand reviews! I don't know. The problem isn't critical...right now, anyway...so I suppose I'll keep Arc 2 in this story and consider option 2 if enough people have problems.

    It'd really help if there was a page system for reviews...like, 50 on each page...but the AFF guys are already damn busy, and I know better than to pester active tech staff, lol.

    Xain---I sent it last night, so it should be in your e-mail somewhere. "Thanatos Batch Results" would be the subject, heh. I'll send it out to you again, as well as all the new sign-ups, just to be sure.
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  • From xain34 on November 16, 2007
    Ok slash you can most likly send the E-Mail by responding to the E-Mail i sent you. Hell it may even be in the spam folder honestly -_-
    And i'm not getting E-Mail from newgrounds either...
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  • From ANON - Anonymous on November 16, 2007
    What did you edit today, one of the infrequent, minor errors I notice but feel it would be nit-picking to point out? Or maybe a note in a chapter other than the first and last. Either way, I had an idea for the people who have trouble loading this review page (it loads in only a few seconds for me, so I don't care too much, but...) maybe you could post the second arc as a separate story? That would start the review slate back at zero. Unless, of course, you wanted to try to push it into 4 digits, in which case don't let me stop you.
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  • From Bishonen on November 16, 2007
    Put me on the mailing list as well

    bishonen20@hotmail.com
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  • From ANON - DemonicStrife on November 16, 2007
    Gawdamn, I've missed a lot. Incidentally, my computer had broken down for awhile, and school's been a bitch too. But now I'm ready to start reviewing again. :3

    By the way, I'd like to join the "Sinner's Mailing List".

    Email: demonicstrife@gmail.com

    Now to review that story with the blowpop. Lol.
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  • From Stormborn Apostle on November 15, 2007
    Xain---Hm. I sent something out on the 11th, but I checked my list with the email in your review and it wasn't on it. Either I missed it (my spam controls are really high) or forgot to add it, bah.

    I've added you (for sure this time) and I'll send you the little thing I sent out on the 11th to make things square, heh.

    Incidentally, chapter 17 nears completion...a day, maybe two.
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  • From xain34 on November 15, 2007
    johnfnkey@sbcglobal.net
    dude i didnt recive any mail from you yet O_o
    And im possitive im on that mailing list O_O;
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  • From Stormborn Apostle on November 11, 2007
    Hinatasfootslave---Next chapter is underway; mid-to-late November release date.

    I also sent out something to all of you on my mailing list; AND NO, I WON'T COMMENT ON IT ANY FURTHER. :3
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  • From MarkJoe on November 11, 2007
    This story is kick ass i hope the next update coms soon or else I'll send my overly religious mutant crocodiles to your house to beat you with bibles
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  • From Stormborn Apostle on November 03, 2007
    negativety101---Sometimes my computer does that "we're done loading, but oops we didn't really load everything" thing for large images, but it's behaved surprisingly well for so many reviews.

    Ah, it'd been a while since my last death threat, heh. Don't worry, I expect at least one, probably two, possibly even three chapters in November.
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