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By : Stormborn Apostle

From Darkone21 on October 08, 2007
Jesus slash man i think you gave me a heart attack .. very hot and very sweet .. loved it
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From ANON - CrazyIvan(SonOfABitch) on October 08, 2007
Damnit man, you're putting me to shame, I havn't updated, or uploaded anything new in months. Then again, I have several multi chaptered fics and one/two shots in progress. About a total of 12 works currently in developement, so I guess, as long as I'm working on them, no one can really call me lazy.

Anywho, back to your fic. Well, still going strong, not much else to say.

Semper phi, carry on.
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From Stormborn Apostle on October 08, 2007
DemonicStrife---Glad you liked it, heh.

Yes, I have been horribly neglecting many of my other stories, and I'll FINALLY give them a bit of attention now that I've got free time. Plus I have sooo many oneshot ideas...

Isaac---I'm honestly amazed that I've managed to have so many people keeping up with this story, despite there being no sex until THE 16TH CHAPTER (like, 70000 words in!). I have a feeling that now, with the hotness beginning, things will heat up. Heheheh.

And I am proud of the last chapter, even if I had to cut some of the fun for the sake of flow and feeling, heh.

anon---You most definitely will be seeing the anal scene put elsewhere. Originally the problem was that I couldn't include it and still make things feel romantic...but eventually I managed, and it really was a good scene in terms of hotness and luff. However, when I finished the chapter, I read over it and noticed there was WAY too much sex, so certain things had to go, alas.

But hey, better to have less sex than a romance-less chapter of nothing but pointless smut, so in the end, it's for the best...

Black Whole---Ol' Slashy can write lemons that touch people...TOUCHING THEM EVERYWHERE. YA KNOW WHAT I'M SAYING?

Incidentally, this chapter was loosely based on my own first time. XD

I can't write to start writing Sinners again with the two of them being mates. Things will be so...fluffy. Well, fluffy whenever the plot permits, heh.

ThatGuy---Glad to see this chapter getting such a positive reaction (in your pants?). Yes, the point of this chapter was to present something more than just random reckless sex. There's a common idea in the world that sex and romance aren't really connected, or that certain acts (such as oral or anal) are inherently non-lovey....BULLSHIT, I say! Gardevoir can suck off Slash and it can STILL be romantic and fluffy.

:3
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From Review on October 08, 2007
YAY!!!! THANK YOU SO VERRRRRYYYY MUCH!!! That...was...shit, I can't describe it!!! You just keep on getting better and better Slash...I don't know how you do it. The best part was the final connection of their bond...so fucking intimate!!! Too bad Sinners is gonna be sitting for a while...it makes me sad...wait, what the hell?!? AAAAAHHH!! NO, BAD GOPHERS! GET AWAY!! SOMEONE HELP ME--

We sory. Teh persn known as thatGuy is ded. He was mauled by a group of some of da othar gofers who din't want da chaptr 2 end. So ya. he ded. By da way, I'm jumpin' on teh keysss to type. I hopee taht this loooks rite. Byebye.

"OWWW...my freakin' head...what the hell happened...Ugh...What the fuck?? Get off my keyboard!!!!"

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Okay, I'm back. My head's busted, but I should be okay for the next few minutes...or until I die from bloodloss. Eh, w/e. Yes, my gophers went rabid and tried killing me...oh, it seems one of them already explained that. Nice. Well, my ambulence is here, so I gotta wrap this up.

KABOOM!
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From ANON - anon on October 08, 2007
Holy crap, that was hot in every way imaginable. Definitely worth the wait you made all of us endure. Too bad you got rid of the anal scene, but I trust we'll see one in the next arc at some point. Oh, and Gardevoir taking the initiative and giving Slash oral was fantastic.

Take all the time you need on your other fics (but not TOO long). This chapter will sate me for some time to come.
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From ANON - Isaac on October 08, 2007
I really wanna thank you man, this has been an incredible story, and to think it still isn't done, I'm simply awstruck by how good it actually is. I mean you relly should be over there on the your computer cheering for yourself and celebrating, the story is a complete success and it is just awsome. I have to say after 15 chapters of flufy romance and angst and otherwise great story telling, I can honestly say me and many others were on the edge of our seats hoping the long awaited mating would not be lacking in some way, and you just blew that chapter out of the water, Kudos, congrats, and as many other congradulations as there possibly is n the world, i truly is an unbeleveable story, it was just great, you should be literally beaming with pride lol
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From ANON - DemonicStrife on October 08, 2007
I honestly can't find any words to describe how incredible that chapter was. Great work, Slash.

So now you'll be working on some other projects for awhile (hopefully including another story with a tortured Ash). The ending of Arc 1 seems like an ending to the first book of long-running series, if you know what I mean, and writing the next part often takes time of course. So rereading the story will keep me more than satisfied for now. And I've hardly seen any updates to some of your other stories anyway, so I'm hoping to get a good read from those, too. Again, awesome chapter.

Alright, it's almost 1:00 am. I'm going to sleep. Peace out. XD
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From Stormborn Apostle on October 08, 2007
Imasuky Lomae---There was much banging and exploding going on in that hotel room. :-O

RoboRed---In the long run, the break before the next arc is for the best. Writing too much on one subject can get one weary (even when concluded with teh secks), and a change of pace will get me all refreshed for Arc 2, heheh.

I'll be keeping myself busy til then...there are a few projects that I can't wait to get started on. :-D

Glad you liked the chapter, and more sexfulness will occur in the future! Hell, chapter 17 is probably going to be titled "The Morning After" or something, and you can guess what happens there. XD
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From RoboRed on October 08, 2007
YAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYY!!!!

That was absolutely wonderful, very enjoyable! (I think I would have enjoyed it even more if my body wasn't on a caffeine high...) Great work, Slash! Unfortunately, I don't know how I'm gonna surrvive the extremely long period of time with no updates, but hey, I got a lot out of just reading this section of the story. Lemme tell you something, this story got me more than enjoyable reading. I now have a cool deviantart account, and I inadvertantly met a music remixer that I had been wanting to talk to for a few months, and we worked on a new music remix to improve the original! (In short, I've been given something more to do with my life :P) I MIGHT work on a AD account later. Dunno... But anyways, it's interesting how one thing leads to another. Great job on arc one, and be expecting an e-mail from me for the Sinners mail list. ^_^

- RoboRed
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From Bishonen on October 08, 2007
Hello I am Lao Shu first general of the Pandas I am sorry to inform you that our master has died as a result of reading this chapter but theses were his last thoughts on this story

Oh my fucking holy damn I.I�I�words no in existence describe good this chapter is.

After uttering that incoherent bit of gibberish his heart exploded and he died instantly so now I and my followers are free to do as we please in a few days we will take control of the world and in thank you shall be given control over Canada and incase your wondering how I�m typing I used bamboo t poke the keys.

�Hey I�m not dead just unconscious.�

Bang bang

Again I am sorry to inform you of the death of my master.

With Eternal Gratitude, Lao Shu
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From Stormborn Apostle on October 07, 2007
there is no post---Glad you enjoy it. :3

benn454---Well...

Imasuky Lomae---...it seems that...

DemonicStrife---...you'll have to all recall your demonic hordes.

Because chapter 16 is about to be uploaded. :3
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From ANON - DemonicStrife on October 07, 2007
My zombies are currently awaiting orders. You have about, oh say, 3 and a half hours. =D
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From Bishonen on October 07, 2007
The pandas have new orders steal your stuff sale it and buy me porn.

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
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From benn454 on October 07, 2007
So Slash, it's Sunday...and no new chapter. You know what that means. *starts poking the elephants with a cattle prod to get them good and pissed off* By my clock, you have 4 hours my friend before I release them. =P
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From ANON - there is no post on October 07, 2007
I love it!
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