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By : Stormborn Apostle

From Stormborn Apostle on September 18, 2007
slicerness---The next chapter should be shorter than this one...but the one after that, heh heh heh...

CLIFFHANGERS ARE FUN, TOO. Especially when not even I am sure of what's going to happen yet. :3

Black Whole---Archie originally was gonna send some homies to go get Slash, but ya know, after Team Magma was wiped out, I think our humble trainer has gone up a few rungs on his priority list...hence the personal visit.

BUT WHAT DOES HE WANT? WHAT'S GONNA HAPPEN? FIND OUT IN THE NEXT EXCITING EPISODE OF DRAGONBALL Z!

...or Sinners. Yeah...

ThatGuy---YES, 10000 HITS EVERYONE! Fucking sweet. This story has gotten a crazy amount of exposure in a relatively short time, especially for a tale that hasn't had any actual sex yet! But don't worry, y'all won't have to wait for much longer for THAT...

Thank you and to everyone else for your compliments; I'm already planning out chapter 15, because I'm VERY EAGER TO GET TO 16. GUESS WHY. :-P

YEAH BABY YEAH, 10k!
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From Review on September 18, 2007
YEAH!!! HIT NUMBER 10000!!! HELL YES!!! I made myself an account just for that moment. Reason? Because this story is better than any other on this site. Not to say other stories aren't well written, but becuase "Sinners" is probably the most well-written story I have ever seen.

Keep up the good work Slash.

KABOOM!
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From Stormborn Apostle on September 18, 2007
Black Whole---I'm pretty much better, now. I woke up at a reasonable hour for once, even! :-O

And yes, hooray for 350 reviews and ALMOST 10000 HITS! :-D

Arrico---I'm very glad to hear you like it. And yes, anything can happen; this story is not bound to the anime or video games or any canonical plots or limitations. Relatively minor video game characters may play vital roles; important characters may not show up at all. I can't even guarantee Slash and Gardevoir will both be alive at the end of the story...hell, I don't even know, myself. As we near the end of the first arc, the story is almost beyond my control...I'm becoming little more than a vessel, heh.

Incidentally, I'm not a chan'er, but so much chan-stuff seeps into Newgrounds that I occasionally sound like one, lol.

Well, time for me to UPDATE SINNERS, since the chapter is complete!

WE'RE GONNA BREAK 10000 HITS WITH THIS ONE! :-D
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From ANON - Arrico on September 18, 2007
Wow. I've been reading this since you've began it and I've got to say this is one of the best pieces of fanfiction I have ever read. I really have started to feel for your characters, even when they aren't the main focus (like Corphish during the first Magma Battle.) I really think that the thing that told me that anything could happen in the was when Watson killed Maxie. I've got to say again, you are a great writer and I look forward to every time you update. You kinda remind me of myself in some ways (you've got some /b/ showing, that could just be the newgrounds, but I doubt it) Keep up that amazing work and I hope you're feeling better soon!
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From Stormborn Apostle on September 17, 2007
Fluffy_Lover---I'm almost done with the chapter, although it'll still need to be proofed and fine-tuned. I just woke up at five in the afternoon AGAIN, and now I gots a runny nose too. dgsadgsfdgsd

DemonicStrife---I usually barely sleep at all, so sleeping in always fucks up my mental clock. Especially since 7 in the morning and 7 in the afternoon look about the same around here.

Incidentally, I DON'T KNOW WHAT SOURCE YOU'RE REFERENCING, GOOD SIR, BUT I DON'T VISIT ANY SITES OF DISREPUTE. SURELY ANYONE WITH A USERNAME OF SLASHFIRESTORM COMMENTING ON PICTURES ON A DEPRAVED SITE FULL OF HENTAI IS JUST IMPERSONATING MYSELF, TO DAMAGE MY SHINY REPUTATION

yeah totally

Imasuky Lomae---Thanks, but y'all, I don't have the plague or nothing, heh. I'll be fine with just a thousand or so milligrams of ibuprofen and my usual writing supplies of a cup of instant ramen and a nice, tall glass of ice water.

Well, time to go back to work! Gardevoir and Slash aren't gonna have sex anytime soon unless I hurry the fuck up!
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From Bishonen on September 17, 2007
Hope your better soon.

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
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From ANON - DemonicStrife on September 17, 2007
That sucks. It's better for you to rest for a while, so yeah, take your time.

P.S.: Found out where you got the pic. ;) (Or at least a good idea...)
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From ANON - Fluffy_Lover on September 17, 2007
Please Slash , take your time.

I hope you get better man.
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From Stormborn Apostle on September 17, 2007
Negativety101---D/P mentions Pokemon and humans living together as equals a long time ago, eh? Now THAT does sound interesting. I can't give any specifics, but a part of the upcoming plot shares that historical claim...it'll be good knowing there's some canon evidence for it from the games.

You'll all have to wait and see why this is so important, though. :-P

As for Giovanni's goal...it's not really that hard to guess about the parts revealed so far, although I won't confirm or deny anything. However...remember that the tablet that had the inscription on it was broken, and that the entire message is not yet known. I might just pull out a surprise. :3

Incidentally, Doom Desire is a steel attack involving sunlight. LOLWUT?

some one---I have an original story, but it's never been finished or put into writing (permanently, anyway). I may or may not eventually post it here. In any case, if I do, it would take over the role as my 'main' story, and until Sinners is complete, I'm not going to start it.

I also feel that sexual encounters should serve the plot, not the plot serving the sexual encounters. You'll notice I'm not much of a PWP man (although I occasionally write them for fun, heh). I prefer longer, detailed stories without a lot of random shit, heh.

Incidentally, I notice that my hit rate quadrupled when I posted chapter 13. Funny how much more attention Sinners has gotten with a short, relatively undetailed sex scene. Man, chapter 16 will drive you all nuts. :-P

GENERAL NEWS

I'm sorry to say this, but expect chapter 14 late tomorrow or Tuesday. I've been sick the past couple days, resulting in me sleeping a lot and having a slightly-off mind when awake...so it's taking longer than I expected. Bleh.
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From ANON - some one on September 16, 2007
Once more I review..once more I am awed. This beats some actual books I have read...if your the creative type you should go pro I think...make some original work ya know? BUT NOT UNTILL YOU FINISH THIS STORY SLASH!!! YOU HEAR ME!? lol. Good work man. The sexual encounter served the plot rather than the other way around. Just as a good story should go. ^^ BTW Gardevoir has been my favorite pokemon since I saw it. So I must confess that I too am writing a story with it. I STARTED MINE FIRST!!! No I didn't...I promise not to post it on aff though. Not Copying! I swear! Also I have had way too much caffine.
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From ANON - Negativety101 on September 16, 2007
Best Pokemon fanfic ever? Probably. Best Pokemon lemon ever? Hell Yeah! I'm loving this as it's epic, has so great a plot sex isn't even necisary, and the sex is still steaming.
Now how about some of the stuff that's been mentioned over the course of all the reviews. Slash, you mentioned you haven't played Daimond and Pearl. Well here's something interesting. In a book in a libary in one of the towns there is a passage that reads- "There once were pokemon that became very close to humans. There once were humans and pokemon that ate together at the same table.It was a time when there existed no differences to distinguish the two." Perhaps your charecters should have lived in the acient Sinnoh region? Also of note it seems if any pokemon is god, it would be Arcus. Granted that's still just a creation myth. But hell the Jirachians would love me. I have five of the little freak, all legit. (freind who works at a store gave me the bonus disk for collosium. Everytime I start a new saphire or ruby game, I get a new Jirachi, after transfering my old one.) Well enough bragging on my part. I eagerly await more of this story with nail biting suspense, due to the excellent charecterization and suspensful plot. I have a theory on what Giovanni wants, but I may be wrong. I look forward to eventually finding out.
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From Stormborn Apostle on September 16, 2007
Fluffy_Lover---Heh...the TRAIN SECKS folder has to do with an upcoming flash of mine. Think of it as fanfiction in .swf format.

wrym47---Why thank you, good sir.

Now, if you'll all excuse me, I'm behind schedule! My sleep cycle has been completely fucked up lately, so at 5 in the afternoon my time, I just woke up...gotta get back to writing. :3
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From ANON - wrym47 on September 16, 2007
wow.....this is easily one of the best fics ive ever read. keep up the good work!
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From ANON - Fluffy_Lover on September 16, 2007
wow what a nice pic *saves*

hm btw .....TRAIN SECKS ?!?
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From Stormborn Apostle on September 16, 2007
Imasuky Lomae---Yes. One of the awesome things about me establishing that Gardevoir can take off her clothing is that she can put other clothes ON. I have a craving for a stripping scene later... XD

DemonicStrife---It makes my flash-made, three-steps-above-MSPaint images look like shit in comparison, eh?

Well, they look like shit by themselves, too. :'(

Draco Falconi---You definitely will be reading more, very very soon (ETA: 16-36 hours)!
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