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By : Stormborn Apostle
  • From dooomdude on September 11, 2007
    Now this is only coming from an 18 year old college student, but i must say once again Slash, you surpase yourself. Iv said it before and i shall say it again. Your stories have invoked emotions and thoughts i have never considered before. You writing is awe inspiring. I swear, you have bested many other writers, not just on this site, but actuall published writers.

    Your writing is so thought provoking and emotional, i am not ashamed of the fact that this story brought several tears to my eyes already (and its not even over yet!). It really makes you think of all the cruelity the world can have, but also the love and kindness people can share. You still got a loyal reader man, take your time, this story is a piece of art, and shouldnt be rushed (but i dont think i have to tell you that :) )

    May the Lord of Chaos Rule

    ChaosLord

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  • From Stormborn Apostle on September 11, 2007
    Heheheh, yeah.

    I enjoy writing...action. There won't be lemon-y goodness EVERY chapter, but...enough. There will be enough. :3
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  • From ANON - DRD on September 11, 2007
    Whoah. Just... whoah.

    I honestly can't say anything else... I'm stunned speechless
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  • From Stormborn Apostle on September 11, 2007
    CrazyIvan---I used to type in Notepad, but now I use Microsoft Word just so I can spellcheck and get a word count, heh. I also have a single file with the entire story I've written so far, and at 12 point font it's a crazy 127 pages. Not that I'm surprised the story's gone so long, but more that it's got this much stuff so early in the storyline...

    Anyhow, Watson is shaping up to be an important character in this story, far beyond just being 'yet another Gym Leader'. The next chapter is going to have him talking about his past, and it will play a significant role in the present for Slash and Gardevoir...

    There will also be a little bit of...heheh.

    DemonicStrife---Honestly, I don't know how I manage to keep improving each chapter. I'm sure a time will come when a chapter is less awesome than the previous one, but I will endeavor to keep the bar high in any case. ^_^

    NS---Heh, remember that not even I can say with certainty where this story is going to go. As we near the beginning of the second arc (the race for the Sky Pearl), things are starting to accelerate beyond my control. Eventually I'm going to be little more than a channel for the story (if anyone has read the Dark Tower books by Stephen King, and the concept of an author being nothing more than a means of converting a story into type, it's like that)...

    Well, planning stages for chapter 14 are about complete, so I'll probably start writing the chapter itself tonight. ^_^
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  • From ANON - NS on September 11, 2007
    Never again shall I read your author notes! Make me frikkin paranoid; is it worth the super long and nice chapter?!

    ...you bet your ass it is! Nice job! I like the long chapters...it's so hard not getting used to them though...

    See ya next chapter ^^
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  • From ANON - DemonicStrife on September 11, 2007
    ... Everytime (I don't know how you do it) you manage to somehow make the next chapter even better than the last. Once again, an excellent (and erotic) chapter by Slash. I eagerly await your next update. Keep up the awesome work. ^_^
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  • From ANON - CrazyIvan on September 11, 2007
    WOW! Wow wow wow wow wow wow wow, and wow.

    That was long as fuck, I never bother to count how many words I have per chapter, it doesn't really matter to me, they are as long or short as they need to be.

    Anyhow, that was yet another great chapter. That was quite a scene, and the old man Watson, and other small minute details I don't care to mention.

    Well, there's not a whole lot I can say, so, I'l check in some other time.

    This is CrazyIvan, reminding you, if you're contacted by the FBI, never mention my name.
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  • From Stormborn Apostle on September 11, 2007
    Shaping up to be some more fluff in the next chapter, although there's going to be some actual plot development too, as we can't have Slash and Gardevoir laying in bed for the rest of the story...

    ...as tempting as that may be. Heheh.

    Incidentally, thank you, anon, for being my 300th review. :3
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  • From ANON - anon on September 11, 2007
    That was... absolutely fantastic. Extremely well written fluff, and the "sex" scene itself was extremely well done too (not to mention, rather erotic too). Can't wait to read more Gardevoir fluff/smut.

    Oh yeah, and the rest of the story is cool too. :P
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  • From Stormborn Apostle on September 11, 2007
    I'm glad you're enjoying. I'll be sure to keep it up!

    Speaking of, chapter 14 is in early planning stages; if all goes well (which, as some of you long-time readers know, isn't always the case), it SHOULD be done this week. Here's to hoping! ^_^
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  • From ANON - anonymous on September 10, 2007
    For the last couple of chapters, all I'll say is... this fanfiction continues to be amazing.
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  • From Stormborn Apostle on September 10, 2007
    I can say right now that I doubt it would be possible. I mean, the whole Pokemon-being-able-to-interbreed in the games is already stretching the limits of plausibility, although it isn't ENTIRELY impossible if all Pokemon share a common ancestor (although it would still be obscenely unlikely). Most people could suspend belief enough for that, but for a human and a Pokemon to be able to produce offspring...even infertile offspring...would be stretching it.
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  • From Darkone21 on September 10, 2007
    I just thought of something you might want to adress ( if you havent already and i missed it ) in a later chapter .. the possibilty or probablity of gardie getting pregnant or having an egg by slash if/when they do the deed .. if their ridiculed now they would be destroyed carting around a half human / pokemon .. so you might want to air it out if it is / isnt possible for that to happen ( in mine it wasnt but you may have different veiws on this matter .. it would be fun diolouge for him to educate her on it tho
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  • From Stormborn Apostle on September 10, 2007
    slicerness---It wasn't even a real sex scene yet, just them...getting to know each other a bit intimately, heh. Don't worry, though, they'll be thoroughly enjoying each other's company soon enough...

    While this chapter was my personal longest chapter, I've seen much longer...some of the chapters of the Star Wars fic "Forbidden" are absolutely titanic. But I usually write a chapter over the course of only a few days (although the planning/revising can take a lot longer), so my chapters tend to not be THAT huge, heh.

    As for Aqua/Rocket, remember that none of the protagonists are currently aware of Kiako's allegiance with Team Rocket, nor even that Team Rocket still exists (and even if they did, remember that Rocket is based in Kanto, and would not seem to be a major threat). However, with Giovanni and Kiako extending the tainted reach of their organization into Hoenn, it's only a matter of time before it becomes clear.

    This story is nearing the second major arc; the first arc involves the protagonists developing from a newbie trainer and his Ralts into battle-hardened lovers. The second arc will be about the race to the final Pearl...and that begins in a scant two or three chapters.

    KEEP AN EYE OUT!
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  • From Stormborn Apostle on September 10, 2007
    Black Whole---I'm also a bit surprised that I've managed to update so (relatively) quickly. Can't promise it'll always be like that, but I'm not complaining, either, heh.

    The two of them finally got to spend some time together, even if it's stuck in bed. Heeey, that's actually a great place for two new lovers to be stuck, ain't it? Heheheh.

    I shall always try to top myself...sometimes I don't think I can (I didn't think I could top the last chapter), but it always seems that I manage. I shall endeavor to keep pushing my own personal bar up!

    Imasuky Lomae---Those two really complete each other. Even having to hide it from prying eyes, you'll see just how much they need each other when they're up and walking again...and when they confront their enemies.

    Luminous Dark---Glad you liked it, heh. ^_^
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