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By : Stormborn Apostle

From Darkone21 on September 10, 2007
balls to the effing wall i love it
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From Bishonen on September 10, 2007
That was great i love how Gardevoir acts now sorry it took me a while to review but i was kinda sick after this was posted but that i've read it i got to say you are awesome words fail to say how great this was.

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
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From Stormborn Apostle on September 10, 2007
Well then, keep an eye on it, because things are just getting started! Now that Slash and Gardevoir are together, having admitted their love and chosen a course of action on it, consequences be damned, the real story begins.

Now that Maxie is dead, Team Aqua threatens to take its niche and become a truly threatening superpower in the Hoenn region...unless something is done to prevent it.

Kiako is racing to Fallarbor to collect the final Pearl...for what, precisely, it is not known, although if the likes of he and Giovanni are questing for it, you can be sure it is for something sinister.

What is the reason for Giovanni's interest in Gardevoir? Does she somehow play a role in his foul plans?

FIND OUT IN THE NEXT EXCITING...HUNDRED OR SO CHAPTERS...OF SINNERS OMG OMG OMG

:3
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From ANON - Lance Johnson on September 10, 2007
Holy *bleep*. I was directed to this story by a good friend, but I admit, I didn't expect it to be this...enthralling. I swear, I can actually feel the love that Slash and Psymakio feel for one another, as well as the feelings of the other characters.

I also have to say that I'm enjoying the direction that you're going with the overall non-smut story, Maxie's death in particular. Keep up the good work. ^^
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From Stormborn Apostle on September 10, 2007
Glad you enjoyed, heh. Nice to see Slash and Gardevoir getting to finally express their love. :-P
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From ANON - drake on September 10, 2007
Fecking A, man. Every time I read the newest chapter of this story, I think 'there's no way he could top this' and then time and time again, you do.

Rock. ON!
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From Stormborn Apostle on September 09, 2007
OH SHI---

Hang on! Adding it, heh.

Yeah, this chapter was more them-getting-used-to-it than explicit and outright action, heheh. Can't wait for their real first time. :3
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From ANON - Anon on September 09, 2007
You forgot the 'OVER 9000' mention. D:
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From Stormborn Apostle on September 09, 2007
C-C-C-COMBO BREAKER

As soon as I'd posted that, I got two e-mail threats and then yours. :3

UPDATE HAS BEEN POSTED
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From Bishonen on September 09, 2007
Post it or I'll kill you.

Just jokeing but update soon

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
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From Stormborn Apostle on September 09, 2007
Luminous Dark---IMPATIENT, FUCK YOU

Just kidding. You won't be waiting much longer. :-P

KuraiD---I'm not saying that any same-room sex will happen in the actual Sinners story...although it IS a possibility, as that wouldn't involve any swapping, just, you know, a bit of daring on Slash and Gardevoir's parts. As for all your other hundred thousand PERVERTED FURRY SEXUAL SUGGESTIONS, PERVERT...LOL, wow. I admire your, ah, depth of imagination. However, remember that Sinners is a story based not on random, wanton sex, but love, romance, and a quest to stop a very dark man and his Demon-Eyed liege from obtaining the power of the Three Princes. Any other explicit human/Pokemon action would be strictly relegated to PWP oneshots or whatnot, unless I get inspiration for another serious, Sinners-like story involving human/Pokemon relationships, heh.

The mention of Gardevoir wearing a scarf brings something up: what's the deal with Gardevoir's clothing? Does it come off, is it part of her, or what? HEH, I actually address this and answer it in chapter 13. I make it what I do partly for convenience, heh...just like how, in this story, Gardevoir can 'summon' her psychic 'horn' whenever she's in battle, to magnify her own power, because let's face it, it's in a rather annoying location for two lovers, heh.

Imasuky Lomae---We'll see...I foresee, by the time Sinners itself is completed, a whole series of random oneshots spinning off from it, heh.

Angel---Yes, they did deserve to die. When I was originally planning that scene, my muse wanted me to let them go, and be taken into custody by Watson...but I begged my muse to let me kill them, and she acquiesced, heh.

Even though they DID ruin their beautiful sunset moment, they're gone now, and chapter 13 will have some Slash/Gardevoir fluff...and maybe a wee bit of LEMON. :-O

As for chapter 12, I loved making Geodude evolve, because Graveler is such a bad-ass Pokemon. The Golem series has always been one of my favorites, even with its 4x type disadvantages. I dunno when Slash will make Graveler evolve yet...but I can't wait to figure it out, heh.

Chapter 13 answers several questions Slash and Gardevoir have; mainly, how they will act around others.

DRD---I should make some yaoi just to spite you. :3

Nah, nothing of that sort is planned, although we must remember that anything could happen, as I haven't decided on a lot yet. You'd be much more likely to see yaoi/yuri in oneshot stories, like the already-published masterpiece "Liek, use thundershock okay", HEH.

I can see Gardevoir being so devoted to Slash that she tries to convince a Lopunny to help her give Slash a very happy birthday or something...in a oneshot, of course, heheh.

Well, guess I should go ahead and post chapter 13 now, since it's completed. Or maybe I should wait a few months just to fuck with you all?

Just kidding. No more death threats, plz, heh.
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From ANON - DRD on September 09, 2007
Ok, I have to step in and just say NO. Please, don't add M/M to this story. I'm not against it IRL, but on AFF too many stories are M/M or have M/M in them. Too many M/M stories here, especially in the pokemon section. One reason I started reading this story instead of another one, was because this didn't contain M/M. It's a serious turnoff for me and a lot of other people. Not against it in real life, but I sure as hell don't want to read about it, and I love this story. If it absolutely MUST be in Sinners, at least limit it though, please?
Btw I personally don't mind F/F or M/F/F, (being a hot blooded and hetero male, :D) but I'm sure some readers might, and it's only fair that if M/M isn't in neither is F/F... though a slash/gardevoir/lopunny would be very hot... Maybe as a oneshot?

Eh, but don' mind me, I'm just a reader...
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From ANON - Angel on September 09, 2007
SpankMonkey1_69@hotmail.com

An update this quick....
It's unheard of....
It's crazy.....
It's so fucking awesome...
It makes all of us happy...(in the pants....?)

Finally, Gardevior makes her grand debut. I can already hear the other fans going into orgasmic cries of joy (and you know I'm one of them). So cool for Geodude to finally have gotten the chance to evolve, and (because I forgot to put it in the last review) I thought it was pretty cool how Slash did all these notes on his Pokemon's fighting styles' and such. (You'd never catch a single character from the show doing something so...smart.) So now, I'm sure, where going to start seeing some more problems arise for our completely hott for each other, in love, yet so much more, main characters. I feel sad knowing that their problems are only just beginning. I also feel so excited knowing that their problems are only just beginning. (hehe). Well, that's enough of me taking up your time for now. Take care you amazing godsend of an author you. Be safe.
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From ANON - Angel on September 09, 2007
Spankmonkey1_69@hotmail.com

DAmn those bastard's, they DESERVED TO DIE! And how terribly sad for poor Kirlia. Those phobia-induced assholes just had to go and ruin the moment. They deserved nothing less than death!....DEATH!....ahem. I had to copy this down to my laptop's word document to read it, since, now that I'm living in a place that doesn't exactly have internet access or wireless connections near by. Sorry for the late review because of it. Yes, yes, I know what your thinking...If I really was a devoted fan of yours I would have snuck into my neighbor's house and used their computer..But I couldn't cuz none of them ever leave their damn house's!

Anyway. I'm gonna go review the chapter 12 now, so, see ya soon? (figuratively of course).
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From Bishonen on September 09, 2007
If you put a female Glaceon in this or any story i will love you forever Glaceon was the frist pokemon that i ever truly had a fantasy about it's just so sexy for some reason

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
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