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By : Stormborn Apostle
  • From Stormborn Apostle on August 31, 2007
    I hate myself for the ending the chapter like that. :-(

    The next chapter will...hopefully...be less sad than this one.
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  • From Bishonen on August 31, 2007
    I hate you now i actually felt like a person at the end it made me want to cry the next chapter had better be a lot happier thaan this one.

    With Love, Imasuky Lomae
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  • From Stormborn Apostle on August 31, 2007
    CrazyIvan---Well, I figure that if our world uses terms like gay, homo, queer, and fag as insults...being the result of religious and 'moral' bigotry...the Jirachian-dominated culture would use terms like Pokemon-fucker and such, as, to them, it's the equivalent. Bastard Jirachians...

    Black Whole---I so totally did not want to end this chapter on a depressing note, but my muse...she always has her gun to my head. I've had the idea of Slash and Kirlia getting harassed like this, and Kirlia's reaction of vowing to keep her feelings a secret for Slash's sake, in my head for a long time...and while I originally wanted to end this chapter with the glance at Team Aqua, my muse insisted I do that scene now.

    Kinda depressing...especially when I have to tell everyone that things are going to get worse...but don't worry. Those two kids got bright heads on them...I can't promise they'll live happily ever after, but I can promise that they'll do the best they can.

    Luminous Dark---When I read over chapter 11 and was giving it a basic proofread, I was surprised that this one was so good. I wrote the last 4500-odd words in one sitting (muse was in fucking overdrive), so I thought it'd be kinda shoddy...but nope, it turned out pretty swell. :-D

    I can't say when the next chapter will be...I haven't started putting together the detailed plots for the next couple of them yet...but hopefully it won't be TOO long. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Luminous Dark on August 30, 2007
    Chapter 11 kicked alot of ass for sure .. im becoming a steady reader now to see what happens next

    luff it alot +1
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  • From ANON - Black Whole on August 30, 2007
    As always Slash, your work never ceases to amaze me. How you write such material is beyond me. I loved this, though. Simply put, it was awsome. The last section was the best though. I'll continue to wait patiently for your updates! :D
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  • From ANON - CrazyIvan(Again) on August 30, 2007
    Also, I noticed when you replied to my review dealing with the sunny day thing, you included (HolyMan) after CrazyIvan. Just call me CrazyIvan, I generaly put things in parenthesis just to be funny, or an ass hole, it usualy never means anything, so just CrazyIvan if you would.
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  • From ANON - CrazyIvan(notloggedin) on August 30, 2007
    Well that was certainly interesting.
    Pokefucker, as a common insult? Like motherfucker? Huh, fair enough I'll buy it.
    Nice little training notes, and training, more mysterious plots unfolding, combat palming and the like.

    So, untill next time, semper phi, carry on...
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  • From Stormborn Apostle on August 30, 2007
    Glad you liked the chapter and the pic, heh. :3

    If I could draw well, I'd be making some illustrations of the dream sequence. ;-)
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  • From Stormborn Apostle on August 29, 2007
    Also, update will be soon...up to 3500 words in the next chapter, and still going.
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  • From Stormborn Apostle on August 29, 2007
    Heh, yeah...both here and on Newgrounds, I try to always respond to ALL reviews. A lot of high-profile people end up forgetting about the fans, seeing them only as one big blob of people, and so not replying to them...and I don't wanna be like that, heh.

    Also, don't worry about being drunk and writing, lol...a few nights ago I got drunk and ended up spamming people's Myspaces with Michael Bolton lyrics. :-/
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  • From ANON - Fluffy_Lover on August 29, 2007
    Holy ****!

    ***mental note: don't post reviews whne you just woke up , specially if you are slightly drunk***

    Sorry for the typos man =(

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  • From ANON - Fluffy_Lover on August 29, 2007
    "...half of the reviews are me responding "
    So waht? That shows that you give attention to your readers and that's very good. SOme of us even post mor ethan once , becaus eyou are fun to talk to . YOu've got 200 reviews and you deserve it *thumbs up*
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    Now update Godamnit ;P
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  • From Stormborn Apostle on August 27, 2007
    I will, heh.

    Also, 200 reviews! Freakin' sweet, even if half of them are me replying to people! :-D
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  • From Bishonen on August 27, 2007
    Update soon.

    With Love, Imasuky Lomae

    P.S. 200th Review
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  • From Stormborn Apostle on August 27, 2007
    It's gonna get cuter, heh. Glad you enjoy it!

    NOTE TO ALL READERS: I planned to update last week, but argh, I could not. If anyone is surprised by my lack of meeting the deadline, you haven't known me very long. XD

    UPDATE WILL OCCUR IN THE NEXT FEW DAYS, I SWEAR
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