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Reviews for Sinners

By : Stormborn Apostle
  • From sillyneko345 on August 27, 2007
    Aww, they are both so bashful! You do a great job keeping things moving at a nice, relaxed, natural pace. But you don't let it get boring, either. Luvs it!
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  • From Stormborn Apostle on August 21, 2007
    Heh, glad you like it. I'm not very good with PWP, so I usually avoid it, lol. There will be sex, sex, and more sex in this story eventually, but obviously the plot will always be the focus of this story.

    Most of the time. XD

    Update should happen before the week is over.
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  • From ANON - someone on August 21, 2007
    One word....genious. It has been long since I have seen a fanfic written so...perfectly. It seems that all fanfiction is these days is sex,sex,and more sex. You sir are a beacon of light. A single shining ray of hope. Update soon before I go insane with anticipation!
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  • From Stormborn Apostle on August 21, 2007
    LOL you all think this is sexual tension? Man, when Kirlia evolves, you guys are gonna go nuts. :-P

    Yeah, in regards to the dream, they both definitely helped create it. Kirlia's already infatuated with her trainer, and Slash is starting to have more...untrainer-ly feelings towards her. We've seen how Kirlia feels about him; the next chapter will give you a glimpse into Slash's feelings, heh.

    By the way, the strength of their bond is going to increase significantly as time goes on. With Ralts, Slash could only get basic feelings and understand her in a vague sort of way. With Kirlia, she can directly communicate with Slash's mind, and emotions and the like can be sent through the bond both ways. As she gets stronger and closer to evolution, the bond is becoming so pervasive that the two are losing their ability to keep their own thoughts and emotions private. And when she DOES evolve into Gardevoir...

    Well, you'll all see. :-D
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  • From ANON - Angel on August 21, 2007
    SpankMonkey1_69@hotmail.com

    Damn. You really have an innate desire to just kill your fans with all this sexual tension don't you? I for one, think this should definitely help keep any viewers desperate for some Slash/Kirlia action sedated for awhile at least. Congrats.
    As for who really dreamt it, I have a feeling that they both may have had a hand in that dream/fantasy. Their minds are connected after all. Wouldn't it make at least a little sense that perhaps the closeness of one-another may have connected their minds even more so during their sleep? Or am I just being naive? (Probably some fusion of the two I'm sure.)

    Great-freakin job you genius you. Take care
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  • From Stormborn Apostle on August 20, 2007
    It'll only be getting more strange as things progress, heh.

    Yeah, I know about a lot of the grammatical problems. This story, and all my stories on AFF, are currently first drafts. I do a visual spelling check before I upload it, but that's all. Plus I type my stories in Notepad, not a real word processor, so I miss a lot.

    Eventually, I'll probably go ahead and proof all the chapters in one sitting.
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  • From ANON - Fiasco on August 20, 2007
    It's..... strange but good. REALLY strange, but equally good. *never crossed her mind to think about a pokemon and a person* Even well-written... Few grammar problems, but hey, who doesn't have those?
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  • From Stormborn Apostle on August 14, 2007
    I KNOW YOU, lol

    Very soon. I've only got three things to do today:

    1) Make my Clock Mask for Clock Day!
    2) Make a short flash for Clock Day!
    3) Type up my story!

    I've already got a good chunk of the next chapter written, so either today or the day after Clock Day. ^_^
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  • From ANON - ILC on August 14, 2007
    Slash this is an awesome story when you going to continue it? ell hopefully soon cause i would like to know how the story progresses from that dream onward.
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  • From Stormborn Apostle on August 13, 2007
    SHHHHH

    If anyone sees this review...

    (I AM WRITING CHAPTER 11 RIGHT FUCKING NOW, AT 1600 WORDS AND RISING)

    KEEP IT A SECRET DAMMIT :-D

    ♥
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  • From Stormborn Apostle on August 11, 2007
    I think I might just do that soon. I'm only about 4000 words from completing my Golden Sun oneshot, and since the next chapter of Sinners is developing quickly in my head, I'll probably get it down before it leaves my mind, heh.
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  • From Distantskyking on August 11, 2007
    oh yes! you really need to update this soon.
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  • From Stormborn Apostle on August 09, 2007
    Glad you liked it, and I enjoyed writing it. I love writing fluff... :-D
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 09, 2007
    Nice to see an update. Loved the *shared* dream sequence and the end of chapter 5. Great fluff.
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  • From Stormborn Apostle on August 08, 2007
    Bren---Me either, heh. Right now I'm about halfway through a Golden Sun one-shot story, and then we'll see where my muse takes me. ^_^

    Anon---I'm ALWAYS tortured in my writing, because sometimes I really WANT to do a story, but my muse demands I do something else. My muse, she doesn't suggest, she fucking pulls a gun on me and TELLS me what to write, heh.

    NS---Glad you liked it...I did, too. I'm starting to plan the next chapter's plot, and I think there's gonna be a good deal of fluff in it. :-D
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