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Reviews for Sinners

By : Stormborn Apostle
  • From ANON - TicTac on July 01, 2007
    I hear you, Ash is a grade A twit. I really like your fic so far, please update soon.
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  • From Stormborn Apostle on June 28, 2007
    Glad you enjoy, and yes, I shall endeavor to keep it up, heh.
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  • From Zeroh on June 28, 2007
    Wow. Fics like these are hard to find! So happy to see someone else giving the pkmn world a more -shall we say- brutal outlook? The way you describe the battles is intense! Whatever you're doing it's great, Keep up the awesome work. X3
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  • From Stormborn Apostle on June 28, 2007
    ShadowScar---Glad you enjoy, update is near at hand.

    Bonz---Indeed.
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  • From ANON - Bonz on June 28, 2007
    Neat.
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  • From ANON - ShadowScar on June 28, 2007
    Cool story so far, keep it up man!
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  • From Stormborn Apostle on June 26, 2007
    anuja---Glad you enjoy. Heh, as for the lemony parts...when I was first inspired to write about a human/Gardevoir relationship, I just let myself start typing and wrote a 5000 word lemon. But when I looked it over, I wasn't really happy with it...the emotional feel just wasn't there. So I scrapped it and re-wrote it, making the characters younger and putting them into a multi-chapter new world.

    I'm a fan of very long, many-chapter stories, and believe me when I say this one will be one of those, heh.

    As for WHEN the lemon will come...well, I still got several chapters before Kirlia evolves, and it's not like Slash and Gardevoir are going to go at it the second she evolves, heh. But it'll happen...eventually. :-P

    FluffyLover---I tried reformating my computer when the problem first showed up...didn't work. Bah.

    Kirlia will suffer...Slash will suffer...hell, lots of people will suffer. But of course, this isn't a purely dark fic...there will be plenty of fluff to balance it out.

    That's not to say that the ending (however far off it is) is going to be a happy one, oh no. When it comes to really long stories, I force myself to ignore what I WANT, and focus on what I feel the story NEEDS. So...well, heh, that's a long way down the road, so I doubt I need to worry about it now. :-P

    DizzyRye---Heh, I allow anonymous reviews too, so if ever you're too lazy to sign in but want to review, just pop me one like that. ^_^

    Next chapter is progressing nicely. I estimate completion either today or tomorrow...and certainly no later than this week.
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  • From DizzyRye on June 26, 2007
    I think the fact that I enjoyed your story enough that I actually bothered logging in so I can review is proof enough, but I'll say it anyways. Your story is awesome, I've really enjoyed reading it. I look forward to the continued development of Slash and Kirlia. How soon do you think you'll be posting the next installment?
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 26, 2007
    My computer got your curse Slash , I had to reformat it =( Now it's fine again .
    It' good when a nice job like yours get recognized properly, that's why you are receiving such a large amount of reviews.
    Aw Kirlia will suffer? Too bad =( .....Actually I like it . Drama and dark moments only makes the fluffy parts better .

    Again , can't wait for the next update , but take your time. Your other fics are good as well and I recomened them to everyone reviewing Sinners ^^

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  • From milk on June 26, 2007
    Man, this is so good. You did a great job of fleshing out the game's world and making it real. Your style is smooth and easy but not pedantic and I like it. Chapter 9 come soon please! (Also waiting for the lemon part to come in but shhhhhh)
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  • From Stormborn Apostle on June 25, 2007
    Yes, my world is going to be much, much darker than the anime and the games. What has been seen so far, while a bit more gritty than the 'real' Pokemon world, really hasn't delved into the dark heart of my story yet.

    There's going to be some very angsty parts before and after the relationship fully develops...honestly, at this point the sex isn't even in the outline yet (hell, I haven't even planned past Kirlia's evolution into Gardevoir), and the fact that I'm still getting such a large-scale response to Sinners is honestly a little surprising to me. A very welcome surprise, though, heh.

    Glad you're enjoying, and there's more to come soon!
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  • From ANON - Neo on June 25, 2007
    I must say, this is one of the better pokemon fics on this site, and I look forward to more from you! I'm enjoying the "other" side of the pokemon world, the darker side that we never get to see.
    I also think you are developing the relationship between Kirila and Slash well. Actually building instead of a WHAMBAMOMGSEX kind of story. ^^;
    Good job and I hope to see more of this soon!
    ~Neo
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  • From Stormborn Apostle on June 23, 2007
    The next chapter is coming along fine, thankfully. I'm looking forward to getting through the next couple so I can get to some fuzziness, which is something I love to write, hehe.

    Glad you're enjoying!
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  • From ANON - Angel on June 22, 2007
    Very cool. Glad you found the inspiration you needed to finish this chapter. (Though I guess maybe you didn't find the inspiration you needed and just finished this chapter without it). Either way, I'm glad you uploaded it. It was definitely the best part of my day (and no, not just because my day pretty much sucked ass). Not much else to say except, like the chapters prior to this, I thouroughly enjoyed it. Hope your able to get your nexr chapter down without having as much trouble.

    And yes. Any competent trainer could have taken out those Magma grunts. Meaning there's no way Ash and his (supposed to be 21 but is actually 15 now) brain could have handeled it. Take care.
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  • From Stormborn Apostle on June 22, 2007
    You're going to see another one soon! Although once I finish the three Flame and Thunder chapters, I think I'm going to add a chapter to all my other incomplete stories before I go back to Sinners...I've neglected those stories even more than this one. :-(
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