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Reviews for Sinners

By : Stormborn Apostle
  • From Stormborn Apostle on June 22, 2007
    Yep, and the deaths in this story have only begun.

    I've always found the various crime syndicates in the series to be very...wussy. I mean, c'mon. If you're going for world domination, or trying to flood/fill in the world, you gotta be in it all the way!

    If Jessie and James had just offed the brat the first time they got him in a hole or something...well, I think they'd be a lot happier (as would I).

    This story is going to be very...epic, in terms of the events. The romance will be at the heart of it, of course, but as the true motivations for all those involved becomes more clear...things will turn decidedly more sinister. And our poor heroes...and many innocent people...may find themselves in the crossfire.

    In any case, glad you enjoyed, and the story shall continue soon! :-D
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  • From sillyneko345 on June 22, 2007
    I seriously get the chills every time you kill someone, just because it's so "what might actually happen in real life" and not the sugary-sweet Pokemon everybody's used to. And I love it. Um, not that I'm *happy* the poor little nurse dies, you understand, but... well, I'm sure you know of what I speak ^^;

    Excellent update! I just adore your battle scenes and I can't wait to see what Slash and co. will do to get out of this!
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  • From Stormborn Apostle on June 22, 2007
    anonymous---Glad you enjoyed, expect more in the near future.

    nemo---There's a difference between being a tactical genius and knowing what types are immune to what. I mean, what the hell is required to get your Pokemon certification? Surely there must be SOME basic knowledge involved.

    I also distinctly recall Ash attempting to use an electric attack on a Phanpy, as well; if he doesn't know his basic type alignments by the time second-gen Pokemon were introduced, he's never going to learn them.

    Of course, half the time the anime lets the electric attacks work (such as in the battle with Brock's Onix...that sprinkler bullshit just doesn't fly)...so, to be blunt, to hell with the anime. Everyone I've ever seen in it epic fails.

    But in any case, glad you enjoy the story. But as for Ash, he will not show up in this story at all. If you want, read "Liek use thundershock okay", which I suppose can be considered to be a companion piece for Sinners. XD

    NS---Heheheh. Expect the cliffhanger to be resolved soon...although also expect more in the future. :-D
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  • From ANON - NS on June 21, 2007
    Gods damn it! I hate it when people leave off at cliffhangers!!!
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  • From ANON - nemo on June 21, 2007
    love the story, dont love the afer comment, you know ash was just a starter at that time, he wouldn't know much about pokemon he's 10 for crying out loud, if you know that much, you'd also know that ash was learning everything froma pokedex or random ppl as comes along. also ash was just begginning, if ash started out as a super tactical genius, there honestly would be no point in pokemon being a kid's show, would kill the drama of him getting better as he goes along his journey, and more or less, the trainer being a friggen genius only happens in fics.
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  • From ANON - anonymous on June 21, 2007
    I just discovered this today, but I found it a very good read. I look foward to more.
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  • From Stormborn Apostle on June 21, 2007
    Imasuky Lomae---Heh, yeah. 'Tis rather sexy.

    StarPika555---INDEED, another cliffhanger! :-D

    I've seen much more evil cliffies, though. In the Star Wars fic Forbidden, there's one in the middle of a sex scene. :-O

    Next chapter is about 20% complete at this time (1635 CST, 21/6/07), so...it's going good. :-D
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  • From Bishonen on June 21, 2007
    Just looked up the pic that was pretty good I can see how it gave you....Ideas

    With Love;Imasuky Lomae
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  • From Stormborn Apostle on June 21, 2007
    Imasuky Lomae---I assure you, I will finish every story I start. It may take a while...Sinners is going to be a very, very long story, as are a few of my other works. But I will never completely abandon any story.

    FluffyLover---Heh, I'm looking forward to getting back to fluffy-ness and cuteness. The story will have its very cute moments...and its very dark moments. I also have a rather sad idea in mind for later...poor lil Kirlia.

    As for the villains...oh yes. The anime fails because, other than Ash's tremendous suck-age, you don't have a threatening enemy force. HAY GUYZ LETS STEAL PIKACHU! SHALL WE DIG A WHOLE OR CROSS-DRESS THIS TIME? MAYBE A GIANT ROBOT LOLOLOL damn it pisses me off.

    Heh, as for my inspiration...the idea of a human and a Gardevoir going at it came from a very sexy pic of Gardevoir and Gallade that I saw on deviantart (which can be seen at http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/48112587)...despite there not being a human in the pic, it still got my creative juices flowing (among other things...er...).

    But as for the story itself...that all comes from trees and ramen and drinking and the like, heh.

    The next chapter will likely be out in the next couple days...I'm on a roll and I don't want to stop, heh.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 21, 2007
    Oh you were drunk too? This keeps getting better and better lol.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 21, 2007
    Argh Slash! You had to end it in a cliffy ! You are so evil. That's why I like your style ;P

    Nice chapter, even though there was no fluffyness on it. I can sense some angst coming, maybe a tragedy... As always , I can't wait for the next chapter. This story is quite addictive , because I believe that it is what the pokémon games should be , with real badass villains .

    Even though I'm eager to read the next chapter , please take your time writing it. Inspiration is the key for an author and nothing could be worse for the fic than a rushed chapter without the magic that the other chapters have. Just ....don't make me wait so long again!

    Hm you said that the inspiration for this fic was a doujinshi about gardevoir that you read late at night , but now you said that many of your fic ideas come when you are on the top of a tree...Do you have a treehouse with a laptop or something like
    that ? I doubt it , but it's interesting to know that you like to spend time thinking on teh top of a tree ^^ I just hope that you don't get hurt again.

    Anyway , see ya next time , happy writing ;) And remember ...I'm watching you . Closely.
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  • From Bishonen on June 21, 2007
    You better mean it this is a great story and I'd hate to see it end up like just about everything by WotanAnubis who never finishes anything at all

    With Love; Imasuky Lomae
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  • From Stormborn Apostle on June 21, 2007
    Black Whole---Yeah, I'm surprised by the amount of views/reviews/e-mails, etc that I've gotten from this story, heh. As for the spelling and grammar...I was an International Baccalaureate nerd, so...

    I actually don't like writing "action" stuff as much as dialogue and character development. I'm looking forward more to some later chapters than the next one, but the next one has to be written first, so...yep.

    Imasuky Lomae---I know, I'm an evil person for the cliffhanger...but the chapter was running pretty long, and I promised I'd have the chapter out today, so I stopped where it was. At least the wait for the next chapter won't be anywhere near as long! :-D

    (I know I said that last time, too, but this time I mean it!)
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  • From Bishonen on June 21, 2007
    Oh man cliff hanger that is so not right but that was an awsome update hope the next one doesnt take so long.

    With love;Imasuky Lomae
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  • From ANON - Black Whole on June 21, 2007
    Very nice story you have going on here. I noticed it before, but hadn't thought to read it. What just recently caught my attention were the reviews. This story has a little over 5000 hits, but already has about 100 reviews. Even though half of them are you responding, 50 reviews is an impressive amount. My own story has 24000 hits last time i checked, but only about 27 reviews, sadly. Anyway, this story is amazing. Perfect spelling and grammar. The plot is incredible. The connection between Slash and Kirlia is amazing. I have seen a few other stories where trainers form a bond with thier Pokemon, but nothing like this. I truely do love this story, and eagerly await updates. Oh, and next time, I will be logged in.

    -+-Black Whole-+-
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