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By : Stormborn Apostle
  • From Stormborn Apostle on June 21, 2007
    Ash can be friends with Pikachu all he wants, but it's never going to beat a Donphan of equivalent level (I recall the moron trying to Thundershock a Phanpy at one point, though, so he'd likely be dumb enough to try...)

    As for part three of this chapter...soon. Which, for me, could mean days or months...but I think days this time. :-D
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  • From UnholyJustice on June 20, 2007
    Haha no problem man its an honor. That chapter was pretty good I figured it would end soon considering a sweet battle was about to happen. And ya ash is a dumbshit and made me wanna kill him. I played like every pokemon game and when i started watching the series I wanted to cry. Use thundershock pikachu! I'm sure our friendship will make it strong!!! dumbshit. Who has a pikachu anyway they suck balls.

    Ash is everything a trainer should not be. Again thanks for getting rid of those annoying stupid evil stereotypes.

    Do I even DARE ask when the next SEGMENT of the chapter will be up?
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  • From Stormborn Apostle on June 20, 2007
    KABLAM

    Also, thanks for being my 100th review (even though about half of them are just me responding to people, heh).
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  • From UnholyJustice on June 20, 2007
    Hahaha if only your flashes were as good as your writing.
    I enjoy reading this a lot more than watching your character jack off to young Asian girls. (my eyes bled)

    Its now 10:18 East coast time.
    Good luck!
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  • From Stormborn Apostle on June 20, 2007
    It's almost done, rofl. I suck at precise estimations...within an hour (by 2200 CST).

    As for my fapfapfap flashes and such...those come from my more bored/drunk moments, heh.

    Been a while since I made a flash, too...
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  • From UnholyJustice on June 20, 2007
    Hahahaha well buddy the sun is down in PA and your on the same coast.
    I see no new chapters!!
    As for sitting in a tree please tell me you dont get those insane fap fap fap flash ideas in that tree.
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  • From Stormborn Apostle on June 20, 2007
    Daemon---My arm is fine, yeah. As for why I was up in the tree...I'm a very anti-social person. When I want to have fun, I don't go to the mall, or go clubbing, or hop on over to a bar. I go outside. My house is near a moderately-large piece of forest, so I wander around in the fields and trees, heh. I have a favorite tree right by a creek that I like to sit in to just relax...a lot of story ideas have come to me while I was up there, too...

    I do have one other thing to say...the summer won't be done before this story is updated.

    In fact, this DAY won't be done before this story is updated. :-O

    Yeah, you heard me: before the sun goes down (on Pensacola, Florida, anyway), this story will have a new chapter! I just woke up and I am in the mood to write!

    Reylus---Thank you, glad you enjoy. More to come soon. :-D
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 20, 2007
    Keep it up man I love the story
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  • From UnholyJustice on June 20, 2007
    Nevermind about the arm, didnt read the reviews before posting that last one.
    Isnt there any rich people on this website that can give slash some money for a SLIGHTLY better piece of shit computer?
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  • From UnholyJustice on June 20, 2007
    Dude summer will be over by the time you get the next chapter up! This is the pits!!!
    By the way hows the arm? and what the hell were you doing chilling in a tree? >.
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  • From Stormborn Apostle on June 19, 2007
    Lazy genius author?

    That's possibly the best (and most accurate) title I've ever gotten. :-D

    I know I'm a terrible lazy bum, but...it shall happen.

    SOON, MY CHILDREN, SOON.
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  • From Bishonen on June 19, 2007
    I second what Acekial said

    With Love;Imasuky Lomae
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  • From ANON - Acekial on June 19, 2007
    Goddammit, why dont you update already, its been about a month, and this is a really engaging story. So listen "Slash", get of your lazy genius author ass, and get back to work on the good story!
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  • From Stormborn Apostle on June 11, 2007
    Hehe, yes, an update approaches. Won't say how long I think it'll be (because whenever I proclaim deadlines, something always seems to come up to distract me), but...soon.

    I COULD bump this story up to the top by editing anything in it. Hell, I could just delete/re-add a comma or something, and it'd be back up at the top. But I don't wanna do that...authors who are actually writing/updating deserve the increased attention that comes with being atop page one, lol.

    In any case, mine will be back up there...with a new chapter...soon enough. :-D
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 11, 2007
    Damn Slash you're so evil =P I can't wait for the next update ;)

    I thought that posting new reviews would bump this fic up top the first page , because there were some fics on Love Hina that were on the bottom of the first page one day , then on teh next day they were on teh top just because they had gotten new reviews.....Hm maybe they author remade a chapter or something.

    Argh my english is disgusting @_@ I hope you can understand me.
    Anwyay , I'm watching you Slash . Even-while-you-sleep. You'd better post the next chapter SOON, or else.....*evil laugh*
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