Click Here!

Reviews for Sinners

By : Stormborn Apostle
  • From Bishonen on April 24, 2007
    Well it might have aken a long time but this chapter did help the plot along hope the next update is soon

    With Love; Imasuky Lomae
    Report Review

  • From Stormborn Apostle on April 24, 2007
    Yep, he's got a Corphish, heh.

    The second half of this chapter should be up within a day. Typing it out right now...but from time to time I get distracted, heh.

    I'll try to balance my Newgrounds stuff with my stories a bit better, so I'll be able to back-and-forth between them more easily, lol.
    Report Review

  • From UnholyJustice on April 24, 2007
    Great man!! Hope your newgrounds endeavors come along speedily so you can continue! Has slash taken the time to pick up a water type pokemon yet?

    Anyway its not bad so far, way to leave on a cliffhanger..
    Report Review

  • From Stormborn Apostle on April 23, 2007
    Chapter is about halfway done, working right now, heh.

    Glad you're enjoying!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Enigma on April 23, 2007
    Wow...you've got a good fanfic going here. I'm expecting the next chapter ON YOUR OWN TIME! :) Good luck taking your time with the next one ;)
    Report Review

  • From Stormborn Apostle on April 22, 2007
    Writing it as we speak...I may break my promise and take a day or two though. :'(
    Report Review

  • From UnholyJustice on April 22, 2007
    Uh oh!!! It's 9:30 you have but 2 hours and 30 minutes to fulfill your promise!!!
    The fate of the world lies in your hands. haha
    Report Review

  • From Stormborn Apostle on April 20, 2007
    I'm so sorry. :'(

    The update WILL HAPPEN BEFORE THIS WEEKEND IS OVER, I promise.

    My flash project is near-completed, and I intend to update Sinners before beginning any others.
    Report Review

  • From UnholyJustice on April 19, 2007
    *sniff* *sniff* this story will never be completed :( It's been a week or so since the last ACTUAL chapter!!!

    *huddles in corner and cries self to sleep*

    haha just checkin up on the progress of the story.
    Report Review

  • From Stormborn Apostle on April 15, 2007
    Thank you very much, and I PROMISE PROMISE PROMISE I will update soon...I'm fighting my way through a mess of work on another site and as soon as it's done, I'll return to Sinners. ^_^
    Report Review

  • From DarkMaiden on April 15, 2007
    Hi, I'm really loving your story so far, please keep up the good work ^_~
    Report Review

  • From Stormborn Apostle on April 12, 2007
    Glad you enjoy! Should be out in the next couple days, as long as I don't get too distracted by Newgrounds...heh.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Anon on April 12, 2007
    Hey Slash. Loyal reader of your fic thus far. Keep up the good work. I'm impatiently awaiting your future updates! ;)
    Report Review

  • From Stormborn Apostle on April 11, 2007
    Heh, glad you enjoy it. Just remember that this is a stylized version of Hoenn and not totally true to the games (which I take as my primary source, as I rarely watch the anime), so there may significant differences between this story and the primary canon.

    However, feel free to bring up any continuity errors and such...I make them every so often, as I write without the use of an outline, and many times I find myself re-editing chapters to fix little mistakes I've made (like in this most recent chapter, I had Growlithe 'guessing' what Kirlia just told him, and had to re-work the dialogue).
    Report Review

  • From Naxuro on April 11, 2007
    Great story Slash Firestorm, I'm a Hardcore Pokémon Fanboy and I have to say that this is one Great Story, having said that I noticed alot of errors within the story, but you said "if I make any errors, consider them to be artistic license" so I'm not gonna bust your chops for them, keep up the good work.
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!